Fan Fiction        Page 1 of 3        Goto page 1, 2, 3  Next

DragonKnight

DotaStrategy.com Forum Index > Fan Fiction > DragonKnight

Reply to topic
 Goto page 1, 2, 3  Next

SilentControl.ph

Mega Kill Posts: 595 Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Currently banned 15743 gold

DragonKnight



I've tried writing fanfics but it always comes out differently than how I imagine it an becomes an epic fail. Which is why I always scrap my ideas but this time I'm sticking to one.

I do not post the segements of the story. Insted I just I edit them so you can look at it as a continuos story.

Summer Dragon

A calm not unlike that of what happens before a storm came upon the land. The scenery is peaceful and serene in the desert, no animals are in sight, but at closer inspection one will see the the tracks of an iron clad warrior suddenly stop in the middle of nowhere. These tracks were left by a very special knight, Davion.

A mysterious humanoid creature who's face is hidden behind a hood that seems to absorb light, for his face was unseen even when the glaring sun shone on it. The creature knelt and touched the tracks with hands covered by a guantlet. He then said "blast!, this can't be right?!. How can he have suddenly disappeared? Last time I checked human knights didn't have the ability to fly." He looked around, for he was in a plain wherein you could see for miles away. Then suddenly ,from out of nowhere, a column of flame jutted out from an unknown direction. This flame was no normal flame. It did not singe the body nor any material thing. It singed the soul. Gondar felt as though he was being burnt from the inside out as he backstepped a few feet from his position. just as quickly as the flame erupted. As he dodged, he noticed the flame was coming out of the ground. BOOM, out of the ground was his prey. Gondar, in the calmest manner, threw a shuriken at Davion.

Davion raised his shield to meet the shuriken whilst keeping an eye on his foe. The shuriken flew through the air with blinding speed and imbeded itself in his shield. Davion realizing this was his chance flung himself at Gondar and with all his might swung his sword to ground. Gondar swiftly drew his two curved short swords, finessed the mighty swing with his left and stabbed with his right, all in an instant.
The momentum Davion created with his sword was so strong he couldn't redirect it to hit Gondar nor evade the stab, which went through his armor. Instead his sword hit the ground with such force that it threw both of them upwards. Gondar's speed and agility allowed him to land on his feet whilst Davion crashed to the sand covered ground with a dull thud.

Gondar ,realizing this was his chance, swiftly ran to Davion and stabbed him repeatedly. Gondar's stab was like a rain of steel. Davion could barely keep up. He blocked with his shield, parried with his sword but could not avert all of the stabs.

Davion ,feeling his armor cool enough, breathed another soul burning flame which made Gondar wince in pain. Davion quickly got up jumped as high as his two legs could get him and struck down again but this time with his shield. Gondar was hit squarely on the temple of his head. The effect of his shield bash was devastating, the sound of bone cracking and blood being spilt was but a few of its effects. Gondar fell to the ground and slowly began to turn invisible whilst his green blood drenched the sand.

Davion thinking his foe vanquished, took his armor off and quickly tried to asses his injuries to treat those that might be life threatening. "One, two, three, four......... seventeen. Luckily none hit anything important. I better hurry back and tell them the supply lines have been cleared."

Gondar bloody, bruised and in pain silently crept up in front of Davion ready to strike him with a killing blow. Gondar thought to himself "one stab to the brain and even this warrior will go down".

A volley of arrows coming out of nowhere flew through the air and hit right in front of Davion. Davion ,apathetically, looked in front of him only to find the arrows stopped in midair.

A hooded figure behind ,a hundred feet away from Gondar, shot the arrows. This archer was Alleria The Windrunner. Through a combination of windmagic dexterity and agility she shot exactly 10 arrows in the air which formed a straight line but Gondar was undetered and was still moving perilously close to an armorless knight that seemed utterly exhausted. Alleria realizing her arrows had little effect, drew one arrow and focused all of her windmagic on it. When she shot the magic arrow, it flew through the air and reached the invisible creature with immense speed. Finally Gondar was felled by this mysterious archer.

Davion seemed unphased by all this. He continued cleaning his wounds with his waterskin(water container) and bandaging them. By the time Davion had finished tending to his wounds Alleria was watching him intently. "You're wounds heal as you clean them. What is the point of this?" said Alleria. Davion replied "My wounds may heal fast but they do not disinfect themselves. Living through stabs, slashes and bludgeonings are useless if I die later due to an infection". Alleria responded "None the less, we need to move to. An important battle is about to ensue." Davion said in a calm and composed manner "We won't make it in time even if we walk 24 hours a day." Silenced enveloped the two whilst Davion was putting his armor back on and cleaning his weapon.

The silence lasted for about 45 minutes. Then Davion stood up and took a small sack out of the sand and pulled out a tent, firewood and flint. Alleria shocked said "Were you planning on missing one of the most important battles of this war from the beggining?! COWARD!!" Davion replied with a calm the likes of which is often used to talk to impatient and questioning children "We have a much more important task to attend to"
_________________
If you could reason with religious people, there wouldn't be any religious people. - Dr. House


Last edited by SilentControl.ph on Wed May 20, 2009 6:00 am; edited 5 times in total


Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

dohyun99

Chambermaid Posts: 4662 Joined: 21 Aug 2007 23898 gold



pretty good, another DK fan fic ftw ^^

keep writing! Smile
_________________
Writer's Block is BACK!
http://www.dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic27370.html

Glacius91 created this Avatar




Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private messageVisit poster's website


Back to top
 

treex

First Blood Posts: 23 Joined: 27 May 2008 286 gold



Oh Ehm Gee...A DK fanfic?
I have competition...time to get the big guns out.

Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

sopas111

Beyond Godlike Posts: 2691 Joined: 24 Oct 2008 Warnings : 2 58209 gold



Dohyun is always here to support our fan fics. Well I can say Dk is famous. Keep Comin'

Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

DotALovestoned

Dominating Posts: 168 Joined: 06 Aug 2008 4787 gold



nice Very Happy

Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

lokiochaos

Mega Kill Posts: 563 Joined: 06 Apr 2007 13625 gold



i like it. nice Smile
_________________



Watch my replays
MyBrute


Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

dohyun99

Chambermaid Posts: 4662 Joined: 21 Aug 2007 23898 gold



@sopas

i love a good story Smile
_________________
Writer's Block is BACK!
http://www.dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic27370.html

Glacius91 created this Avatar




Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private messageVisit poster's website


Back to top
 

SilentControl.ph

Mega Kill Posts: 595 Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Currently banned 15743 gold



Any input on where the story went wrong, became stupid, became dull or any thing like that would be great.
_________________
If you could reason with religious people, there wouldn't be any religious people. - Dr. House


Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

Corvus coraX ^

Killing Spree Posts: 70 Joined: 21 Mar 2009 2019 gold



Please continue...
_________________
.::I belive in God and I'm proud of it::.

Allah is my God, Muhammed is my leader, Kur'an is my direction, Shehid is may path, death on Allah's way is my greatest wish!


Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private messageSend e-mailMSN Messenger


Back to top
 

dohyun99

Chambermaid Posts: 4662 Joined: 21 Aug 2007 23898 gold



NICE!

latest edit is sick ^^ gondar got wtfpwned by some arrows Laughing
_________________
Writer's Block is BACK!
http://www.dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic27370.html

Glacius91 created this Avatar




Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private messageVisit poster's website


Back to top
 

SilentControl.ph

Mega Kill Posts: 595 Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Currently banned 15743 gold



Pls give suggestions. I have no idea what to write next.
_________________
If you could reason with religious people, there wouldn't be any religious people. - Dr. House


Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

yujin

Dominating Posts: 183 Joined: 29 Mar 2009 4980 gold



Write that Dk got raped by akasha? LOL. And no, i was just joking.
_________________
I'm hot! Dont you think so?


Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

dohyun99

Chambermaid Posts: 4662 Joined: 21 Aug 2007 23898 gold



nice stuff ^^

well u can have the 2 ally up and go off on some sort of adventure or whatnot Smile

or u can make them have a love affair Laughing
_________________
Writer's Block is BACK!
http://www.dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic27370.html

Glacius91 created this Avatar




Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private messageVisit poster's website


Back to top
 

erik200

Mega Kill Posts: 577 Joined: 20 Jan 2008 Warnings : 1 16652 gold



great stuff ;P
_________________
My replays:

http://dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic16873.html


Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 

SilentControl.ph

Mega Kill Posts: 595 Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Currently banned 15743 gold



This is still part of summer dragon but I thought maybe I should make the story non-linear.

Strike unit

In the sentinel base a small group of trained warriors each a master of there own unique style of warfare. One of them was Sven, A small warrior barely taller than a dwarf who had disproportionally huge muscles on his arms and thighs. He carried a huge sword that not even an ogre could wield effectively. He barely had any armor. The few of it that was on him protected him only at his shoulders, head and knees. To him those three areas was all that needed to be protected, for he knew that with the type of mission he was going o undertake that if he wasn't able to quickly mow down there enemies, no amount of armor could save him.

Sven: "Kunka, tommorow night we set out. You are second in charge, if Davion and our new recruit doesn't come what'll we do?" Kunka: "We have no choice but to proceed as planned. With or without our commanding officer." Sven: "This mission needs at least 4 of the best to succeed. Even with 4 we only have the smallest of chances. How can we do it with 2?!" Kunka: "I know of 1 warrior we can substitute our missing comrades. We just need to find him as fast as we can." Sven: "We'd still be short on men." Kunka: " We'll just have to make do, besides thanks to Davion our soldiers can push into the enemy base further. The seige weapons, food, reserve soldiers and weapons that got to our base will be help enough."

The next day...

Animal sounds have stopped, trees no longer rustled, it was as if the whole of the forest knew the gravity of what was going to happen. Tent flaps open, footmen pop out. Some of the men take up arms whilst some man steam tanks. Steam tanks move and there guttural noise resound as though to punctuate the urgency of the situation. Goblins manned the mortars. Orc "grunts" suddenly popped out of concealment, it was as if they materialised out of thin air. Some of the grunts manned there seige engines known as demolishers. Human engineers start there flying machines. Both orc and humans were readying for a conventional war

Whilst the orcs and the humans were trying to work together and set aside there differences all of the elves were already in formation. Blood elves, nagas and night elves alike were in small units. Each elven unit consisted of a versatile squad leader, often a blood elf, a marksman to pin the enemy down ,often a nightelf, a melee specialist , often a naga, and a spellcaster.
_________________
If you could reason with religious people, there wouldn't be any religious people. - Dr. House


Last edited by SilentControl.ph on Wed May 20, 2009 5:51 am; edited 2 times in total


Reply with quoteView user's profileSend private message


Back to top
 
 
Reply to topic - Quick Reply
Page 1 of 3    Goto page 1, 2, 3  Next



View previous topic   View next topic
All times are GMT

Display posts from previous:    

You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum
You cannot attach files in this forum
You can download files in this forum


Jump to:  


DotaStrategy.com Forum Index    .    Fan Fiction
Subscribe to Feed