The Goblins - another goblin techies story (up7)

The Goblins - another goblin techies story (up7)

Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 7:19 am

Goblin techies:

In the world apart from the Frozen throne, lies different kinds of goblins who works in harmony with men. This goblins are born with different masteries as if they were handcrafted and disseminated by the gods on purpose.
There are goblins who are masters of machines and weaponry(5-6 ft tall with medium built muscles), there are goblins who specializes in the field of combat(7-10 ft tall and has strong built muscles),masters of money(5-ft tall and are confident looking), goblins who are masters of art and romance(4-5 ft tall and the most charming among the goblins), and finally there are goblins who specializes in fire works(3-4ft tall and are clever fun-loving goblins).
Squee and Spleen belong to the last group of goblins. They are the goblins who are held inferior amongst all.
Their fire works only provides pleasure, and is proven useful during ceremonies and grand celebrations, but without those occasions they are worth nothing.

CHAPTER 1 : The Ambition

The two brothers were born on the same day. They were considered a blessing by most of their clan. It is rare for goblins to give birth to twins, unlike humans. Events like this happens once in every billion births.
The mother named the first one to come out Squee because her mother loves the Squakers Blow, a type of firecracker that when explodes exhibits 2 goblins of their kind marching with other goblins during battle formation.
Then his father gave the second child the name Spleen. Spleen was his grandfathers name. The person who created the Squakers Blow.

Two years past rapidly and the twins were already taught how to create fireworks. Squee was taught how to mix the chemicals and powders while Spleen was taught how to pact them with standard pressure.

Summer time comes. The goblins were raided! Twelve Orc crusaders sent by Arthas savagely rampaged towards the goblins territories.
They started destroyed everything and everyone.
"Spare no one! Not one thing must stand before we leave! Let them kneel for the glory of the Lich king!" Commanded the Orc general.
The Orc raiders destroyed half the village and killed dozens of goblins before the Goblins Warriors came! Their coming saved their kind.
Squee and Spleen were still terrified with what they saw. They couldn't barely move. Their father came running towards them to comfort his sons
Unknowingly, a spear was thrown by the Orc general who was half dead! It caught the rib's of Squee and Spleen's father.
The brothers could only swear in hatred, with what they saw. They finally understand what his father had once told them.

(the goblin's reminisced what his father told them.....)
"Our kind were not built for combat. We are defenseless against the Scourge. We are highly dependent with our allies. Someday, and i hope the gods forbid, our clan will be wiped out.

(so the ambition came to be...)
"My grandfather created the Squaker's bomb cause of a dream he once had. He dreamed he saw two brother's in battle marching with the sentinel's elite warlords. My father could not believe what his eyes has perceived, when he saw one of those two brothers wear the very same neckerchief his forefather's gave him. He instructed me to give this neckerchief to the first born and to the next first born of every generation. It must be passed on. For the hope of our clan rest on those brothers marching in combat..."
Squee clenched the neckerchief in his hand swearing from that day on, he would do everything in his power to avenge his father's death.

"Nooooooooooooooooo!!! Father!!" The sound of the two brothers in grief awakened the souls of many.


CHAPTER 2: The Suicide Squad

The two brother's were busy putting their new explosives to the test.
"Hey stop pulling those wires!" Squee scolded Spleen, his curiousness has gotten to his nerves.
"What? I ain't pulling anything." He lied with a smile on a face that suggest he just want to annoy his older brother. "What's up with this gold mining any way, golds can't be eaten" Spleen said
"But they can be sold. We need the money for research and for the nukes!" said Squee.
"Blah blah! Research ain't fun! It's only a...."

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM

"Ouch! You stupid prick! Wait till i get my hands on you!" Spleen said in fury.
"You can't catch me chicken legs" Squee implied annoyingly.

After three hours of nonstop play and mining. Their baskets are finally filled with enough gold for them to carry.
Spleen carried the barrel of gold, while Squee carried the barrel of undetonated explosives.
They were on their way to the city of kalimdor to sell their goods when suddenly an orc raider ambushed them.
They ran as fast as they can but their tiny steps were not enough to outrun an orc raider's horse. Seeing that the other goblin carried no threat, he snatched it right away leaving the other goblin who carries the potential danger.
With one scoop after being just inches away from Spleen, he caught Spleen right in the shoulders, his claws penetrated through the goblin's flesh.
"Squee help me! Waaa!" His yell caught his brothers attention.
"Shut up Goblin or should i say shut up dinner! hahahaha" The Orc laughed devilishly while licking the drops of blood oozing from the goblin's shoulder.
Upon hearing his brothers cry, Squee lights the first dynamite that he groped in the barrel. Throwing it with all his might, he successfully tossed the dynamite 10ft away while he successfully hid on one of the stronger and bigger trees in the forest.
The chaos brought about by the dynamite was so powerful it knocked out the orc raider's horse even when the bomb was 8ft away. The horse crushed the orc raider's knee leaving him immobile. Spleen ran towards the fallen orc, alongside the orc was his brother who is still in a lot of pain due to the fall and his arm that is deeply scarred by the claws of the orc.
When he was now a feet away from the orc he warned him, "Release me and my brother! or you shall die with us!"
"hahaha, you petty fool! You really think you can scare me with death!" The orc said with no fear.
With no hesitation, he picked the biggest bomb in his small barrel."Remember this bomb, for this will bring you to Hades!".
He lit the bomb and ran towards his brother and the fallen orc while yelling,"For the GREATER GOOD!!!!"

