Fukkatsu! Completed ( 5 chaps)

Posted on Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:52 pm

Hey guys, i'm back to writing, can't let this fanfic stay half-done. HF reading!

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Fukkatsu Chapter 4: The Transformation

Back in the day, the elves thought that the specter race was over, when they killed the last pack of them. But, Mirana saw something different, at first he thought it was an illusion, but it was Mercurial, the Spectre. At that same moment, when Mirana saw the Spectre on the cliff, she was marked to be his next vessel. Since that day, Mirana has had the very same nightmare haunting her.
Azwraith and Mirana were on the move. Azwraith was able to sense Mercurial’s presence, thus they didn’t have to go through a lot trouble finding the Spectre.

Azwraith was leading the way, they rushed through the woods, towards the river. Mirana’s saber-toothed tiger leaped as she sent arrows flying through aggressive forest satyrs. Azwraith stopped and touched the ground with his fingertips.

“He’s here. ” said the Phantom Lancer and dashed through the forest. They finally saw the river and the Spectre, who had his back towards the two. It’s back was pitch-black, shoulders, helm.. Everything was made of black matter. It turned towards them, Mirana felt high pressure as the Spectre looked at her.

“Thank you, Azwraith, for bringing my final vessel here. ” said Mercurial.

“Mercurial… After all you’ve done.. You still have courage to show yourself to me? I’m going to destroy you. ” said Azwraith and pulled out his deadly lance and entered his fight stance. He turned to Mirana and said: “Stand back. ”

“Well if you want to settle this like that.. ” said the Spectre as he gained mystical auras from out of this world.

The battle begun. Azwraith dashed towards the Spectre and as the lance was about to run through the weak body of his... The Spectre barely dodged the hit and jumped 4 feet back.

“Well-well.. Azwraith, you’ve gotten a lot stronger. ” said Mercurial and jumped into mid-air, spraying knives towards them. Azwraith didn’t have much trouble with them, as he deflected every knife away. The Spectre had disappeared.

“HELP!!! ” yelled Mirana, Azwraith turned towards her and saw The Spectre infront of the Priestess, Mercurial hibernated the tiger and grabbed Mirana into his hands. Mirana entered dream state. The same dream started again…

Mirana had entered the dream, she was running out of the forests with her night elf squad. The reason they were running, was because they saw a meteor falling into the ground, not too far away from them. Mirana gained consciousness in the dream, but was unable to control her actions. It felt like she was really there, but couldn’t control herself.

“Luna! Aiustha! Alleria! Lanaya! ” yelled Mirana in her head as she saw her old comrades. She realized, that it was just the same dream, yet she was almost there. They went closer to the crater, where the meteor-like object had fallen to. They saw the Spectre, pitch-black creature, who stared at Mirana like a psycho. The spectre started multiplying, they attacked the elves, tearing everyone apart, except Mirana.

They started going towards Mirana, this time, she was able to understand their language. They kept saying: “Join us.. Become us.. Feel the power of the specters.. ”

The Spectre stepped forth.

“Greetings, Mirana.. I am Mercurial, the leader of the specters, one of the Three Guardians. Do you know why I’m here? ” said the Spectre.

Mirana was able to control her body, she answered “Yes, you want me to become your next vessel.. No way I will ever give myself to someone like you, nor will I betray Azwraith! ”

“Why not? What do you have against this world? Why do you want to destroy it with Azwraith? ” said Mercurial.

“Destroy it? What the hell are you talking about, were the ones trying to save it from you!” replied the Priestess.

“You foolish mortal, very well, we shall do it the hard way.” Said the Spectre and started coming onto her with massive amounts of spectres. They just forcing themselves into Mirana. You could see half of Mirana’s body was already turned into black matter.

“Join us.. Become us.. Feel the power of the specters.. ” they said and in a minute, she was transformed into a specter.

The dream state ended, the Spectre held Mirana and consumed her. Azwraith had to watch Mirana’s destruction, because Mercurial had set a barrier for this process. He saw Mercurial shapeshifting into Mirana, the transformation was completed. She jumped on her dark matter tiger. Mercurial got his final vessel and now had all he needed to complete his master plan, but first, he had to get rid of Azwraith.

