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Hunting the Hunter *Chapter 3 Out!!!*

Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 6:56 am

I'm a pretty crappy writer but here goes nothing..

Intro
It was a dark and chilly night, so quiet, so peaceful… Suddenly a scream pierced the silence and echoed through the mountains. Balanar had claimed yet another victim.
Furion could no longer stand it. This beast had to be stopped soon, before it claimed another victim. “Too many have been lost…,” he thought to himself. “There must be somebody that can stop him. I would go myself but, this war with the Scourge is keeping me busy.” Pacing back and forth, Furion finally figured out the solution to the problem.
So far, he had been sending men solo out to try and stop the monster. Those men had no special powers and were definitely no match for Balanar.

Furion knew he would have to send one of his heroes, no matter how much he needed for the war against the Scourge. No! He would have to send 2 of his heroes, to make sure Balanar would perish. But who? Who should he send? Balanar was a master of controlling the night, where he was stronger.

After a long and hard thought, Furion decided who would fight Balanar: Kunkka and Rhasta.

Kunkka... master of the sea. With his giant blade tidehunter, he could control water and bursts of torrents wherever he wanted. No armor could withstand such a mighty blade and warrior.

Rhasta... the ability to channel dark magics through a shackle and hold someone would provide ample time for Kunkka to unleash his fury. Also with the ability to summon giant snakes and summon thunder would add some bonus firepower to stop the evil Balanar.

"These two," thought Furion,"will surely be able to bring peace to our side of the the Great River."

Please help me make it better!
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 1:45 pm

Makes it to the point and post as much as possible chapter as fast as u can
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:26 pm

keep writing and youll get better with each chapter
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:18 am

@dohyun99
nice image!
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 5:04 pm

thank you hahaaha
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:08 pm

lol i was gonna give up cuz no one was reading it for so long!
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:07 pm

dont give upppppppppppppppp
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 12:18 am

Chapter 1
As he suited up for battle, Kunkka asked Rhasta," Have you ever fought with this guy?" "No, but I hear Furion has before. He almost captured that foul beast but he escaped," Rhasta replied. "He must be really powerful, that Balanar," thought Kunkka," to be able to escape Furion and still have the nerve to attack again. How could Furion even trust us with such a powerful adversary?" A firm slap on the back woke him up from his muse. "You ready?" asked Rhasta? "Lets do this."

They had past the last Guardian before any of the two spoke. "Its getting a bit chilly eh?" "Yeah" A slight rustle in the dense forest exhilerated Rhasta and Kunkka. "What was that?!" whispered Kunkka. "Probably just some rabbit or something," Rhasta assured.

In the dark cave, Balanar chuckled. "These two scrubs against me!" "What could that Furion possibly be thinking." "I know, HE ISN'T! Am I right, am I right?" Fluffy the bat shook his head in disappointment. "WHAT?!?!" Balanar raised his right fist and it started glowing a faint purple. Suddenly Fluffy imploded and with his dying breath, the little bat squeaked," QQ."

"Hey Rhasta, where do we go next?" asked Kunkka. "I though you had the map!" exclaimed Rhasta. "What the hell?!?!" "Crap man, we're already to far to turn back. We might as well just follow the one path that we're on. "What if we pass wherever Balanar is?" asked the worried Kunkka. "Well Balanar is a stalker... so he can stalk us right?" "Oh yeah! But he can catch us off guard if we are waiting for him to come to us." "Then we must be alert at all times."

"These fools. They have no idea what they are getting into," though Balanar. "Oh well, I just get more people to kill." Suddenly Chiggly the scout flew in and crashed into the wall. "Hey boss!" "What do you want?" snapped Balanar. "Well I looked through the two challengers' bags and found out what they are carrying." "Hit me with it," Balanar said. "Well if you say so," replied Chiggly. The bat flew out the cave. "What?" mumbled Balanar.

"Its gettin dark," said Kunkka. "Be on your toes," Rhasta told him. "We are officially in Balanar's territory now."

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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:23 am

Its good, keep writing!
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:21 am

its good ^_^ dont give up..
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:42 am

I made a userbar for the fanfic. How do I hyperlink it to this thread?

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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 5:33 pm

i forget lol, PM one of the sig makers and i think they might know. or just PM a blue or red guy (besides me)
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 5:54 pm

Hey, its great! One of the rare fafics that i read trough.
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Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 6:23 am

Chapter 2
"Where are they, where are they?!" thought Chiggly. As he rushed through the dense forest... THUD! "Ouch!" "Bumped into another tree." "I seriously need to stop talking to myself and start busting some echolocation." After about 28 minutes of flying through the forest and occasionally crashing into trees, Chiggly found the main road. "Footprints.." he thought," those two must be headed this way." With that said, Chiggly flew after Kunkka and Rhasta.

"I really think we're past Balanar," said Kunkka. "Chill mon, let him come to us, we're prepared anyways," Rhasta replied. "Fine..., but if nobody comes, we are turning around. Got that?" "Ok."

"There they are!" thought Chiggly, as he turned right on the road and saw 2 figures. "Lets hit the nos!" Chiggly whooshed past everything in sight. THUD! "OUCH!!!" "Not again!" "HAHAHAHAHAHA, stupid bat!," exclaimed a rock golem. "You the are retarded!" "You're mean!" squealed Chiggly as he flew away.

"What is up with that stupid bat?" thought Balanar. "Why the hell did he say 'if you say so'?" "I'm gonna rip his toes off when he gets back..." Balanar waved his glowing hand in the air and a wavy oval appeared. "Rhasta and Kunkka," the stalker declared. The ovals glowed and suddenly it showed Rhasta and Kunkka walking. "It seems they are nearing my cave. This will be a perfect time to attack."
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Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 5:48 pm

nice tone haha, entertaining indeed ^^ keep writing
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