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No imba, like it very much 66% [ 2 ]


Little imba, looks good 0% [ 0 ]


Imbalance!, Change pls 33% [ 1 ]

Lira - Pirate queen

Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:32 pm

Range: 100 | Move Speed: 305
Primary: AGI
Str: 17 + 1.8
Agi: 24 + 2.9
Int: 15 + 1.3
Damage: 51 - 59 |
HP: 473 | Mana: 195
HP Regen: 0.76 | Mana Regen: 0.61
Attack Speed: 1.35 | Armor: 3
Affiliation: Sentinel

Lira is a Famous Pirate of the seven seas, She has survive countless battles throught out the 10 years living w/ with her comrades. She has been very popular because of her domination when it comes to battleing. She have a lot of expensive items which she posses becuase of illegal smuggling, which she has been proffiting for a long time. Ever Since that she have alot of item, She finds the most strangest of all. A treasure box where you can be bought to a different dimension. She also had these experience where she was sucked up to it, she never thought that she would escape the dark realms of another world. After for some long time she can see this strange island where you can do anything you want, she decided to stay there becuase she tought she would not be able to return Not long after she loose consciousness and return to the normal world, unti know she still insist on finding what can be really find on that island.


Hero Skill 1 Exact Reward
Lira is famous, dangerous pirate that roams the seven seas for a long time, she has dominated a lot of battle, due to the fact that she is Lady. She deals great damage to the enemy if she has a more valuable item than her enemy, at the same time slows them for a short duration. If she has a less expensive weapon than Her enemies, she deals half of the damage. Range to cast is 600
Level 1 - Deals 100-150 Damage, slows by 20% that lasts for 2.5 seconds
Level 1 - Deals 200-250 Damage, slows by 24% that lasts for 2 seconds
Level 1 - Deals 300-350 Damage, slows by 27% that lasts for 3.5 seconds
Level 1 - Deals 400-450 Damage, slows by 30% that lasts for 4 seconds
Mana Cost: 100/110/120/130
Cooldown: 25 Seconds
Framework Throws a Treasure box at the Enemy, damage will then be shown, represented as gold numerals like when you sell items, then gold numerals appear.

Hero Skill 2 Noble's Popularity
Units gets easily swayed, due to Lira's valuable and expensive items. Gains An aura that Makes enemies Lose their
will to fight because of their greed to steal Lira's Money. The More expensive her most expensive item is, the greater the chance that unit will miss on their attack.
Level 1 - If most expensive item cost from 500-1000 gold, she gains 10% evasion rate.
Level 2 - If most expensive item cost from 1001-1999 gold, she gains 18% evasion rate.
Level 3 - If most expensive item cost from 2000-5799 gold, she gains 27% evasion rate.
Level 4 - If most expensive item cost from More than 5800 gold, she gains 35% evasion rate.
Mana Cost: n/a
Cooldown: n/a
Framework: gains the icon in ths status bar
Notes: Great Replacement for butterfly, by the way, it doesnt stack w/ butterfly, and note that you would probably
max this skill to 4 when you probably have an item that cost 5800gold or more.

Hero Skill 3 Contraband
Lira is banned from exporting goods from one place to another place because of illegal proffiting. She Gains a
relatively high amout of gold during Night time, at the same time spends less money when buying items
Level 1 - 10% Bonus Gold, 5% Discount
Level 2 - 19% Bonus Gold, 8% Discount
Level 3 - 27% Bonus Gold, 12% Discount
Level 4 - 34% Bonus Gold, 15% Discount
Cooldwon: n/a
Framework: gains this icon in the Status bar during the night.

Hero Skill 4 Treasure Island
Lira Sets up a powerful object at the gorund where in units that gets close in an aoe of 400 will automatically get suck in the treasure chest. Units that get caught in the Chest will be lost in sight for a few seconds, While they are in the Treasure box. Heroes that get caught in it, a point from their primary attribute will then be absorbed by lira, thus Boosting her primary attribute that lasts for 60 seconds. After the duration in the map, units will then be thrown out and gets stunned for a period of time. Range to cast is 600
Level 1 - Units will be gone for 3 seconds, 6 points of primary attribute, stuns the enemies for 2.5 seconds.
Level 2 - Units will be gone for 4 seconds, 8 points of primary attribute, stuns the enemies for 3 seconds.
Level 3 - Units will be gone for 5 seconds, 10 points of primary attribute, stuns the enemies for 3.5 seconds.
Mana Cost: 200/300/400
Cooldown: 140/120/100
Framework: A Bigger Treasure box is thrown in the AOE.
Notes: Can absorbed of at least 2 similar primary attributes of the heroes Meaning if there a 2 str type, then a bonus of 28 str will be recieved, creeps gets sucked to the treasure box.
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Last edited by AXCELACCEL on Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:06 am; edited 1 time in total

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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 11:58 pm

Dunno why, but the name is making Bard Man think of the pirate lady from FF2.


Anyway, the hero does look pretty balanced and the use of valuable items for boosts of power is certainly original, but the ULT seems a tad imba. After all, you take 14 points from thier main stat and it has a major stun. Bard Man thinks that you should nerf the stun a little. Then it might be ok.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:08 am

@ bard_man
I made changes to ultimate. It only absorbes up to 10 stats only, and stuns up to 3.5 seconds only.

Do you think its al ready enough?
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:39 am

Looks good.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 2:19 pm

althoug that it absorbs stas, ans stuns the enemy, i think its weak, should i add damage to it??
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 6:17 pm

Hmm...so she shops at night, has a skill to rival goblin's greed, and a discount to make for easy shopping...then she bobs and weaves hardcore because she has items that make your income look like chump change...and then to be really mean, she tag teams with slithice and something like this happens...

Scourge: OMG HERE THEY COME!!! EVERYONE COME MID!!!
Slithice: You're all getting sleepy...very sleepy...
Scourge: No we're not...Zzzz...Zzzz...
Scourge tower: WTF ARE YOU GUYS DOING?!?! WAKE UP!!! ARG!!!
Slithice: Well..thats one tower down.
Scourge: OMFG WHAT JUST HAPPENED? WE'LL GET YOU FOR THAT SLITHY!!!
Pandora, I mean Lira: You wanna look in my box?
Scourge: Umm...we're kinda busy here? Though it is a very shiny box..OMFG LET US OUT!!!
Scourge tower #2: omfg...G_G...my team was noob. AFKing.

So yea...overall good hero . A tiny bit imba, but nothing a quick nerf wouldn't solve. 3/5...actually...2/5 because I'm a ninja and we have to give pirates at least 1 score lower than they should get.

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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 12:43 am

haha never thought you are a ninja

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