Peteak Strifelaugher - The Undead Barbarian

Peteak Strifelaugher - The Undead Barbarian

Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 9:32 am

Peteak Strifelaugher - The Undead Barbarian

Range: 120 | | Move Speed: 280 | Primary: STR
Str: 21 + 3.7 | Agi: 16 + 2.0 | Int: 15 + 1.0
Damage: 36 - 42 | HP: 549 | Mana: 195
HP Regen: 1.01 | Mana Regen: 0.51
Attack Speed: 1.54 | Armor: 2
Scourge
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A half-orc who terrorised people while he was alive, now derives pleasure at killing people.
Laughing when they fall, every bash of his mighty hammer destroys his enemies, and innocent
men alike. Promised a huge reward, he joins the Scourge on their mighty march, earning
the bonus of dead men's blood on his hands.
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Barbaric Pleasure [C]

Peteak derives pleasure from an enemy's pain. Dealing intense damage and causing the target
to lose vision, Peteak tears at a target enemy's eyes,and regains his health
while his enemy suffers. Miss lasts 3s at all levels.

Animation: like rupture. Blood will spurt out of the enemy for the duration of this spell.
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Level 1 - 50 damage, 10% miss, Peteak regains 25 health.
Level 2 - 100 damage, 20% miss, Peteak regains 50 health.
Level 3 - 150 damage, 30% miss, Peteak regains 100 health
Level 4 - 200 damage, 50% miss, Peteak regains 150 health

Manacost: 50/60/80/100
Cooldown:30/20/10/8
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Barbaric Might [G]

Passive
Peteak strikes with supreme might, causing random buffs on opponents to occur at a certain %.
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Level 1 - 2.5% chance to stun for 1 second, 5% chance to remove positive buffs(i.e empower, sprint ect.), and 5% chance to trigger a 5% decrease in movespeed. ( these buffs do not stack with each other, and will override each other)
Level 2 - 5% to stun, 10% to remove positive buffs, 10% chance to reduce 10% movespeed.
Level 3 - 10% to stun, 20% to remove positive buffs, 20% chance to reduce 20% movespeed.
Level 4 - 15% to stun, 25% to remove positive buffs, 25% chance to reduce 25% movespeed.

Manacost:-
Cooldown:-
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Barbaric Smash [B]

Peteak uses his inner might to smash a target enemy so hard that the enemy is heavily stunned. After which, Peteak receives more damage, due to using too much power, Peteak is fatigued.

Animation: like double edge, but the hammer hits the target's head.
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Level 1 - 2 Second stun, Peteak receives 10% more damage for 2 seconds.
Level 2 - 2.5 Second stun, Peteak receives 20% more damage for 5 seconds
Level 3 - 3 Second stun, Peteak receives 30% more damage for 6 seconds
Level 4 - 4 second stun, Peteak receives 40% more damage for 6 seconds.

Manacost:100/110/120/150
Cooldown:60/50/40/30
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Barbaric Leap [E]

Peteak jumps on the nearest ally creep for support, then leaps onto a target enemy, smashing his hammer onto the enemy's skull stunning him and dealing damage. The ally creep is killed After Peteak deals the damage, he will take 40% more damage for 5 seconds.

animation:like potm's leap, but this leaps off a creep.
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Level 1 - Leaps a range of 800, stuns for 2.5 seconds and deals 300 damage
Level 2 - Leaps a range of 1000, stuns for 3 seconds and deals 400 damage.
Level 3 - Leaps a range of 1200, stuns for 3.5 seconds and deals 500 damage.

Manacost: 150/200/300
Cooldown: 120/60/40
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Suggested item build
1.

- Because of his low base movespeed.
2.

3.

- To boost his hp and regen and damage.
4.

- Because Peteak has stuns, he will have time to dish out high damage, killing an enemy easily.
5.

6.

- To trigger bash and crits more often. 1 would suffice. This slot can be replaced by circumstantial items.
7.No 7 item slots but 1 hyper could be replaced by

, because when he uses his ulti and his stun skill, he will receive much more damage. So this is a double edge sword. You will receive alot of damage, so will your opponents.

Fourth HI, please give comments, CnC. Ect.

Last edited by gcrocker on Wed Sep 19, 2007 9:54 am; edited 1 time in total

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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 10:01 am

I think the mana cost for ulti is way too high..
otherwise a great hero

vangaurd wil be a good item for him early game

With arcane ring he will be able to spam his spells.

I think this hero is much like axe , he will be taking so much damage so increasing his armour will be important.

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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 4:45 pm

1st skill ok but what does the miss means the skill will miss or the enemy will have a blind like buff which makes the enemy to miss
2nd skill ok
3rd skill i know you don't want it make it imba but um remove the 60% more damage and lessen the stun period
4th skill lessen the mana cost he's not an int type and i know that you don't want make it imba make it 150/200/250
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 6:56 pm



I'm thinking the same. 60% dmg would just make this skill useless in 2v2 or more, it's double damage.

And once again, Ult cost is waaay too high.

But your hero is pretty greatly made, he would be fun to play

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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 8:53 am

considering the effects of the ult, lvl 1 400dmg 2.5 sec stun from a leap, 300 is justified, but i do not c ur hero be able to cast this in conjunction with ur other spells. i would consider remaking it a bit weaker, with a lower manacost, try maybe making it as strong as nerb's vendetta, by making the dmg less but keeping the stun, or adding the stun effects later and keeping the dmg around 250-300. it is a super dmging blink that early game could equal very easy kills.
the 5 sec stun is also imba, maybe make it 2.5 sec stun, followed by a 40% slow for 2.5 secs, with a 50% inc in dmg taken for 6 secs. this would make it more of a double edge in 1on1 situations, but an invaluable disable in ganks.
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 9:55 am

Edited slightly. The reason I did not edit in the slow is because I want to give this hero an extra twist. If it was with stun+ slow it would be just like Slardar's crush.
Give me your opinions guys, and thanks for comments

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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 12:02 pm

k nice, i guess it works out. gj.
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:29 pm

Thanks mango!

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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 11:33 am

Nice one!This is a great support hero!

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