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Pie.Cr3w

First Blood Posts: 21 Joined: 15 Oct 2006 0 gold

My Story (a rap)



Clocks rewind as we wonder bout wasted time
Time better spent in ways beyond this
We travel about our lives knowing not what we'll find
Just searching for a sign we haven't lost our minds

We live our lives, just a story to be told
We turn the page as the story unfolds
Hoping fotrune favors us this time
Nothing tortures character this line

As months fade to years and years fade to mist
We find ourselves learning better than to wish
For these past few months, I've been reminiscing back
It's the first time I couldn't understand what we had

Was it love, was it passion, was it illusions of the mind?
Now it's hate, now it's pain, now it's all this shit combined.
Nobody to blame but myself for being blinded
Ignorance is bliss but no need to hide behind it

Now I know why my brothers say these girls are all the same
But you had me so convinced that my world suddenly changed
Cuz you always made me smile but a smile isn't forever
Guess it's unpredictable like changing the weather

It always comes to pass that every story has an end
But I don't want my story to close before my chapter can begin

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TheUltimateOne

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Hmm... Looks like a poem, better yet, a sonnet of your own!
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yukino_silvermaine

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Recording of that with your voice!

XD
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Pie.Cr3w

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http://files.filefront.com/My_Story___Spoken_Wordmp3/;6342313;;/fileinfo.html

It has no beat, but that's my voice. <3

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yukino_silvermaine

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Nice!

XD
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Pie.Cr3w

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I am glad you think so Smile
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shadowmastermk47

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Rap = consecutive rhymes, usually

Eg.. (from In the End)
didn't look out below - a
watch the time go right out the window - a
trying to hold on, and didn't even know - a
I wasted it on, just to watch you go - a
I kept everything inside - b
even though I tried - b

a poem is like this:
(nothing much, just nothing...)
a man was tied from the inside - a
while his son was looking for food - b
when his wife just lied - a
then his son ate the food - b
and said it was good - b

But still, your rhymes (i heard it, ^^) are good, so I rate it 9/10 ^^

but if you want rapping, go to rapbattles.com, and go freestyle against real people (I'm a go to states to rap there in 3 years, ^^)
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xNemi

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Well i was gonna flame you for the first half being cliché and not actually going anywhere, but then i read the second half ("was it love, was it.. like change in the weather") and thought it was pretty good ^^ too bad you didn't write that part though huh?

http://www.lyricsdownload.com/chuckie-akenz-love-hurts-ft-kangel-lyrics.html

...oops? A full two verses stolen nearly word for word ;(
But hey! At least your recording was very amusing!

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captain_tesca

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nice.. love it!
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