Dota School Rumble 2?

Dota School Rumble 2?

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 12:06 am

With all credits to tryfring and the first dota school rumble which died out, i would like to start a new one. After i get some opinions.
Do you think i should start it?
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 11:02 am

Ofc, its a good idea. So anyone who can write a story, post it. I would like to read it.
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 11:38 am

one thing, same old characters or start from scratch, i vote start from scratch
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 12:16 pm

my vote u have for starting. I like to read stories.
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 12:39 pm

whats school dota rumble?
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 1:34 am

A sweet school DotA story with bits and pieces contributed by DS members. Im not sure if im good enough to do it though,.
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:08 am

i also vote tht we mk chars from scratch
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:38 am

k...so who starts?? i dont like it to be me cuz i dont like starting everyone on a bad idea...so whos up for d challenge? i also vote that we make it from scratch like War Wrecker...so i dont get lost.
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 10:13 am

I guess I'll start if it's ok with you guys. Feel free to make your own storyline or fill in the story as we go.
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First Day

It was an unexpected first day of school, the rain was pouring like there was no tomorrow, the winds that intensely blew through the area were like whirlwinds and though it was 7:00 in the morning, the skies looked as if it were already 5:00 in the evening.

There was no report of a tropical cyclone approaching anytime soon and so everyone, including Kael, a young spellcaster aiming to be the best of the best Magi, had to get to school despite the harsh weather.

He reluctantly prepared, then left for school and literally fought the elements to get there. He got to school soaking wet, just like everyone else as his umbrella had been blown away and his magic was still too weak to shield him from the weather.

One day, I'll be the best Magus ever and this weather will be nothing to me, thought Kael.

He then caught sight of Rylai who was also soaking wet, yet looking hotter than she did before.

Kael just couldn't get his eyes off her until the bell rang and struck him with the fact that he was going to be late if he didn't hurry.

Using a little bit of what magic he knew, he allowed himself to move twice as fast as he normally would and he got to class with just enough time to dry himself up.

The bell was just about to ring again when Rylai came into the classroom and sat beside Kael as there was no other seat left.

The bell finally rang and classes began.

An elven spell breaker holding a glaive entered the classroom and introduced himself, "Good morning class, I'm professor Nortrom. At first it may seem that I am just another spell breaker but let me tell you now that I am a silencer of spells, not guns mind you. Anyway, I am your moderator for spellcasting 101. It's very nice to meet you all."

"Now then class," Prof. Nortrom started, "I would like for you to do the usual introductions. Please avoid unnecessary comments or I will have to silence you. Let's start with you then." as Prof. Nortrom pointed to Kael who was too busy paying attention to Rylai.

"Ahem, you there, the elf wearing white," Prof. Nortrom called, "Come on then, let's get started."

"Ah, yes of course, professor." Kael embarrassedly began, "I'm Kael, my dream is to be the best of the best Magi!"

"Quite the ambition you have Kael," Prof Nortrom acknowledged, "Now, you there, the one beside Kael."

Rylai stood up and said, "I am Rylai Crestfall. My goal is to excel at frost magic."

The usual introductions went on but Kael only minded Rylai for that session.

Quite the first day indeed, quite the first day...
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 10:51 am

Can we establish a key theme for the story? i think it might work better if there's some direction to the writing
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 11:17 am

Sure, let's stick with one. If I may suggest a few themes?

-Love story
-Fighting Story
-Element of Tragedy

or you could combine all of the above as I'm planning with my storyline. And please provide some themes of your own so we can decide on them.
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:31 pm

sounds good. lets get some more school conflicts in. the bullies, establish some characters and plot.
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 2:29 pm

When Magina arrived at school the ground was wet, it was raining as his father had predicted. He heard a commotion not too far, and struggled to make his way against the harsh wind to find the cause.

He could tell there was a big crowd as he came closer. As he fought his way through through the crowd he heard a scream, it was far from manly, yet it was not that of a woman. "Stop!" He knew it was rikkimaru, once again tormented by the other students. He heard a deep growl. This was obviously the attacker, just before he was going to jump in, his feet started feeling hot, then hotter, until they were on fire all together. He was in a ring of fire, it was not a normal fire, as it stayed burning in the rain.

He quickly blinked away, not knowing what to do. He could fight, but the one who conjured the fire didn't seemed to be affected by it, He would have the advantage. He started charging toward the bully, but before he was close enough to strike, he heard the rippling of a wave come closer, and the attacker fell, but no sooner as the savior came, he was gone. Magina picked up the unconscious rikkimaru and carried him to Vol'jin to be treated. Whoever this attacker was, the next time he came around. He was going to pay.


Alright this is my first fan fic piece, tell me what i need to work on and what i did good please.
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 2:37 pm

Is this alright, i kinda realized not too much detail, but yeah.
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 2:52 pm

Good starting, I like it.
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