Thy Wraith - Bringer of the End

Thy Wraith - Bringer of the End

Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 7:19 pm

“A presence can be felt by those who have followed thy epic saga as told by the Dark Prophets. It is a presence that is synonymous with thy crumbling of time itself. Thus emerges a being so powerful that he can exist between both the land of thy living, and that of the dead. He goes by many names but is known to thy living only as Thy Wraith. He walks upon worlds forgotten, and descends from Heavens; fade into gray to witness thy death of all mortal things, so that he may guide thy departed upon thy path that they have chosen.” This legend has been handed down for many centuries; spoken only in hushed whispers. Now the legends shall come to be truth. The being known as Wraith has come. Though his presence is a sign of the apocolypse, the Sentinel will not argue with having him at thier side. It is believed that the Scougre awakened him from his eternal rest, and that the only way he can return to his slumber is to silence the Lich King's evil. Let us pray that this is all he's here for...



Primary: STR
Range: Melee
Move Speed : 305
Attack Speed : 1.49
Stats :
Str - 24 + 2.7
Agi - 16 + 2.1
Int - 15 + 1.4
HP regen - 0.97
MANA regen - 0.61
Starting HP - 606
Starting Mana - 193
Total Damage - 41 - 63
Total Armor - 2






The First Skill: Aura of the Departed

Thy Wraith is a gatherer of the souls of the recently dead. Naturally, they flock to him as they meave the mortal coil. With each soul collected, Thy Wraith grows more powerful.

Level 1: Allies that die close to Wraith surrender thier souls to him. giving him 15 bonus hp per soul. Maximum of 15 souls.
Level 2:Allies that die close to Wraith surrender thier souls to him. giving him 15 bonus hp per soul. Maximum of 30 souls.
Level 3:Allies that die close to Wraith surrender thier souls to him. giving him 15 bonus hp per soul. Maximum of 45 souls.
Level 4:Allies that die close to Wraith surrender thier souls to him. giving him 15 bonus hp per soul. Maximum of 60 souls.


The skill's AoE is 400.
Passive.


The Second Skill: Wraith Grasp

A liberator of souls, Thy Wraith can try to rip a heros soul from thier body. If his grasp kills them, He recovers hitpoints, and gains a brief boost to his power.

Level 1: Thy Wraith grabs an opponent, dealing 90 damage. If the target dies, Wraith recovers 5% of the target's maximum HP and gets a +3 to all stats for 20 seconds.
Level 2: Thy Wraith grabs an opponent, dealing 180 damage. If the target dies, Wraith recovers 15% of the target's maximum HP and gets a +7 to all stats for 20 seconds.
Level 3: Thy Wraith grabs an opponent, dealing 270 damage. If the target dies, Wraith recovers 25% of the target's maximum HP and gets a +11 to all stats for 20 seconds.
Level 4: Thy Wraith grabs an opponent, dealing 360 damage. If the target dies, Wraith recovers 35% of the target's maximum HP and gets a +15 to all stats for 20 seconds.

Mana Cost: 140
Cooldown: 30




The Third Skill: Rift Jump

Thy Wraith is a traveler of many world. To jump from one place to another in this world is mere child's play for him. Though, he is still likely to lose a few souls when he does.

Level 1: Teleports a distance of 800. Loses 6-9 souls with each jump. At the point he jumped from, all enemies in a 275 AoE will take 2 damage x your total number of souls.
Level 2: Teleports a distance of 1000. Loses 4-6 souls with each jump. At the point he jumped from, all enemies in a 275 AoE will take 4 damage x your total number of souls.
Level 3: Teleports a distance of 1200. Loses 2-4 souls with each jump. At the point he jumped from, all enemies in a 275 AoE will take 6 damage x your total number of souls.
Level 4: Teleports a distance of 1400. Loses 0-2 souls with each jump. At the point he jumped from, all enemies in a 275 AoE will take 8 damage x your total number of souls.

Can be cast if you don't have any souls, but no damage will be dealt.


Mana Cost: 100
Cooldown: 20


The Final Skill: Walk Into The Light

Thy Wraith finishes his business with his collected spirits, and guides them to thier final resting place. In doing so, he allows a bit of Heaven to leak into this world.

Level 1: Heaven's Light washes over an 800 AoE, Healing units for 10 hp for each soul that moves though and damaging enemies for 15 hp for every soul that passes though.
Level 2: Heaven's Light washes over an 800 AoE, Healing units for 20 hp for each soul that moves though and damaging enemies for 20 hp for every soul that passes though.
Level 3: Heaven's Light washes over an 800 AoE, Healing units for 30 hp for each soul that moves though and damaging enemies for 25 hp for every soul that passes though.

This is just like Nevermore's Requiem of Souls, but without the casting time. Since you lose your gathered souls by using this, a casting time would be a little stupid.


Mana Cost: 200/250/300
Cooldown: 200

Last edited by Bard Man on Wed Oct 29, 2008 7:03 am; edited 2 times in total

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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 7:46 am

ulti like death phropet?
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:28 am

No, no, no... The Death Prrophet's ult is a constant state no matter what her actions beforehand. This is more like Nevermore's Ult, only wth a healing factor.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 2:01 pm

Hmmmm..... not bad....

1st skill - Nice effect....... a great soul booster...... I like it....
2nd skill - 30 second cooldown with an extremely powerful effect would be IMBA..... lengthen cooldown.... but +8 to all stats is good..... why not make it 30....
3rd skill - Nice blink skill...... but he loses some souls...... maybe there should be a good effect like..... burrowstrike-like skill maybe..... upon awakening, damages everything in its path where thy wrath has passed. Damage depends on the soul x 3, excluding the lost souls....
4th skill - So uh..... last how many seconds????..... but I disagree with the cooldown..... even Nevermore's ulti isn't that long to finish...... 80 seconds methinks.....
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:35 am

Bard Man wasn't very clear with the Ult. Walk Into The Light is meant to be near instant-cast. Bard Man will try to be more clear with that. The reason there's only a +8 is because it seemed fair. Bard Man's original idea though, was to give him a +30 to STR for that same ammount of time. Bard Man shall consider adding a damage effect to Rift Jump. It could be a fun.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:03 am

y do u say ur self like is some1 else
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 10:44 am

Bard man is a robot in real life methinks....
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 1:34 pm

wat is methinks and wat language did u type in the joke forum
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 3:22 pm

I already said the meaning of methinks...... and the language I used there is called the "Filipino" language.....

Filipinos are supreme.....
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 11:03 pm

Bard Man knew a Filipino once. He stole Bard Man's cheeseburger and ran off. To this day, Bard Man does not trust Filipinos around his cheese burgers.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:27 am

Nice hero...


<-- filipino.. Onoz The Burger.. Oh nuthin...
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:09 am

@ Bard man

lol ....

@ flamedevilpj

lol i thought ur a filipino .. wat country are u from ?




FILIPINO rulez !! lol lol lol
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 12:00 pm

malaysia and im not malay ^^ chinese rule in malaysia ^^ malay suk
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:25 pm

Bard Man has finally gotten around to editing Thy Wraith. Bard Man increased the Stat boost for kills made with Wraith Grasp, added a damage effect to Rift Jump, and I added a bit of an explanation to Walk Into The Light.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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