Tamed Heart of the Wolf Warrior

Tamed Heart of the Wolf Warrior

Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 4:36 pm

I'm bored today so I gave it a shot writing a short story.. I know I'm not a good story writer like the others. I've never done this before, so forgive me peeps if my words are plain and simple. I did it in 30 mins as simple as I can so readers can easily relate and understand. Here's my shot


The Tamed Heart of the Wolf Warrior

CHAPTER 1:

Ancient years ago, evil stalk the land. There was this 12-year-old Lycan and his wolf-cub companion always plays together in the forest. Lycan came from a werewolf tribe. His clan has been shattered by indigenous troll tribe who are superb in battle ages ago. He’s the remaining sibling of werewolf’s higher branch. 10 years ago, his parents were sought by the military force of the troll clan. They were murdered ruthlessly. Lycan was only 5 years old back then when he witnessed how brutal the Troll tribe was. He only remembers one name from this clan, The Troll Warlord. Because of him, his guilt pursues his blood to become a warrior someday. This fatality in his heart triggers the ancient prophecy of their tribe which occurs once in a century. As a kid, he can do nothing but leave his homeland which was burnt like hell together with his wolf cub companion. None survived except him. He traveled distant away from his ashed land. He then found the dark forest of Mordor where he met an old man with warrior built. His name is Dirge.

CHAPTER 2: The Encounter

At first glance, Lycan felt something squeezing his heart and a plague feeling distressing him. “Thou shall state your name and your intent, young man”, Dirge stated. Lycan can hardly breathe because of the aura Dirge is bursting. He felt like his heart is stopping its beat by second. “My name is Lycan, a recluse. I came here by chance with no harm at all. I need some water and food as I’ve traveled countless days and nights with no food or water”, said Lycan which nearly fallen. Dirge has seen through the good intent of the young man and he really brought no harm. Dirge stops his heart stopper aura and hid his plague. He gave Lycan something to eat and drink and comfy resting consign. After Lycan recovered from starvation, he enlightened Dirge about his story.

Lycan continued hanging on with Dirge where he learned different aspect of being a warrior. Dirge thought him every single thing he knows. As training goes on, Dirge notice an inner feral that only Lycan can act. Dirge even taught Lycan the summoning technique which Lycan had hard time learning. His wolf friend grew up drastically as well. He’s the only one who can understand his best friend and he taught him the fighting tactics. His wolf synergizes its attack when Lycan is around dealing heavy damage and it’s able to stun an enemy with constant speed of attack. They have mastered even the single deadliest spot in the jungle of Mordor where complex species live. They are the only warriors who can defeat giant creatures there. Their journey together takes them through deep forests, across giant rocks, mountains and even glaciers and into dangers they never imagined.

Many years passed and his torment of seeking power and mastering the art of survival molds his true skill. He became the great assassin of flesh along with his wolf best friend which helps him in many battles. They conquered different journeys and survived. Dirge finally taught everything a warrior should possess. It’s time for Lycan to seek his revenge to the Troll Warlord. His journey now begins heading to Thror where the legendary troll who killed his parents resides.

CHAPTER 3: Farewell... Brother!

One day, as they traveled through the abyss of Fallen Lake at the edge of Mordor, they encountered a warrior with demonic magical powers. Lycan already sensed the danger approaching by his nudge. His wolf smells it as well. Sudden impaling thing draws near them but they dodged it easily. “Who are you monster?” asked Lycan. I am Lion, the guardian of this place. None shall pass before me. You must trounce me before you can surpass this gate. None have succeeded to struggle against me. Dare me not and domicile back mortal” says Lion. “If this is the only way, I shall challenge you” Lycan utter. Lion began attacking Lycan with full magical force using his magical staff. Lycan was able to dodge them by swift moves. As Lycan begin to howl, his wolf jumped over and attacks Lion. As a great magic warrior, the Demon Witch was able to make it in time casting his deadly spell turning the wolf into some kind of helpless tiny creature. Lycan now doesn’t have ally to help him fight the Demon Witch as his friend has been cursed by a magical spell. His only chance is his mighty combat skills. He moves swiftly all over the place but Lion was able to nail him using impale from his magical staff. Lycan is down and stunned next to his crippled wolf. An immense feeling is bursting inside him. His feral heart and howl began to blast releasing the spell from his wolf. “Thank goodness you’re finally awake my friend,” worried Lycan. He then howls once more giving his wolf a sudden burst of speed and swifter attacks. They both attack in different directions crossing over each other which Lion couldn’t dodge and sense. This is the result of their hard works and trainings back in Dirge’s place. Lion is totally wounded and held stunned. He was able to recover fast using magical potions and things are getting serious and deadly now. Both parties are exhausted. Lion has something hidden in his sleeve. This is his fatal and final blow which can decide fate to his enemy. He uttered some underground words and a magical reddish pure energy is about to strike. The Finger of Death strikes from his staff and Lycan knows he won’t be able to dodge it. Lycan was blasted hardly by the destructive force knocking his consciousness for few seconds, nevertheless, he still breathes. “What was that? I’m still alive” He smelled something like a roasted meat next to him; his wolf saved him from a sudden death and blocked the Finger of Death. He saw his best friend’s body lying, lifeless and legs were ripped apart. Tears surged in his eyes. Lion is preparing for another charge aiming for Lycan this time around. Lycan then learned by heart the summoning Dirge had taught him. Because of his feral heart wants to avenge his friend, he was able to summon two mighty wolves which resembles exactly the same as his wolf friend. Perfect summon with perfect skills. He howls with might and the wolves automatically jumped into Lion with double the speed as before and shred him into pieces. “It’s finally over”. As his heart calmed down, wolves vanished as well. He successfully slew the guardian of the gate but he’s alone now. He gave his best friend a decent and honorable burial.

TO BE CONTINUED… (Next chapter vs. the Troll Warlord)

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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 4:47 pm

This is good
can't wait to see next chapter
and
your modest
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 5:14 pm

Do you think I should continue the next chapter??
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:08 am

yes lol

good story from one of the ST! WOOT! Go ST! Oh wait! I'm ST! GO ME!!!


yes continue please, it's a nice read. I like how Banehallow is the good guy instead of the usual Sentinel hero


EDIT: typo lol
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