Serenity Melfire- The Moon Gypsy

Serenity Melfire- The Moon Gypsy

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 9:32 am

Story

On the making of the story of Serenity Melfire was based on Goddessess and warriors on Sentinel part. With her younger sister they commited theirselves to be a fighter on the Sentinel to avenge the death of thier parents( thier Mother and Mirana's Father/Serenity's Step-Father) for they were killed by the Scouge on the War.

They became great fighters of the Sentinel until the time came when they were given a challenge the challenge to be as the next Priestess of the Moon. They must fight each other and who ever wins will be titled as the Priestess of the Moon. But Serenity failed to defeat Mirana still its okay for her but she left with jelousy and anger inside her heart.

After 3 months Serenity and Mirana became close with Furion. Serenity fell in love with Furion, without knowing that Furion and Mirana inlove with each other.

Until the day came Furion proposed to Mirana and Mirana became Furion's wife, because of that Serenity became very weak because of her sadness until she quit as a fighter in Sentinel she left her place and tavelled everywhere with a broken heart. Until she attempted to commit suicide, because of stress and sadness, but the time she would commit suicide someone whispered on her mind. "Who are you?" Serenity said. "Come to the Scourge" it said. "Scourge? who are you??" Serenity said. " I'm the Lich King betrayed one, you can start again, start a new beginning you can take revenge on the people who betrayed you." the Lich King said. " Betrayed... me... I was the one... Who was... Betrayed!" Serenity cried. and so Serenity accepted Lich King's invitasion to join the force of the Scourge.

With the power of Black Magic of the Scourge she became a powerful Black Magician in the force of the Scourge.

She learned how to wreck and destroy peoples mind by giving them nightmares while awake putting their minds into other dimension while their body is in the Living dimension.

And with the power of hypnosis she puts her enemy into deathless slumber with the sounds of her clanging spears she blinds and kills her enemies.

Stats

Serenity Melfire - The Moon Gypsy
Range: 450 | Move Speed: 290
Primary: INT
Str: 13 + 1.2 | Agi: 20 + 1.3 | Int: 21 + 1.2
Damage: 48 - 60 | HP: 397 | Mana: 273
HP Regen: 0.64 | Mana Regen: 0.85
Attack Speed: 1.2 | Armor: 2

Skills

Slumber (S)
Put an enemy to a deep sleep.
Level 1 - Enemy sleeps for 1 second.
Level 2 - Enemy sleeps for 1.5 second
Level 3 - Enemy sleeps for 2 second.
Level 4 - Enemy Sleeps for 4 second
When the enemy is under this spell it cannot be attacked. Good for escape.
Mana Cost: 80/95/105/115
Cooldown: 25

Lunar Tear ()
Passively recover health points of all allied hero in the map per second.
Level 1 - Recover 1.5 health points per second.
Level 2 - Recover 2 health points per second.
Level 3 - Recover 3 health points per second.
Level 4 - Recover 4 health points per second.
This passive skill is only activated at night.
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Framework: When this passive skill is activated, all allied hero will have healing aura.

Rhea's Spear of Sound (R)
Damage and blinds enemy.
Level 1 - 80 damage and 7% blind for 3 seconds.
Level 2 - 120 damage and 15% blind for 3 seconds.
Level 3 - 180 damage and 27% blind for 4.5 seconds.
Level 4 - 230 damage and 42% blind for 6 seconds.
Mana Cost: 105/115/130/145
Cooldown: 20/16/12/6
Framework: Throws a sound of clanging spear that damages and blinds the target enemy.

Nightmare of Melaina's Curse (M)
Puts all enemy heroes in the field into Deathless Slumber while damaging them according to how much health points are missing for 4 seconds. The success chance of casting this spell also depends on you missing health points, if you have 20% missing health points then you have 20% success chance of casting this spell.
Level 1 - 20% of missing health points of enemy heroes are damaged to itself repeatedly per second for 4 seconds until it dies.
Level 2 - 30% of missing health points of enemy heroes damages itself repeatedly per second for 4 seconds until it dies.
Level 3 - 30% of missing health points of enemy heroes damages itself repeatedly per secondfor 4 seconds but Melaina's nightmare wont leave the enemy hero's mind damages 24 damage per second for 12 seconds.
The field gets wider each level. Only damages enemy heroes, it doesn't damage creeps. The time this spell is casted to enemy if enemy has 100 missing health points, if the spell is level 1, then the enemy will take 30 damage per second.
Mana Cost: 280/490/760
Cooldown: 160/140/110
Framework: This spell looks like colored black Chronosphere but has a magic circle on its floor.

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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 4:55 am

hey kid, welcome to DS...

wow there, a long story..

first of all, u should try looking on the heroes in the hero ideas section.. and try to follow the guides..

your stat gain per level is too too low.. change it..

first skill: sleep, unoriginal.. and doesn't do much except sleep for 4 seconds.

second skill: also not interesting..

third skill: with a cooldown of 6 seconds at lvl4 is too much, so its like free 230 damage every 6 seconds, and the target almost always is blind

ultimate skill: ultimate is IMBA i mean, like the greatest ultimate in the world.. too strong..



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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 10:35 am

hahaha yeah I know! but cant think of anything how to repair her maybe bcus its just my first hero idea ever hahaha, but thx for the comment

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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 5:40 pm

omgsomgomgomg trench towns picture is really hot otherwise this hero kinda good but maybe nerf the slumber ability it costs buttloads of mana just for a stun and the ult costs 760 at lvl 3 no one will want to cast it and what skin will u use?
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