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likey?

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varunshenoyg

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Posted on Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:43 am

Ok here is the comment u wanted: Chapter 3 is up.. Lol, I stole ur thunder Smile

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flameseeker

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Posted on Sat Nov 22, 2008 12:01 pm

YESSSSSSSSSS. Done. Finally
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RzfX

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Posted on Sat Nov 22, 2008 1:09 pm

flameseeker wrote:
Nice story. And to rival urs, i will write a new story of my own. xD

So I'm guessing that this is the one?

It's turning out well, especially how you use a wide vocabulary of deep words.
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flameseeker

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Posted on Sat Nov 22, 2008 2:03 pm

yes. thats the one. But then i kinda forgot bout to. So i had to make a ne story, following up from whtever i remembered of the old story.

Also, congragulation on being the first guy to post w/o being porpmted(on the story, not prologue)
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flameseeker

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Posted on Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:20 am

Seriously. ne1 reads this? I keep writing chapters and no1 bothers to comment. ...
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varunshenoyg

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Posted on Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:33 am

We all read this.. Pls continue
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flameseeker

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Posted on Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:36 am

i was just being an ass. Will continue in a short while/.
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varunshenoyg

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Posted on Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:37 am

Lolz..
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melkorthefoul10

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Posted on Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:11 am

Continue!!!!! Inst dr with Sent? or am i just a bit confused 2day?
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flameseeker

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Posted on Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:15 am

Its a story. And DR is with senti in the game.....this sint the game.
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RzfX

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Posted on Tue Nov 25, 2008 8:41 am

The story is turning out well. Chapters are a bit short but it's always been your style ever since. There's one thing that I noticed though...

An aura seemed to surround the sword, an icy cold wind that blew about around the sword.

You could rephrase it so as not to look redundant since you used the phrase, "the sword" twice in the same sentence. Maybe something like...

An aura seemed to surround the sword, icy cold winds blowing about it.

You tend to state some things repeatedly. I mean, this isn't your only redundant statement. But do remember that both our stories and writings will always have minor flaws although it's nothing we can't fix. Smile

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dohyun99

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Posted on Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:24 pm

what above said Laughing

anyways, this is an epic story, cant wait for more! Smile

ps: Drow owns? Cool

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AxeMurderer

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Posted on Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:26 am

I'm a bit confused about this part
"Do not do something you can't, fool. I am stronger than u in a hundred thousand years."
Whos said that? Traxex or Arthus(Ner'zhul/Iceman...eh..Lich King)
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