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bloodlust6969


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Story Of Razor: Arise Lightning revenant!

Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 11:14 am

Hello everyone! Hope you like my story about Razor. It is not very long though lol Please comment and rate Hopeful Hysterical

Part one: I am noble

We all make mistakes
Thinking it is for the best
Believing that we made the right decision
But regret is always at the end
And soon we’ll realize that the right choice we made
Is actually the worst

There was a man named john. Living in Lordaeron and serving as a footman. Though his earnings is not as high as the other high ranked knights, he is loyal and ready to sacrifice anything for loradaeron. Suffice it to say, he can be called a hero for loving his country so much.

It was still dark when john and the other footmen prepare to defend a village just outside the main city for the upcoming scourge attack.

“It is almost an hour and still no sign of the undead”. John said to himself. “Maybe the bastards are not coming.

John closed his eyes. He was going to take a nap when suddenly…

“What in the world is that”! Said one footman pointing to a chunk of rotting flesh falling straight at them.

“It’s the undead”! John Shouted. “Defend yourselves”!

And Ghouls and necromancers attacked them. At the midst of battle a floating lich appeared surrounded by cold air and ice. It was Kel’thuzad.

“What?” said Kelthuzad. “Just a bunch of footmen? Don’t tell me that the humans are not taking us seriously.

“Don’t underestimate us lich! We will defend Lordaeron no matter what. We may die in the process but we will die fighting! John replied.

“You said it john!” his comrade said. “Okay………..were officially dead in 10 minutes.

“Five…” everyone echoed.

“So be it!” Said Kel’thuzad with a chilling voice.

And so the battle begun. John and the others tried their best to fight but to no avail. They were outnumbered not to mention Kel’thuzad is too powerful. All of them died and john is severely wounded lying on the ground bathing with his own blood.

“What are you waiting for lich? Finish me”

“What a brave soldier” Said the lich. “And for that I will let you choose child. Die…or make a pact with me to save your life. Imagine this…not only you can live, you can still defend your….err…home land”.

“I can defend Lordaeron once more?” If this is the only way…do it lich. John whispered. This is the right decision. I can protect my home once more. I…am..noble”. The John closed his eyes.

Part two: Regret

John opened his eyes finding himself in a town hall.

“Ah! You are awake” Said the priest. “We found you in the destroyed village. We saw you still breathing. It’s a question how you survived. And strangely your wound quickly healed.

“What about the…ehem…”

“The undead…?” replied the priest. “ We have managed to defeat them but one of the escaped. The lich escaped.

“Kel..thuzad” john thought.

Two days later john was fighting the undead again. Then a twist of fate happened. John is in the battle field when he heard strange voices. The voice drove him insane.

“Ahhh!!!! Get out of my head! Who are you?”

Then he begun slashing and attacking his comrades and the villagers. When john regained his sanity he was terrified on what he saw. Innocent people lying lifeless in a pool of blood.

“What have I done?” John said. Kel’ thuzad appeared before him. “What’s wrong with me? What happened?”

“When you decided to make a pact with me to save yourself, you have become one of us”. Kel’thuzad replied. Aren’t you glad that you are one of the chosen ones? The Lich King chose you to be one of his champions.
Your purpose child is to join the legion in destroying the wretched thing that keeps this world alive….The world tree.

“No….No! I don’t want to! You lied to me! I should not have made the pact. This is worse than death!” John shouted.

“Well…regret is always at the end” Kel’thuzad said. “We will meet again child”

Kel’thuzad quickly disappear.

Ending: Arise lightning revenant!

The people of lordaeron found out what john did and the king sentenced him death by hanging. It was raining hard and lightning and thunder filled the sky. No one grieved nor cried for him. He was left alone hanging.
Hours have past and the storm grew stronger and from the bushes Kel’thuzad appeared. He approached john’s body and use frost nova to destroy the ropes and john’s body fell on the ground.

“Arise….LIGHTNING REVENANT!!!”

Lightning striked the body of john. There was big explosion and a blinding light. When the light was gone a creature appeared before the lich. A floating armor with pure energy inside in shape of a man.

“Welcome to the scourge John…But at this day you will be known as Razor The lightning revenant!”

“I have said that I am being controlled by the undead when I slaughtered those innocent lives. But they did not listen. I was killed by men who declare themselves holy and sinless. Now I will destroy the land that I once loved and all who protects it. I will let them fill the wrath of the lightning revenant”.

“But let us not forget our mission”.

“Yes, of course”

And until that day the John that loved Lordaeron was just a memory now. He is now the merciless Razor the lightning revenant.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 11:21 am

i like the story.....cool....Smile
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 8:13 am

Your good. People are sometimes consumed by things that they love and sometimes when what they love turms on them love somehow becomes vengeance returning their wrath tenfold.
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 8:47 am

You say it's not too long huh? Very Happy
Great story keep it going.Post more i'll be glad to read them...

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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 8:50 am

It's so tragic... Sad
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bloodlust6969


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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 2:48 pm

Thank you! thanks for the comments. I really appreciate it. I'm still thinking for part 3 lol Laughing
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 3:05 pm

2 thumbs up! ^^, for me, It's the most wonderful story i ever heard since the dotaportal.com stories. ^^, keep it up!
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 3:09 am

nice story this is a good story by another DS member

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KevinDesano5


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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 3:29 am

loool nice story but somehow there were an unbelievable on the part like where john "choosing to join or not..."
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 4:18 am

I like it. A couple grammar mistakes tho :P. Keep it up
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dark12327


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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 4:36 am

did the Lich really need to use frost nova on a piece of rope? lol, other than that, excellent story man XD you should write another XD
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bloodlust6969


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Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 1:37 pm

John loved lordaeron so much that he was easily fooled by the lich's promises and sweet talking. Laughing i typed too fast that i did not notice some mistake hehe...
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cinnamon


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Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 2:07 pm

nice story.

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kenpachi90


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Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 2:22 pm

nice story ,,,I like it

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Transfat


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Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 10:10 pm

dark12327 wrote:
did the Lich really need to use frost nova on a piece of rope?


LOLOL. lol...frost nova on a piece of rope...ROFL.

good story Smile

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