Chu'sarik, the Thorn Lord

Chu'sarik, the Thorn Lord

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:03 pm

Thorn Lord (H)
Model: Spider Crab/Hermit Crab(heheh)
Icon: Warcraft III Spider Crab/Hermit Crab Icon
Sound Set: Black/Bronze/Red/Blue/Green Dragon
Alliance: Scourge

Story: From the murky depths, Chu'sarik served Slardar for years and never failed anything, and has been loyal to him until his soul dies. Chu'sarik can send spikes from the ground, causing his prey to fly in fear and to scream in pain. He can also shoot some of his regenerating spikes to enemies and peircing through their skins. Chu'sarik can absorb skeletons and implant it within him. Only very few has ever made this creature feel pain, while others die in torment.

Statistics:
Start HP - 416
Start Mana - 351
HP regen - 0.72
Mana regen - 0.92
Strength - 14 + 2.2
Agility - 15 + 1.8
Intelligence - 27 + 2.85
Armor - 2
Movespeed - 265
Attack Rate - 1.78
Range - 325 (ranged)
Attack Missile - Impale

Skills:
Impale Strike - 145 mana - 18 s.c.
The Thorn Lord slams the ground, making a spike hit the target from beneath it. Deals damage & will stun it for 2.15 seconds .
Type - Single Target damage skill
Cast Range - 600
Impale Range - 600
Level 1 - 80 damage
Level 2 - 155 damage
Level 3 - 280 damage
Level 4 - 310 damage

Thorn Fling - 75/115/135/155 mana - 30/27/25/20 s.c.
The Thorn Lord shoots out thorns in the area( 500 AoE Radius ), dealing damage and will make the enemies bleed. Bleeding lasts 5 seconds .
Type - AoE Radius damage + slow skill
Level 1 - 50 damage per thorns, 7 bleed damage, 7% bleed slow
Level 2 - 100 damage per thorns, 14 bleed damage, 14% bleed slow
Level 3 - 150 damage per thorns, 21 bleed damage, 21% bleed slow
Level 4 - 200 damage per thorns, 28 bleed damage, 28% bleed slow

Bone Fusion - Passive
For every time the Thorn Lord kills a unit (ally, foe, hero), he gains bonus armor. But once the Thorn Lord dies, he'll lose 20 or 1/2 armor bonus . Also gains spell reduction
Type - Passive dormant
Level 1 - 0.0125 bonus armor per ally/foe killed, 0.125 bonus armor per enemy hero killed. Has 10 armor limit and gives 4% spell reduction
Level 2 - 0.025 bonus armor per ally/foe killed, 0.25 bonus armor per enemy hero killed. Has 20 armor limit and gives 8% spell reduction
Level 3 - 0.05 bonus armor per ally/foe killed, 0.5 bonus armor per enemy hero killed. Has 30 armor limit and gives 12% spell reduction
Level 4 - 0.1 bonus armor per ally/foe killed, 1 bonus armor per enemy hero killed. Has 40 armor limit and gives 16% spell reduction

Ultimate Skill....
Hell Thorns - Passive
The Thorn Lord's body can make attacks bounce back to the attackers, giving him bonus armor and damage return for melee units.
Type - Passive
Level 1 - 8 bonus armor. 30% return damage
Level 2 - 12 bonus armor. 45% return damage
Level 3 - 16 bonus armor. 60% return damage

Pros & cons
Pros
- Anti-melee hero
- Powerful tank hero
- Painful skills

Cons
- Slow movespeed
- Sucks against ranged
- Needs proper management
- Needs high HP and armor to maintain its stability

Good item build
- Boots of Travel
- Sange&Yasha
- Dagon 1-2-3-4-5
- Vanguard ->> Heart of Tarrasque
- Plate Mail/Blade Mail (1-2x)

Updates:
11/15/06 - Nerfed Thorn Fling's damage & cooldown, Bone Fusion's spell reduction, and Hell Thorn's Melee Damage return percentage.
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Last edited by lone_destroyer47 on Fri Nov 24, 2006 10:53 am; edited 3 times in total

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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:18 pm

1st Skill...Single Target?

2nd Skill: A Maiming attack...but the cooldown seems a little too quick for the slowing duration...

3rd Skill: Hmm...magic damage reduction and super armor along with your ultimate...think about it..

4th Skill: 75% damage return....super armor and 75% damage return...that's murder...might as well stick with rangers if ur gonna face this guy one on one...

Slow for balance huh...

150 attack range is ranged?

2 be honest...this guy's a tough one...I think he should be a strength type rather than an Intel type, but he's got low HP, so, basically he's gonna need all the armor he can get.

At least ur using the Hermit crab/Lobster model hehehe...i was wondering when someone would use that...
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 1:45 pm

the 2nd skill is over powered , reduce either the armor bonus of last skill or return damage still this hero is over powered, slow + instant 300 dmage + bleed is to much,

lacks originality but nice concept,

about 3rd skill , armor bonus is nice but you should reduce magic damage
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 4:02 pm

150 should not be ranged, it should be melee!! omg this hero is way too strong, high att(str and skills) and high defense!! 75% damage back omg!! if add blade mail, it almost reach 100%!! who can beat tht!!! and u miss out the base def!!! u got nice concept but this hero is too strong!! it's armor can reach at least 50+++!!! sorry if my words is too rough!
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 8:04 am

How's the range now? 325, almost reaching morph's range.
Also, nerfed the Thorn Fling, Bone Fusion & the ulti's Damage return.
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 8:35 am

I think the Impale Strike targets only one unit and hits only one unit, otherwise, its IMBA.

I know it's weakness.. Slithereen Guard, Tidehunter, Bristleback, Alchemist & Shadow Fiend gank.

Amplify + Gush + Presence + Goo + Acid = 15 + 4 + 4 + 8 + 2 = 33 Armor reduced to Thorn Lord boy
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 10:54 am

okay, made his story!
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 2:09 am

interesting story........try and add he come to kill feralas(donatboy dreamhero which wanna kill sladar) ^^ hahahahahah sry bout that donat^^
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 11:52 am

Slithereen Guard's minion huh, LD? Ironically, Thorn Lord could kill Slithereen Guard..
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Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 6:36 am

[offtopic]
patriarch? wtf??
[/offtopic]

@shadowmk
But still, most people will try to -repick this hero since he's slow and hard to use.
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