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Dreadful Witchcraft

Posted on Wed May 06, 2009 7:32 am

Prologue

One more night has passed. One more dawn has rised. Normally she should have just woke up. But she didn't. For she can't sleep. Since she mastered the witchcraft. But she losed her predicting ability.

*flashback*
She used to be called "Prophet". Yeah, she was the real prophet. She could predict what would happen in the future. She charged really expensive for that pesky prediction. Which in turn awoke the anger of a new fresh warrior: Malfurion.

Malfurion, also known as Furion, really hated the witch. She used his predicting ability to enrich herself and make her customer keep in pain. But people could do nothing, for she was the only human to be able to predict.

On a fateful day, the witch said that she hated nature. She wanted to destroy the nature. And that was more than enough to make this figure angry: Furion!

He could leash his anger no more. He must finish it NOW!

He immediately jumped to the witch, and began throwing a green ball towards the witch. She was surprised, she was shocked, and what she could do was just to be panicked. In a matter of time, the witch was defeated, and after the defeat, Furion came in front of the mass and started his "victory speech".

"Night Elf, you've been tormented in pain by this b*tch. Your wealth has been taken out by this stingy witch. Could you withstand it?"

"NOO!!" said the mass.

"You know, she used to say she was always true. But, what's the fact?"

"She's wrong!!"

"So, what should we do to her?"

"Strike her down!!"
"Embarass her in front of us!!"
"Rape her!!"
"Please don't."

"Okay I've decided. What about casting her to another place, or world ?"

"Yeah!!!"

"And of course I have to take out all her power."

And so be what he said.

"Nnnnooo......"
What a pitiful scream.

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After the cast, she really hated the Furion, especially after he took the title "Prophet". Now Furion is the Prophet, and the witch was nobody.

She decided to study witchcraft. She thought that it's the only way to defeat the Prophet, and to get her title back.

She never thought, that she would be famous in an environment called.. league. She didn't even know what that word means. But it's true.

*end of flashback*

The previous night she heard that Furion joined the Night Elf, not as a common warrior, but as the leader ! Now, she will make a decision..

"I.."
"Krobelus.."
".. shall join the Undead.."
".. as the Death Prophet.."

And so the figure answered, "Good choice. Your title is a bit 'torn' now, but heck we'll wreck the Night Elf!!"

"Okay Ner'zhul.."
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Posted on Wed May 06, 2009 7:57 am

Good.

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Posted on Wed May 06, 2009 9:37 am

@ shadowofdoom
thanks

currently thinking of the idea for the next chapters

edit: welcome to ds!
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Posted on Wed May 06, 2009 9:49 am

"He came in front of the masses"

Eeuw........
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Posted on Wed May 06, 2009 10:16 am

good! continue please
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Posted on Wed May 06, 2009 1:01 pm

@ jacobus
is it a grammar mistake? :p

@ wazzynator
gonna think for more ins..pi..ra..tion
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Posted on Wed May 06, 2009 8:08 pm

@last dota freak

jacobus is thinking pervertedly lol

and not bad, nice backdrop and a few funny parts (the rape thing and Nerzhul haha) ^^ has potential to be EPIC
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Posted on Wed May 06, 2009 8:49 pm

nice prologue. Continue plzzz
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Posted on Thu May 07, 2009 1:46 am

RAPE...

ORIGINAL...

PICTURES
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Posted on Thu May 07, 2009 1:53 am

But i think that theres too little description though, but its still good!
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Posted on Thu May 07, 2009 5:57 am

>_< i thought krobelus and furion were once married then krobelus left because furion harassed and beat her up (she is a battered wife) then she joined the scourge to kill furion... oh btw.. malfurion=malicious furion
Dont take this badly but make it quite more descriptive like yujin said... and add some more jokes if this would be a funny fanfic ^_^
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Posted on Thu May 07, 2009 6:03 am

lol@jacobus and yeah, maake it a bit more descriptive.

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Posted on Thu May 07, 2009 6:05 am


Lolz
@topic,
Nice story!! Better than mine T_T Why?????
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Posted on Thu May 07, 2009 6:35 am

nooby is an akatsuki XD
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Posted on Thu May 07, 2009 8:41 am

@ tesca
nice suggestion and spam :p . oh and it's a fanfic eh? read amc's finshed fanfic, magina turned into a gay

@ nooby, dohyun, ultimateking, soulpyre
thanks y'all!

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btw sorry, i'm a bit busy in making an gc entry. after that, i promise i'll continue this fanfic unlike my previous one
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