Revenge!

Revenge!

Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 9:17 am

Cinderella never thought that she would end up in such a dark place. She never thought that her life would meet the final within this dusty room. Never thought that the one that helped her would send her to the execution after punishment. Her stepsisters, who used to be jealous at Cinderella, would be celebrating their victory; mocking Cinderella as well.

Now, the end would be just as far as around four meters..

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When John, the Prince, finally married Cinderella, she thought that she had gotten a happiness in her life. Her stepmother and stepsisters were also so jealous that they didn't come to the wedding party, even though Cinderella
herself invited those who had tortured her. At the party, everyone coming seemed happy.

The next day, Cinderella, for the second time, entered the luxurious of the Prince's palace. At the party she couldn't see the whole palace, that time she could. She thought, it was what she had searched for a long time: happiness, and wealth. Now she didn't need to wash the clothings of her stepmother and stepsisters. She didn't need to prepare the breakfast, lunch, and dinner for them. And more importantly, she would not be tortured again. Or so she thought.

As the time progressed, she loved John more and more. And her husband seemed to love her more and more, too.

Until a day, when Cinderella was having a walk at the palace - something she always did - she met a woman named Ellen. Or so I think. Ellen used to be John's servant, but after he married Cinderella, he cast her to this jail.

Cinderella was shocked. She wanted to ask, why ?

When suddenly, Ellen's head became bloody. Her head was shot. Her head was shot by a figure. A figure she recognized well.

"So finally you realize my real goal," said a figure covered in shadow.

Cinderella couldn't have forgotten the figure. That was the old fairy that gave her a pair of glass slippers. Cinderella didn't know why the fairy gave them. Cinderella didn't know its real goal.

"W-why-"
"Cast her to this jail!"

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And so that was how Cinderella could have been trapped to this sinister jail. But she didn't know why.

She got the chance to know it when the fairy came to her jail. Unfortunately, it was to execute her..

"Why did you cast me?!" asked Cinderella furiously. "And where's John?"
"Don't worry, I've finished him off," replied the fairy coldly.
"W-why?"
"You don't need to know it. You don't need to know anything. But don't worry.. you'll be with your John.." replied it. "And by the way.. I'm your stepmother."

A headshot proofed that this revenge was successful.

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Author's Note :
This fanfic is my 3rd one, and an entry for a fanfic competition here. Btw I'm not to continue it, so don't expect me to continue it. But, if you wanna continue it by yourself, ask me first. Although I don't expect it
Thanks for reading!
X)
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 9:21 am

An horror ending for our lovely cinderella.

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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 9:26 am

what a fast yet short respond :p
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 9:32 am

Very nice, just I dont like the fairy style.
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 9:41 am

yah i don't like it either.
The ending was good.
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 9:42 am

Great job!!

Nice ending btw!

=)
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 9:47 am

@ omega999 and lancereaver
what fairy style? ^_^
btw thanks for comments

@ dark_3
thanks too :]
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 12:24 am

Here's to a WTF ending! Nice job..
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 12:52 am

lol nice ending.....but still hate Cinderella

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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 6:12 am

@ varun
tnx

@ imbored
lol i actually don't really like cinderella too.. blame varunshenoyg who made this month's theme a cinderella
jkjk
oh and tnx..
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 7:11 am

reminds me of the evil fairy in shrek 2 or shrek 3.. can't remember :P
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Go Miku... Your so cute :P

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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 12:05 am

@ mushy.kun
lol
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