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Bleak - The Faceless

Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 5:02 pm

[img] http://in.geocities.com/renegade4eva/Bleak.jpg [/img]
Bleak - The faceless
Range: 130 | Move Speed: 305
Primary: AGI
Str: 17 + 1.7 | Agi: 21 + 2.8 | Int: 14 + 2.0
Damage: 45 - 55 | HP: 455 | Mana: 230
HP Regen: 0.82 | Mana Regen: 0.61
Attack Speed: 1.14| Armor: 2


Bleak once lived in the Hillsbrad Foothills. Living her life with her parents as tailors. Her parents were killed during an attack on their village. The aftermath of the attack also left her face scarred and deformed. Fleeing, she lived her life facing the cold and harshness of the Alterac Mountains, enduring the image of her now scattered face. One day, seeing her own reflection on the freshly frozen ice, she threw her sewing needle, shattering the ice, causing the frozen spikes in her surroundings to falls all around her. From there on, she sought revenge at any cost, joining the Sentinels with no regard for their cause, using what she was left by her parents, and what she has lived with.


[img] http://in.geocities.com/renegade4eva/1.jpg [/img] Bed of Needles()
Bleak drops a bed of needles on the ground. When enemy units trample over it, they suffer the small sharp pains of each and every single needle piercing through their armor, slowing them in their tracks. It slows units within 200 range by 50% for 3 seconds.
Level 1 - 50 damage
Level 2 - 100 damage
Level 3 - 150 damage
Level 4 - 200 damage
Mana Cost : 65/80/85/100
Cooldown : 30 seconds

[img] http://in.geocities.com/renegade4eva/2.jpg [/img] Poison Pin()
Bleak tips three needles with poison, ripping through flesh and restricts blood flow. Each needle deals the same damage. Each hit introduces a new effect. Range 300.
Level 1 - 25 damage, First hit, stuns for 0.25 seconds, Second hit, deals 6 damage every two second for 10 seconds, Third hit slows by 15% for 20 seconds.
Level 2 - 75 damage, First hit, stuns for 0.5 seconds, Second hit, deals 12 damage every two second for 10 seconds, Third hit slows by 20% for 20 seconds.
Level 3 - 135 damage, First hit, stuns for 0.75 seconds, Second hit, deals 18 damage every two second for 10 seconds, Third hit slows by 25% for 20 seconds.
Level 4 - 185 damage, First hit, stuns for 1.0 seconds, Second hit, deals 24 damage every two second for 10 seconds, Third hit slows by 25% for 20 seconds.
Mana Cost : 75/100/125/150
Cooldown : 45 seconds

[img] http://in.geocities.com/renegade4eva/3.jpg [/img] Needle Line ()
Bleak lassos an enemy with a live fill with needles. When attached, Bleak pulls the line forcing the needles to dig into the enemy.
Level 1 - 90 damage
Level 2 - 180 damage
Level 3 - 270 damage
Level 4 - 360 damage
Mana Cost : 100
Cooldown : 100/80/60/40 seconds

[img] http://in.geocities.com/renegade4eva/4.jpg [/img] Ice House()
Bleak summons a circle of ice around the area around her of 500. She merges into the glass disappearing for 5 seconds. Units, friends or foe entering the ice house are impounded by a rain of nails. Bleak is invulnerable for this time.
Level 1 - 70 damage per second
Level 2 - 140 damage per second
Level 3 - 205 damage per second
Mana Cost : 150/300/500
Cooldown : 160 seconds

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Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 11:58 am

Bard Man likes this idea, but mst of the skills seem to be taken from a character from Naruto (Haku), especially the Ult. None the less, Bard Man approves of this hero. The skills are inventive, fun, and potentially lethal to hero who could cross your path (Unless they are a very fed tank).

Oh, and don't worry about the images not working right. Bard Man can't do it right either.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 1:19 pm

noticed the cd's on the non ult spells, reduce them to 30 secs, i mean 100 sec's 3rd skill lvl 1? what sort of spam is that? they would hav healed themselves back the 90 hp, b4 u could use it again lol. make it a constant 30 and jst inc the manacost a bit to like 140 etc.
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Harass,deny,farm,kill,destroy,spend,support,own.
Dota, it's simple.

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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 1:10 pm

i like the hero very balanced to me
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Am i suppose to be happy all i ever wanted it comes with a price.

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