"Fall of Damnation2: Eyes of the Bloodseeker"

"Fall of Damnation2: Eyes of the Bloodseeker"

Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 11:01 am

"The Fall of Damnation2: Eyes of the Bloodseeker"

-PROLOGUE-

The night was very clear though it was anguished and disturbed by the Scourge army heading back south. Ruins are what's left of Agrimar. Almost all bodies are consumed and some that are left are speared unto pikes so to signal as an emerging threat. Agrimar's vast plains now seems so small, giving a sense of death and defeat.

Anyway, the moon was much more clearer in the forests, the trees gave a decent clearing of light. The shallow breeze was very gentle, carrying dead leaves along it's path.

But it won't be gentle for too long...

-CHAPTER 1-

The figure turned around to see his enemy,

"You!", said the figure. He then looked to the direction of the Scourge army.

The enemy revealed himself by the trees' shadows. He walked right below the bright moonlight.

"Yes...Thought you killed me, eh? Gondar?" he looked at where his opponent was looking. "Don't bother, I haven't told any of the Scourge. It's between you and me."

"I thought I already killed the dog that you are, Strgwyr." Gondar looked sharply at him. "This time I'll make sure you'd expire right infront of my eyes. For the death of my Draenei brethren!" He shot a few shurikens. Strgwyr easily evades.

"You know those things don't scratch me at all. Besides, I'm better than ever!", says Strgwyr. He charged rapidly,

Strgwyr gave one rapid slash that destroyed one of Gondar's sickle. He was surprised. He shot more shurikens to put Strgwyr back. Gondar hid the shadows.

"The bounty hunter ye are, show yourself!", shouted Strgwyr.

Gondar gave one precise slash to Strgwyr's back. Strgwyr gave random attacks which Gondar evaded and countered with another slash to Strgwyr's chest. Strgwyr stumbled back.

-CHAPTER 2-

"RAWWR!", Strgwyr's eyes turned bright shining red. Gondar noticed him being faster. He charged again and suddenly disappeared right infront of Gondar's eyes.

"Hello.", said Strgwyr from behind. Gondar was struck by how fast his opponent was now. Strgwyr gave an energized slash at Gondar's back that it made it bleed so awfully. He felt like he was struck ten times. He then turned and but saw nothing. He turned his look everywhere but none in sight. Strygwr charged again.

Gondar blocked the first few attacks which tore his one sickle apart. He gave a quick kick to where Strgwyr was open. Strgwyr was sent back but he regained his stance.

"Yer weapons are gone!", Strgwyr charged again. "Don't be so sure.", Gondar used his shurikens as his melee weapon.

The same sequence happened until Gondar was not able to withstand exhaustion. He tried to hold his position. He balanced himself by the trees. Strgwyr was undeniably very much wounded but he seemed to ignore it. Gondar on the other hand was bleeding furiously from the back.

He had to act quickly...

-CHAPTER 3-

Strgwyr charged again. Gondar kept evading. He couldn't get a clear shot at his opponent. His eyes are blurring. He was hit again in his abdomen. He retreated back to the trees.

"Yer becoming worthless, Gondar! Just like your Draenei pushovers!", said Strgwyr. Gondar kept his focus. He charged and made random attacks. Strgwyr blocked and gave Gondar a hit that made him spurt out blood. He staggered to his feet but Strgwyr kicked him right in his chest.

"You'll be dead even before the war will end. But it doesn't matter, the Scourge will win anyway.", Strgwyr said. "Why did you even join that Sentinel scum knowing that yer a bounty hunter?". Strgwyr neared Gondar.

"They are my friends. They help the Draenei free themselves from your clutches.", replied Gondar.

"That will kill you ya know.", said Strgwyr. Gonar noticed his aura becoming to fade. Strgwyr fell to his knees and tried to maintain poise. Gondar stood up and made his final attack.

Both sides charged with much speed. The outcome was even. Both were fataly wounded. Strgwyr fell down hard to the ground.

Gondar was still standing. His body kept shaking from exhaustion as he watched the Bloodseeker's eyes lose it's color.

He couldn't take anymore , Gondar thought. Though he too was fataly in the brink of death, he continued walking deeper into the forests.

The Sentinel must know of the Scourge army... , he thought again.

-EPILOGUE-

It was dawn and Gondar was now giving his best effort to continue walking. He suddenly saw someone after him. He fell down the ground in relief. The flowers softened his fall.

"Gondar! Your wounds--", Gondar stopped him.

"Rikimaru, my friend. I have bad news. The Scourge army is heading back south. Ezalor and Davion are dead.", said Gondar. He coughed blood.

"You need help, Gondar.", said Rikimaru. "Who did this to you?"

"No matter. I did my duty. You need to reach the camp and warn Purist *cough* about *cough* this.", said Gondar. His eyes now stared blankly into the bright blue sky. The sun had just risen above the horizon.

"Friend,", Rikimaru anguishly said. "Your death will be avenged!"

He ran west as fast as he could.
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 11:03 am

Hmm.nice one...
Continue it!

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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 11:22 am

cool and nice..
nice story.
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lol..wad is pokemon??

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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 11:57 am

Bloodseeker didnt seem to be strong at all....he seemed to be a bit weak.He couldnt kill Gondar....And he cant just end like this
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 11:57 am

Thanks Make sure you have read the first story:)
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 12:00 pm

NicE onE! part3!! part3!!! =P
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 12:12 pm

Yeah.Wonder what riki will do?
Will be a war?

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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 2:29 am

Nice Story...

Hmmm.... so there are 3 Sentinels down, 37 to go....

XD
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:18 am

Actually, I wasn't planning on featuring all of the heroes in the series. I was planning to end it on the 4th release
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:52 pm

Noooooooooooooooooooo. Not so soon. Please not so soon.
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