Squee and Spleen story - not done

Squee and Spleen story - not done

Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 2:08 am

Cast (main)
Squee - goblin who looks like a rocker (your right in the portrait)
Spleen - tinker-like goblin with his friend (your left in the portrait)

When the second war ended, Squee was born as a miner. Spleen was 2 years old already when Squee was born and already training with the Orcish voodoo priests in Kalimdor, with his friend. After over 20 years, Squee and Spleen met in the forests of Kalimdor, these three became partners and goes back to the voodoo priests for more training.

With Squee's talent of making mines and Spleen and his friend of making traps that immobilizes their unwary prey, they also won't fear death, as they could kill themselves and their enemies with them.

After years and ending the invasion of the Burning Legion, the sentinel hired these three to help defend the world tree. Even the other heroes of the sentinel are uncertain of these three will help defend the world tree. When Squee saw a goblin with bunch of mechanical stuff in his back, they went to the goblin and ask for questions. The goblin enhanced Squee and Spleen's mine's effectiveness and these three looked for more. Then they found another goblin, but this time he had an ogre with him and the three ask the goblin if he can even improve the mine's capabilities. The goblin gave the three an unstable concoction that they can place on their statis trap.

After some months, Spleen and his friend saw one of the voodoo priests, they tried to talk to him but instead, he throws a cask and chases the goblin techies. Being clever as they are, they couldn't be seen in the corrupted forest and the voodoo priest goes to the frozen throne, making the three paralyzed for a few minuites. After 5 minuites, they ran back to the sentinel.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:23 am

Finish it now....make it fast...*ZzZzZ*
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 1:09 am

its patchy be more descripiptive they trained with priests and thn u jump to a new part of the story its so random i had a hard time keeping up look to the pudge story or kardel story for an example of how to be descriptive.

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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:50 am

Ya. Thats right. I am with firesky.
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:03 pm

can i make my own story of the goblin techies? i mean it's a free world, ayt?

and i am the great TECHIEMEISTER!!
i would love to make them a story/...

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