Wodan Ymir- The Sword of Cosmos

Wodan Ymir- The Sword of Cosmos

Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 6:20 am

Wodan Ymir - The Sword of Cosmos
Range: 150 | Move Speed: 315
Primary: AGI
Str: 15 + 1.85 | Agi: 27 + 2.65 | Int: 17 + 1.5
Damage: 63 – 68 | HP: 437 | Mana: 221
HP Regen: .89 | Mana Regen: 0.69
Attack Speed: 1.30 | Armor: 4

A man of complete mystery, Wodan Ymir fights with the strength of a monster and rarely speaks out of line. Proclaiming himself to be The Sword Of Cosmos, he guards the Frozen Throne and is a member of the Shadow-Mirror forces. To the Original Defense of the Ancient's cast, his speech, along with his method of combat, reminisces that of their old ally, Sanger Zonvolt, leading them to believe he has sided with their enemy, like he did with the Lich King in the previous war.

Skills:

Zankantō Un'yō no Tachi (Blade of a Shining Cloud)

Wodan Ymir enlarges the Colossal Blade to such a point that it's almost too large for the arms to even handle. Wodan lifts the weapon high above the head and proceeds to take to the sky. Then drops down with a single bisecting slash as a finishing attack.
(Supposed to be the ultimate but i need to balance it)
Duration: 7/8/9/10seconds

Level.1: Deals 145 Chaos Damage and Injures the target
Level.2: Deals 165 Chaos Damage and Injures the target
Level.3: Deals 185 Chaos Damage and Injures the target
Level.4: Deals 205 Chaos Damage and Injures the target
Status Effect: Injure
-This side effect cancels the regeneration of the unit temporarily disabling healing abilities and automatically cancels different Potions)

Mana Cost: 120 All Levels
Cooldown: 20 seconds
Casting Range: Melee
Framework: Wodan Ymir rushes forward to the target then flies at a very high speed then strikes the target
Casting Time: Instant
Projectile Speed: Very Fast

Cosmos Un'yō no Armor (The Armor of Cosmos)

Wodan Ymir's strength of a monster grants him the heavy capability of defending allowing him to reduce some damage taken.

Level.1: 19% Chance to Reduce damage taken by 25% in addition if Wodan Ymir's Colossal Defiance is learned theres a 40% Chance that Wodan Ymir's Death will cast Zankantou Hoshinagi No Tachi with 30% Original Damage
Level.2: 21% Chance to Reduce damage taken by 35% in addition if Wodan Ymir's Colossal Defiance is learned theres a 50% Chance that Wodan Ymir's Death will cast Zankantou Hoshinagi No Tachi with 40% Original Damage
Level.3: 23% Chance to Reduce damage taken by 45% in addition if Wodan Ymir's Colossal Defiance is learned theres a 60% Chance that Wodan Ymir's Death will cast Zankantou Hoshinagi No Tachi with 50% Original Damage
Level.4: 25% Chance to Reduce damage taken by 55% in addition if Wodan Ymir's Colossal Defiance is learned theres a 70% Chance that Wodan Ymir's Death will cast Zankantou Hoshinagi No Tachi with 60% Original Damage

(Damage done by the Zankantou Hoshinagi No Tachi)
-Probably requires a Level.6 Wodan Ymir
-activates on chance and deals lower damage than the original
EXPLANATION: Lina Inverse casted Laguna Blade on Wodan Ymir then the Armor Activated the effect Lina recieves a Status Effect Struck by the Armor of Cosmos then after 2 seconds the ritual activates dealing some damage to the Killer.
(Passive Ability Self)
Framework: Whenever the skills activates Wodan Ymir's suit surges

Colossal Defiance

Wodan Ymir's specialized body this ability enhances different skills per level increasing effects greatly.
(Enhancements stacks upto Level.4)

Level.1: Zankantō Un'yō no Tachi (Blade of a Shining Cloud) Injure Duration increased by 4/5/6/7
Level.2: Cosmos Un'yō no Armor (The Armor of Cosmos) Chance increased by 1%/2%/3%/4% and reduction increased by 10%/15%/20%/25%
Level.3: Zankantou Hoshinagi no Tachi (The Sword of Cosmos) Quickens the activation when hp drops below certain amount
Level.4: Zankantou Hoshinagi no Tachi (The Sword of Cosmos) Greatly Quickens the activation when hp drops below certain amount

