Warcraft III : Medihv Warriors

Warcraft III : Medihv Warriors

Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:03 pm

In the village of Onoka, a huge amount of humans live there. In Onoka every human is trained to their liking of class. Although they have survived of the war against the undead, they have bought peace for 10 years. Now this is where the story begins. In the town of Onoka lives a man named Odisi. He was one of the warriors who fought in the last war and survived against the undead. Rumors were now spreading that the king of the undead had created a massive army to destroy the entire human race. So since no one had believed it except Odisi, he headed toward the King's palace where he shall confirm if it's true or not. When he arrived, he questioned the king if he had a second to talk. He was a bit annoyed but still the King would still listen to Odisi. After several minutes talking of the massive army of the undead, the King had beleived the honourable knight. Their scouts have seen the formation of the undead army and reported the news back here at the palace and the King still refused to believe this fact. So now having a sudden silence in the palace, Odisi was sent out of the palace and sent home. So as our hero walked back into his shadow of the sunset, the King had started planning to make his own horrifying army to fight against the undead.
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:07 pm

Dude..good attempt but you really need to improve and expand your plot, adding more feelings to it..Make it more, natural. When you write that way, I picture my younger brother writing a short story for a school assignment..
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:12 pm

I like the idea, but it seems like evrything is all over the place. Doubt i have any room to talk though but i agree with Amplirage, put some more details in it.
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:53 pm

You really need to work on this...
To me, it looks like you put it together in 15 minutes...
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