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rafraf


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"The Fall of Damnation3: The Naga Rebellion"

Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:06 am

"The Fall of Damnation3: The Naga Rebellion"

-PROLOGUE-

Rikimaru took about a day to reach the desert outskirts of Terisdall. There lies the Sentinel encampment in which Purist, along with Furion and Rooftrellen discuss their assault of the Frozen Throne. Night was already settled above the clouds, and very cold winds scatter throughout the area.

Rikimaru came rushing in Purist's tent very much exhausted and heavily breathing for air.

All three leaders stared intently at him.

-CHAPTER 1-

"I bring bad news...", Rikimaru struggled for air.

"What?", said Purist. Rikimaru told everything from the Scourge army destroying Agrimar and heading back south and the death of Gondar, Ezalor and Davion.

"Too much innocent deaths...", Rooftrellen said. He bowed his head in grimace.

"I sware to my death that they will be avenged!", Rikimaru anguishly stated.

"What should we do, Purist?", Rooftrellen looked at Purist

"I think we should act now, take some major action!", added Furion

Purist took some moments of silence. He couldn't think clearly. He himself needed guidance. He could only think of the deaths of his friends. He knew he shouldn't retaliate too soon. After a few moments, a scout barged in.

"Sire, the Naga are here! What should we do?", the scout was in panic.

"What? So they want more punishment, I'll give it to them--! ", Purist calmed Furion.

"--It's ok, my friend. They're with us.", smiled Purist.

-CHAPTER 2-

The leader of the Naga rebels was in company of her guards as she came in the tent to greet them new allies.

"Purist Thunderwrath, we and my Naga brethren are here and ready for your services.", said the rebel leader.

"Slithice, thank goodness you're here. We thought you hadn't escaped.", said Purist.

"Some of us haven't, sire. I bring only the few who did.", replied Slithice.

"How come the some of the Naga rebelled?", asked Furion.

"We are in deep slavery, milord", she explained. "We did not want anymore of the corrupt dominance of our present Naga king, Slardar. We then decided to join the Sentinel.". Slithice stated her story on how she and the rebels ran away from the king's clutches.

-CHAPTER 3-

REBELLION ESCAPE

The sun was beggining to set on Sandcoral shore when an alarm was sounded by several Tidal Guardians. They were in seige by rebel myrmidons, sirens and murlocs escaped from their prison.

"King Slardar! Slithice and her rebels has escaped!", Medusa, the gorgon witch, busted open the coral doors.

"Get me my weapon, Grobus!", said Slardar. "I'll kill that traitor for abusing my kind generosity!". He sprinted across the coral floor.

Sandcoral shore is populated by rebels and Nagas at war. Most of the shore-guard Naga were dead, leaving the rebels open for escape. Then mistakebly more of the Nagas arrived along with Slardar and Medusa. Some are left to fight. The battle was in favor of the Naga king. He and Medusa alone defeated almost half of the rebels who remained.

Meanwhile in the middle of battle, Slardar sees Slithice not far from him. He sprints across and bumps Slithice hard down the coral ground. She focuses her look on the attacker.

"You traitor! Prison not enough for you?", Slardar accused.

"Don't underestimate me. I know you very well, brother. I can still remember beating you in everything. Besides, you were the traitor. You will lead our pitiful race to ashes!", Slithice said. She made herself many. She then attacked Slardar altogether.

Slardar blocked every single strike dealt on him. They jumped back and attacked again but they were no use. He slashed the first two attackers and stun-smashed the other. He then sprinted and grabbed hold on the neck of the remaining one.

"Perhaps you don't remember that I've grown strong, sister. Your petty illusions don't scare me. Maybe death will suit you.", Slardar gave the final blow to her sister. To his surprise it too was an illusion. "That rat!", he shouted.

Most of the rebels escaped along with Slithice towards the forests of Frojourn and met with Purist and Yurnero along their way.

There they agreed settling an alliance with the Sentinel...

-EPILOGUE-

"I'm deeply sorry, especially for the death of your men.", apologized Furion.

"I understand, milord", replied Slithice. "They deaths will be remembered"

"Ok, I think we are ready for our assault.", said Purist. I, Furion and Rooftrellen, along with the our comrades will prepare for war while you, Slithice, with some of the heroes with engage the assault."

"It is done then. I will prepare my friends from the forests...", said Rooftrellen

"I shall prepare the satyrs.", stated Rikimaru. He disappeared from the tent along with Rooftrellen. The rest left discussed more...

*Frostcreep plains, where lies the tower containing the Frozen Throne*

Kel'Thuzad came in the throne room and touched the blocked shards of ice which contained the Lich King, as if trying to have mental conversation. After a few moments, Kel'Thuzad spoke.

"Yes, master...", said Kel'Thuzad. "We will ready the men."

Not far from the eerie room another watches the silent trance of two same beings. Though, he is not one of them.

But one of the Sentinel...
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Eustace2


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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:15 am

Another great story...
Continue it faster...xD

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devilfeathers


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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:23 am

Nice story...
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Eustace2


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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:25 am

I am wondering who's the one from the sentinel?Is is rylai?
Well we will understand in the 4th chapter

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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:44 am

I think the spy is morphling. You know, the replicate skill. I want chapter 3 soon!
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Eustace2


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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:47 am

@THE_ONLY This is chapter 3 lol..
Whenare you going to post teh 4th one?

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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:48 am

oooops. my bad
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rafraf


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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:56 am

I was thinking of a Sentinel traitor in the Epilogue. What do you think guys?

Thanks so much for the comments! Smile
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 9:59 am

I'm really liking this series. I say thing as kind of a motivation, you should add if we liked your story donate 50 gold. I know I will. This is almost to good to be free. 150 gold coming your way for 3 stories.

Keep them up.
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rafraf


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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 10:04 am

Wow thanks man! I didn't know that those kinda stuff give you money!
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Eustace2


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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 10:17 am

Hmm.Sentinel traitor?Who?
Otherwise it's great idea to have a traitor...

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rafraf


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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 10:19 am

You will know in the next story Smile (na naman)
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:34 pm

So ... Its Been A Long Time rafraf...How About Parts 4 And 5 To Finish It All Off 'Neh?
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 10:45 pm

great story, i cant wait the 4th part..

btw make the 2nd part of d NBA please

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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 11:25 am

Nice...

I currently have some thoughts about the traitor...

Anyways excellent story.
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