Jaws - Man Eating Shark YES STRAIGHT FROM THE MOVIE/NOVEL!!

Jaws - Man Eating Shark YES STRAIGHT FROM THE MOVIE/NOVEL!!

Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 4:17 am

A gigantic 20ft Great White shark, with vicious killer instincts and a nose to detect even the slightest weaknesses, Jaws stalks the prey and charges with such force, shocking the breath out of the victim, giving it only enough time to see the 5 rows of jagged sharp blades surrounding a bottomless black pit.

Attack Damage: 51~53
Attack Range: Melee
Movement Speed: 280
Armour Rate: 4
Stats:
STR: 21 + 3.1 (main)
AGI: 14 + 1.2
INT: 17 + 1.8

Rush Recklessly: Quickly swims next to the enemy and attacks once, dealing damage and drawing blood. All targets with blood drawn keep bleeding for 15 seconds. Deals no extra damage however and slows for 5%
Level 1) 50% of attack damage
Level 2) 100% of attack damage
Level 3) 150% of attack damage
Level 4) 200% of attack damage
Manacost: 85
Cooldown: 7 seconds

Sharkskin: The skin of a shark has plates and rows of jagged blades, rather than smooth as most people think. As Jaws grows older, he grows more layers of these plates.
Level 1) +2 armour, 10% chance to block 15 damage, 10% chance that each time the enemy attacks, cuts himself on the blades, drawing blood
Level 2) +4 armour, 15% chance to block 25 damage, 20% chance that each time the enemy attacks, cuts himself on the blades, drawing blood
Level 3) +6 armour, 20% chance to block 35 damage, 30% chance that each time the enemy attacks, cuts himself on the blades, drawing blood
Level 4) +8 armour, 25% chance to block 45 damage, 40% chance that each time the enemy attacks, cuts himself on the blades, drawing blood
Manacost: n/a
Cooldown: n/a

Stalk: A shark can smell 1 drop of blood in an ocean, so when he smells blood, his hunter-killer instincts kick him, ignoring most of his surroundings and getting ready to hunt the target down.
Level 1) Target's icon appears on map. Ignores 7% of all incoming damage. Increases movement speed by 5% and attack speed by 5%.
Level 2) Target's icon appears on map. Ignores 14$ of all incoming damage. Increases movement speed by 10% and attack speed by 10%.
Level 3) Target's icon appears on map. Ignores 21% of all incoming damage. Increases movement speed by 15% and attack speed by 15%
Level 4) Target's icon appears on map. Ignores 28% of all incoming damage. Increases movement speed by 20% and attack speed by 20%
Manacost: n/a
Cooldown: n/a

Kill - For the kill, Sharks chomp down of their prey with crushing force and erratically move their jaws in random directions, ripping what little sinew is left. Stuns for 1 second and deals 150 damage for each jerk of the head. Target is left bleeding
Level 1) 1 jerks
Level 2) 2 jerks
Level 3) 3 jerks
Manacost: 200/150/100
Cooldown: 150/120/90 seconds




LOL i got this idea off the movie and book JAWS,,,,,,,,
Im going to make ALIEN and PREDATOR and PREDALIEN off AVP.
Then Im going to make ET and then,.. and then... and then...
im going to make CONSUMABLE ITEMS IN THE DREAM ITEM SECTIONS YAY
But before the make the aliens and predators im going to make Gabriel's brothers SACHIEL and VALKYRIEL
YAY

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seriously,,, hmmm the 'Stalk' maybe a little TOO cheap lol,, but look at Balanar, I might have to remove the attack speed.
Ill explain how the ulti works later,
plz plz plz give comments

Last edited by Sachiel on Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:22 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:57 am

How the hell would Jaws get around on land?!?!?!
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 1:21 pm

dude hes JAWS, he gets around in his pimpmobile while whores give him a sponge bath :P
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 2:49 pm

@ above = you shock me.
Ignoring that issue (not the one where I have to slap War, the land issue), its not overly bad. Except for the ultimate being unbalanced and Stalk being even more unbalanced. They attack you three times and you get Sprint? No thanks...
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:15 pm

oh lol hadnt thought about that.
FINE ILL CHANGE IT

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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:25 pm

-renamed first skill
-nerfed STALK
-nerfed ulti

*explanation on how ulti works, its melee range so it would be nice to use RR first, then, use ulti on target and they are tossed around 1/2/3 times and afterwards, they land somewhere closeby and u can start attacking. the stun duration begins from the landing.

about the land thing.. i could ask, HOW DOES MORPHLING WEAR SHOES or
DOESNT WEAVER NEED 6 BOOTS

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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:31 pm

i could even go as far as to say, how does bounty and clinkz SCIENTIFICALLY go invisible to the naked eye, i mean they are made of matter, and that means when rays of light hit them, it reflects back into our eyes and we see them. GASP, that means that EVERYthing we see is the past (oh yes it is, the time gap is just too small to notice) but that means blink (which in anitmages description says is faster than light) means that by the time he blinks, the light reflected from that would take more time to go to our eye than him to his new location which means that there should be like an immobile image or something that tricks our brain but there isnt one. also, how do shoes increase your attack speed? i mean power streads, they have no contact with the hands whatsoever, i mean............................blah blah blah.........

i could go on forever, its just a game, get over it dude

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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 12:27 am

heres 1.

why the -bleep- is mortred scourge
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:19 am

yes!!!!! WHY!! WHY!!!! AND WHY IS BOUNTY HUNTER SENTINEL!!!!
AND WHY IS CHEEKY LITTLE MEEPO SCOURGE!!!
WHY IS JAKIRO SENTINEL
WHY IS MAGNUS SCOURGE
SKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

but seriously, comments plz ^^ THAT MAKE SENSE

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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 8:18 am

Answering time!

Q: Why Is Mortred Scourge?
A:She's a necrophiliac

Q: Why is Gondar Sentinel?
A: They paid him moar.

Q: Why is Meepo Scourge?
A: He's the evil god of Midgets.

Q: Why is Jakiro Sentinel?
A: The World Tree is his favorite place to be jerkin' his gerkin'.

Q: Why is Magnus Scourge?
A: They feed him better.

Q: Why the **** is Bard Man doing this.
A: Because Bard Man is bored and has no porn.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 11:04 pm

@Sachiel have u learned new staff in school and want to give a show off your brain's physics?
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:24 am

lol? its stuff
brain physics? dude, ur confused between biology and physics
rofl


so.... how do u guys like this better??
NERFED tonnes...

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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 11:57 am

jaws gets around in his pimpmobile!! remember that!

and guys, PLEASE stop arguing about how unrealistic DotA is. how bout this, how can a bow, and a staff, become a sword, and how can someone use 3 swords at once?
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 11:18 pm

THANK you

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