Azwraith shivered when he was the pitch-black Mirana infront of her, even her voice had changed into the specters voice.

“Wonderful! This form is by far stronger than I thought. I shall try the powers on you. ” said the Spectre.

“Mercurial.. How dare you make me fight against this form.. I guess there’s no way around it.. ” said the Phantom Lancer and took his battle stance.

“Come. ” said Mercurial.

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Thx for reading!
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Posted on Sun Jun 21, 2009 3:20 pm

AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

cant wait for the final chapter!!!
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Posted on Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:10 pm

Final chapter ,yay.

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Fukkatsu!! Chapter 5: Heart-to-Heart Talk

The Spectre has taken the form of Mirana, a pitch-black night elf on a dark tiger. Now, Azwraith has to defeat the rejuvenated Mercurial, so this world could survive.

Both Guardians have taken their battle stances, Azwraith looks angry and worried, while the Spectre is grinning and anxious to fight his old friend. Azwraith starts to charge at the Spectre, pointing his razorsharp lance towards the enemy. Mercurial isn’t moving, he isn’t planning to dodge the Phantom Lancer. He starts shooting black arrows at him, at an amazing speed. Azwraith managed deflect most of the arrows, but still a few of them scratched the surface of his thick skin. The Phantom Lancer decides to attack back, he throws his huge lance towards him. The Spectre knew that the lance is devastating, so he decided to jump off the tiger. The spirit lance pierces through the tiger, tearing its chest apart. Right after it died, it turned back into it’s original white color.

“Oh my god.. So there is no way, huh? ” said the Phantom Lancer.

Mercurial laughs.

“That’s right, the only way to bring Mirana back… IS BY KILLING HER! ” yells the Spectre and shoots thousands of arrows towards Azwraith, who desperately fights through them. Eventually, Azwraith collapses.

“So, your that easy to bring down huh? Well then I shall try this ability now.. STARFALL! ” Mercurial yelled, black gigantic stars were falling from the skies.

“You cannot dodge them all, this is your end, Lancer!! ”

Everything stopped. Literally. The stars stopped falling, the arrows stopped flying, the world stopped.

“This isn’t possible! There’s no way.. It’s too soon! ” yells Mercurial.

Azwraith and Mercurial bowed down.

“Well, we let you take out one Guardian of this world, but we wont let you take out a second. ” said the Titan from the sky. A Titan, the ruler of the realm, creator of this world, came to set justice.

“We didn’t choose you 3 Guardians to start destroying each-other.. Azwraith and Darchow did a good job, but Mercurial, you were a disappointment. ”
“Im sorry, Master! I didn’t want anything bad to the world, really! I just wanted that there’s only one Guardian in this world, me! ” said Mercurial.

“It’s too late to apologize… It’s too late.. ” sang the Titan.

“No, no! Please, don’t do this! ” cried the Spectre.

The Titan came back with the chorus “I said it’s too late to apologize.. It’s too late.. ”, then he made Mercurial disappear, piece by piece, Mercurial screamed of pain as he burned into ashes, with that, Mirana was also destroyed.

“Azwraith, you served well, but this is the end of your service. ” said the Titan.

“Thank you, Master, it was an honor. ” replied the Phantom Lancer as the world started fading away..

This was the end of this world, all the history that had been developing, vanished. Everything just ended, no trolls, no elves, no humans, no Guardians.

*Back at the Titan’s office.

The Titans were having heavy beverages of alcohol.

“Man, seriously, this world with only 3 Guardians, was an epic fail. ” said a Titan.

“I know dude, man they were stupid.. I hated the Spectre guy so much.. ” replied another.

“Yeah.. Well GG, up for a remake? ” said the first.

“Sure, whatever. ” answered the other as they started rubbing their genitals together.

So the world had ended, the Guardians failed this one.. The Titans decided to create a new one, this time a more efficient than the last one which was boring and violent..

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Yup, this story is over.
I think this was a bad story, because i changed the themes/moods too much and made it maybe a bit too complicated with the Titans etc.. I just wanted to finish the damn story
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Posted on Fri Jun 26, 2009 6:45 am

lol the ending turned from epic to hillarious

awesome story nonetheless ^^ apoligize and rubbing genitals LOL XD
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