(Passive Ability Increasing Skill Effect)
Framework: Surging Energy releases everytime the skill is learned stunning Wodan Ymir and nearby enemy units for 1.5seconds

Zankantou Hoshinagi no Tachi (The Sword of Cosmos)

Wodan Ymir's ultimate attack an incredibly long beam of surging energy emerges from the handle and guard its blade of light rends through everything in its path, a wide swath, even splitting the sky in half. Its name translates roughly to "The Sword of Cosmos."
(If the Targeted unit dies Wodan Ymir says "WAGA ZANKANTOUNI TATENU MONO NASH!")

Level.1: Can be activated when current hp is below 40%/Enhanced by Colosssal Defiance can be activated at 55% current HP

-Deals 600 Damage to the targeted unit
Level.2: Can be activated when current hp is below
50%/Enhanced by Colosssal Defiance can be activated at 65% current HP

-Deals 800 Damage to the targeted unit
Level.3: Can be activated when current hp is below 60%/Enhanced by Colosssal Defiance can be activated at 75% current HP
-Deals 1000 Damage to the targeted unit

Mana Cost: 150/250/350
Cooldown: 60seconds
Casting Range: 600-1000 away from Wodan Ymir
Casting Time: Instant
Projectile Speed: Slow
Framework: Wodan Ymir's weapon enlarges at least several thousand metres in length then rushes forward to the target attacking it critically
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Last edited by HateTheStriker on Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:09 pm; edited 3 times in total

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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 11:54 am

I like the hero but the ulti is a lil too imba (deals more dmg as a lvl 16 lina!!!)
but i like your picture aswell so o i give you a B+

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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:55 am

Hmmmm... Dont count the picture when u are to criticize a hero dude... And about your Comment on the ulti let me clarify this one Lina can cast Laguna Blade without any requirements only MANA if im right but this Hero of Mine requires 75% Current HP and 350 MANA so it is probably more balanced than that of your laguna blade...
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 2:23 pm

look at this. WOdan Ymir from the GBA game Super Robot Wars. Idont like the idea of implementing anime/manga/comic/cartoon/game characters into DotA, but this hero seams good, although he is a little Imba. Let me elaborate:

He is uderpowered, mostly, while his first skill is owerpowered.

2nd skill: Has a 25% chance to negate 55%, while Voids Backtrack has a 25% chance to NEGATE damage. So, that skill is just uderpowered backtrack.

Ulti: Also underpowered. Lion can deal that damage at any time, and for less mana. The cd is ok, but you should remove the HP requirement, and raise the CD. Then it would be Ok.

1st skill: Well...lets just say that Injury is a good status, but the duration is waaay too imba, because it can be up to 17sec long which is waaaay too much, because it soesnt allow the enemy to protect agains Shadow Strike or simmilar skills using tango, or any other regeneration items. I mean, negaating HoT, Mekansm, and skills like Death Pakt for 17 sec is just too Imba.


Hope this criticue helps.
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:08 am

@TheGunslinger
-First of all im sure Lina Inverse came from an Anime Series which is the slayers...

-Second read the Third Skill it affects the chance of Second skill greatly...

-Third the Ultimate it is probably resembling the Real Wodan Ymir's attack so that it will be more realistic in game, try to watch it from Youtube just search "Rest in the Cradle" the Zankantou Hoshinagi No tachi is probably the final blow of Wodan Ymir before he died in the Earth Cradle...

-Lastly im going to adjust the first skill, probably the Injure effect...
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:16 pm

I read the tird skill, but even with the increse, the second skill is still underpowered...You could make the tird skill add some extra effect to it instead of the chance increse...
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:56 pm

@TheGunslinger
-Again... Come to think of it bro 80% Reduction with a Vanguard in use 60% Chance to block 40 DMG if im right then thats total Balanced
Lvl.1: The Armor of Cosmos reduces 25% DMG add the effect of Vanguard it will be like taking candy from a baby...
Specially at levels 2,3,4+Colossal Defiance...
Anyway im going to try an effect combination...
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