Without his knowing,a marksman raider, an ally of the orc released an arrow aiming at the goblin's bomb.
It hit right on target, the tip of the arrow sliced the litted bomb.

CHAPTER 3: Spleen's story of Seeking

I remembered myself crawling. Seeking for protection of the wilds. My brother must be out there somewhere.
I grabbed a sparker, lighted it, and I throw it as far as I can, midst the great darkness beyond, hoping to capture just a glimpse of my brother. Yet, to no avail.
There was no glory for crying, nor was there a need for hope. But I kept my head high and sought to seek my brother who must be there somewhere.
I had less recall on the face of the orc that captured my brother, but I was optimistic that whenever I see him I would know its him.
I walked the darkness alone and scared. Many times I find myself hiding in the bushes and making grave hallucinations of dead bodies scouting the area. I was so afraid.

On the 2nd day of search.

I have gone hungry and I feel lost. Many times I wanted to give up and turn back to my home. But I know, I’ve come this far to go back! I saw shelter this day. It was a great cave. It looks deserted. As soon as I got inside I saw vast amounts of food. I felt lucky; I thought it was provided to me by nature. Silly me.
Before I could fill up my tummy, I heard a growl like no other! It sounded like a bear. I tried to run but the huge bear sealed the entrance. There was nothing I could do, except wait for this bear to feast on me or tear me to pieces.
Unexpectedly I heard the bear talked! “What is your name, goblin?”
“SPp-leen” I tremblingly replied.
“Ha ha ha ha!” A beastly form appeared coming from the back of the bear. “I know you! I’ve heard about you, they say you came make bombs like no other!”
“I don’t know what you are talking about sir beast”
“There is a sorcerer who lust in magic, he envisioned two worthy worthless goblins that has the brains to create magical bombs.” The beast said in a grim. “He also said he would reward me greatly if I could bring those worthy worthless goblins to him. Where is the other goblin?” He said pointing at Spleen.
“Some Orc raiders took him. Can you help me retrieve him?”
“Orcs ey, what cap were they wearing?” he asked.
“They were wearing a cap with horns” I remember saying almost eagerly.
“I know where they camp. Follow my lead.”

I obediently followed this strange beast man’s footsteps and his big bear.


On my 3rd day of search.


We finally found the camp of the Orcs who stole my brother.
They were around a hundred well armed men. “We cannot save your brother unless we kill all this Orcs, I don’t think we can defeat them. You goblin don’t have any use in battle. I don’t know what it is you could do to help.” The beast men leaned on the tree beside him. The bear sat beside him and disturbed the tree causing its leaves to fall.
I saw the bunch of leaves that was scattered from the fall, and it took me a while before I realize that this was not an ordinary tree! It was tree G’maalh!
The beast men saw me and asked, “Why do your eyes glitter in this bitter moment?”
“Sir Beast, I found a way for us to defeat them!”
“How so?” the beast men asked and I replied “Nitrogen bombs!”

“The G’maalh tree is filled with nitrogen. Its roots and tree bark is filled with unstable nitrogen stabilized by its natural source of fibrous tree sac. I recognized it from the other trees through its W-shaped structure of its leaves.”


On the 4th day of search.
I have extracted the fibrous tree sac, and carefully wrapped the nitrogen on its leaves. I




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i'll finish when soon^^. for now i rest my thoughts[/b]

Last edited by original-binsoy on Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:48 pm; edited 11 times in total

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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 7:26 am

another story o.O
t-up
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:50 am

Wow this one's pretty good, I can see a couple of themes developing and if you play your cards right this could be a really good story, keep going.
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:49 am

hey. The intro is bad and u have repeated some words twice. but if u play ur cards right and can keep the suspense up, t-up!
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 7:11 am

ah yeah.. hehehe i didn't notice repeating those words.. it will be fix right away.. sorry for the late update.. i'm gonna mark (UP2) the number changes each update...

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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 7:28 am

a good start to a story

i wana see more

let me know how it goes

=]
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 8:08 am

Nice one! Continue it ok!
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:09 pm

aaaaaaaaaaaaaargh. Doesent make sense. the orc raider catches one goblin and the other one is injured so why doesent the orc capture the second one also????? aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 11:40 am

flameseeker: read it again! thanks for the comment, i apreciate it.. it did not make sense at all.. so i have to change the flow of the story.. sorry guys, can't find time finishing this piece of crap!! Just read the updates, i'll be able to finish this..

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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 4:10 pm

Aaaaaaah Much better. Much much better. And i AGREE. THIS IS A PIECE OF CRAP. GO TO HELL, BISNOY WITH YOUR CRAPPY STORY AND ITS STUPID LITTLE CHARACTERS> GO TO HELL> I HATE OU AND I HATE YOUR STORY.
















Hehe! Just Kidding. Nice story. Cant w8 to see ehat happened next. Actually, i could wait.
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 2:58 am

waaaahhhh you gave me quite a scare there..nyways cant finish dis now.. i have to attend sinulog here in the Philippines.. chow!il be drunk by midnight! ekekekek

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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:32 pm

finish it!!!!!!!! is the writer of this story dead?
i want some more!

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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 1:26 pm

It's God damn Good .. Continue man

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