Manojo Jolasho-Shadow Warrior

Manojo Jolasho-Shadow Warrior

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:43 am



Manojo Jolasho-Shadow Warrior
Range : 425| Movement Speed : 290
Primary : AGI
Str : 18 + 1.8 | Agi : 23 + 2.2 | Int : 16 + 1.2
Damage : 39-48 | HP : 443 | Mana : 190
HP Regen : 0.73 | Mana Regen : 0.91
Attack Speed : 1.36 | Armor : 3

Story :

A fabled warrior from Azeroth who is said to control the Shadows.People who saw him and survive say when you saw him he will uses the shadow to pierce through your heart,and rip you soul to make them his slaves and throws multiple spears at a blink of an eye.Legends tell that he cannot be seen during the night and during the day he can only be seen by the most powerful.
Skills :



Shadow Spear - Manojo uses the shadows to cover his spear to penetrate any enemy it passes.
Level 1 - Deals with 80 damage,and causes enemies to bleed that last 2.Bleeding damage 25 health per second.
Level 2 - Deals with 100 damage,and causes enemies to bleed that last 2.Bleeding damage 30 health per second.
Level 3 - Deals with 150 damage,and causes enemies to bleed that last 2.Bleeding damage 40 health per second.
Level 4 - Deals with 200 damage,and causes enemies to bleed that last 2.Bleeding damage 50 health per second.
Mana Cost: 155
Cooldown: 11



Shadow Wave - Creates dark wave that makes shadow replica from parts of the enemies soul.Demolishes 15% of enemies life.Replicas last 30 seconds.
Level 1 -Stuns enemies for 1 second.Replicas deals 15% of the original damage and takes 450% damage.
Level 2 -Stuns enemies for 1.2 second.Replicas deals 18% of the original damage and takes 400% damage.
Level 3 -Stuns enemies for 1.3 second.Replicas deals 23% of the original damage and takes 350% damage.
Level 4 -Stuns enemies for 1.4 second.Replicas deals 27% of the original damage and takes 300% damage.
Mana Cost : 175/200/225
Cooldown : 45 seconds.



Shadow Barrage -Manojo splits himself into 3 and make quick barrage and then get back into his original form.Causes enemies in the area to slow down by 6% for 2 seconds.Shadow Warriors will last as long as it takes to make one attack.
Level 1 -Deals with 15-20 damage with each shadow warrior.
Level 2 -Deals with 15-45 damage with each shadow warrior.
Level 3 -Deals with 15-60 damage with each shadow warrior.
Level 4 -Deals with 15-90 damage with each shadow warrior.
Mana Cost : 125/130/145/150
Cooldown : 30
Note : All buffs(even positive buffs) from Manojo will be removed when he activates this skill.



Secret of the Shadows -Causes Manojo to intensify his skills during the day or night and make himself move swiftly and invisible during the night.
Level 1 -Adds 5% extra damage to Shadow spear,Shadow Replicas deals with 5% more damage,5% to make a Shadow Warrior attack at full damage,movement speed and the attack speed also increases by 5% during the night.
Level 2 -Adds 10% extra damage to Shadow spear,Shadow Replicas deals with 8% more damage,7% to make a Shadow Warrior attack at full damage,movement speed and the attack speed also increases by 10% during the night.
Level 3 -Adds 20% extra damage to Shadow spear,Shadow Replicas deals with 15% more damage,13% to make a Shadow Warrior attack at full damage,movement speed and the attack speed also increases by 18% during the night.
Level 4 -Adds 25% extra damage to Shadow spear,Shadow Replicas deals with 25% more damage,25% to make a Shadow Warrior attack at full damage,movement speed and the attack speed also increases by 30% during the night.
Mana Cost :N/A
Cooldown :N/A
Note :Permanent invisibility will break when he attacks with 5 second fade time(He can be seen by his allies or buying the gems of true sight).

If you find something not original about the skills it's probably because of the ulti is like Hunter of the Night but the ulti is not like it because i based it on facts(Because there are more shadows in the night than there is in the day,that is way he cannot be seen during the night)

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Cool.

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:28 am

His icon looks like a meleer. He's slow.

1) First level is imba, normal direct damage is 70-90, well yours is 130. The rest is okay, balancing it with the mana cost, making it not spammable.

2) Seems quite imba for tanks if it's pure damage. Stun's fine. Illusions aren't really necessary.

3) Not original and it's like a Primal split.

4) First of all, there isn't a level 4 for Ultimates. Secondly, this, like many other heroes just improve the performance of other skills. Of course, have I read the note, but I still, think it's not original lol. Hunter in the night lol.

Not seeing much synergy here. Sorry for the criticism but i'm don't criticize that much and... i'm a critic wannabe. Trench etc.
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lolz

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 10:09 am

damn dota morph, even mentioned me? what did i do to deserve that? lolz..

anyway..

i like the idea, and i am not a negativist..

however, the ulti seems a bit too much.. its either the passive skill increase or the self-buffs, can't do both of those and yeah there's no lvl 4 ulti..

btw.. i know all of us have originality, its just that Dota has made so many heroes that even original skills don't seem original anymore, i don't blame you but i commend you for making it work.. dawg!


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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:14 pm

Yeah,I gues if i made this about 3-4 year earlier I guess January 1 2005 it will be a little orginal;And sorry for the Level 4 ulti so just forget i ever wrote it.
How about i changed the ulti like:
Secret of the Shadows -Causes Manojo to cover himself with the shadpws during the day or night and make himself move swiftly and invisible during the night.
Level 1 -movement speed and the attack speed also increases by 5% during the night.5% to make enemies.
Level 2 -movement speed and the attack speed also increases by 17% during the night. 17% to make enemies.
Level 3 -movement speed and the attack speed also increases by 20% during the night. 20% to make dodge.
All with permanent invisibility.
did that improved a little bit?
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Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:14 pm

there should not be 4 skills for ulti, only evoker is the exception

there are TOO many shadow ____ heroes enough. shadow priest and shadow shaman

reminds me of a mix between night stalker and phantom lancer.

yet another hero with made-up life/mana. based on str and int, should be 492 and 208
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