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Abaddon's story

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:30 am

A ton of spare time from holidays mixed with a second rate idea equals a very low quality fan fic, enjoy.
Oh and Abaddon doesn't have a horse, and Frostmourne changes colour according to Abaddon's state of mind which explains why Frostmourne is blue all the time by the end.

1. Intro
Frostmourne was Black...
A tear rolled down my cheek. I looked up from my dead companion's body and as sorrow turned to hatred, Frostmourne turned blue. A thousand ghouls stood before me, but they were nothing. The only thing that existed was Travex's killer, Nessaj would die because Frostmourne hungered...
Casting a shield around me I barged through the ghouls, the wisest stepped aside others were simply slaughtered by Frostmourne in his most powerful state. When the ghouls finally saw my intentions, they attacked me from behind. My shield was not perfect, it would only protect the front of me, my backside was like a sitting duck. But even as they lunged at me I kept running toward my goal. I saw the fear in Nessaj's eyes, I saw him turn to run, I saw the cut that Frostmourne left on him. But that was all I saw, because the ghouls had gotten to me and conciousness had left me.


2. True Power.
I saw them coming and new she was to die.
"Abaddon please... please save me" she said. I saw them tower over me I felt myself shake as I held my sword up. I heard them laugh, I felt them push me over I heard her scream. But I was too weak, too afraid. Then I saw them draw their sword, ready to strike her dead...
I woke up with a jolt. Furion's smiling face hovered above me. "You're okay young one, you had me worried for a second."
"W...What happened to Travex..." I asked but knew the answer, knew it wasn't another bad dream, "Furion?"
A grim look appeared on his face, "she's... she's dead." Tears flooded out of my eyes, "I wasn't strong enough Furion, I could have saved her. If I... If I was strong.. strong like you Furion, she'd still be alive." I cried. Furion shook his head.
"When will you learn? It is not strength that you want, strength is not true power. It's this," he said thumping the left side of his chest, "This, love, is true power..."
"But I was a coward, I was so scared... I didn't even try to help," I said ashamed, the tear flow hadn't stopped. Furion smiled.
"It is those who have the most to lose that have the most to fear. The scourge may seem courageous and strong but that is because they have nothing, not even hearts..." he said, "Now get some rest, you still haven't completely recovered." he concluded, patting me on the head and walking out of the room.

3. Big mistake
I heard a faint whisper outside my room, as quietly as possible I got out of bed and put my ears to the door.
"You're making a big mistake Furion," whispered a voice which I easily identified as Zeus'.
"About what?" asked Furion audibly.
"About.. About keeping him, he already has a thirst for strength."
"I've told you already, don't question him, I trust him with all my heart," said Furion defiantly.
"He'll betray us, you wait and see. You're making a big mistake Furion, a big mistake." Zeus arrogantly murmured. Furion began to speak in my defence, but I didn't want to listen, I went back to my bed, fresh tears rolling down my cheeks.

If i can be stuffed i'll write some more
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:37 am

u have some wrong spelling but its a nice story
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:52 am

Nice one, but I like easy words that you use in dota rumble school.
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Can you see the light??

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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:01 am

not too good not too bad
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