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OMG!!!ITS AWESOME!!! 60% [ 50 ]


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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:28 am



LoL. Keep it up. Never taught that this fanfic would be so funnnnnnnny!
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:44 am

Told you my line would be funny XD.
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 11:47 am

^and yes it was..
btw..i got a part for you in the next chapter..
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:04 pm

Yuppy...I pawn someone, right? RIGHT!
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:14 pm

lol

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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 10:43 pm



I demand that naix pwns someone.If not, Ulkiorra may not see the light of sun again ;D
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 3:05 am

By adding me as a character in your fanfic means that it will be more funny. LOL.

anyways nice fanfic you got here.

@anthdx

thanks for the add in FS.
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 10:30 am



lol..you could've just post the "thanks for the add" in my FS profile....but anyways..youre welcome..:P
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:11 am

Laughed till my lungs explode, continue
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:21 am

Chapter 9:Here Comes The Bunnies..I mean..Pain!!

Still at the early-mid game..
Still at the early-mid game..
Still at the early-mid game..

Silencer:STOP SPAMMING!!!!

Uhh..right…

As I was saying..
Our protagonist is..

Razor:Take this!!and THAT!!AND THIS AND THAT!!!DIE!!!
Tech:farm..farm..farm..is that all you know?
Razor:Stop bothering me!!i’m trying to gain weight!!!
Tech:ugh!!whatever..

And then some guy with three balls came near them and started spamming his spells..

SomeGuyWithThreeBalls:I’ll kill all of you!!!MWAHAHAHAHA!!!

Tech:Security!!take this imba moron out of here!!

Strygwyr:yes sir!!right away sir!!
Strygwyr:wait a minute!!why am I the security?!

Anthdx:because I said so…

Strygwyr:oh..ok…lalalalala..*takes the ThreeballGuy and hops like a little girl..hopping away to neverland*

Balanar:YES!!MORE KIDS!!MWAHAHAHA!!

\->F3lix<-/:you..do know that he got three balls right?

Balanar:uugh!!nevermind..i’ll just eat him..

Nevermore:…

\->F3lix<-/:*whispering to Nevermore’s ear*..shut up..or I’ll kill you..
Nevermore:WTF?!you just licked my ear!!
\->F3lix<-/:no I didn’t!!my tongue slipped out of my mouth..
Nevermore:you’re so eeewwwwy!!!
Naix:ewwy?mannn that’s gay!!

Naix was disgusted by Nevermore so he decided to leave the base and start jungling..
AND NOBODY WILL KNOW THAT HE IS JUNGLING!REPEAT!!

Naix:and nobody will know that I am jungling..

Not you IDIOT!!THEM!!!

Naix:oh..sorry..

Whatever..go jungle yourself now!!

Nevermore:wait!!why is he disgusted by me?!he was supposed to be disgusted by \->F3lix<-/!!

Naix:why would I be disgusted by that?i wish \->F3lix<-/ would lick my ear..
Naix:mmm..tongue..mrmrmrmmrfhfhfhf..*drooling*..
\->F3lix<-/:want some tongue?i’ll give you some..

SINclare21 interrupts..

SINclare21:anthdx?your fanfic is turning gay..

Anthdx:WHO CARES!!I DON’T GIVE A HECK ABOUT THIS FANFIC!!

EveryoneThatReadsMyFanfic:you..you don’t?*starts crying*

Anthdx:lol..jk..don’t cry..here’s a cookie..and I’ll fix the fanfic ok?

EveryoneThatReadsMyFanfic:*stops crying*okay..*smiles*..oohh..cookie!!munch munch munch!!


Silencer:*stops fapping*..WHAT?!they’re gay?!what am I supposed to do with this hard-on then?

And for the first time..Silencer used his brain..

Silencer:yes!i shall post this question on DS!

And unfortunately..he failed in making use of his brain..

So Siliencer posted a thread in DS and in a couple of seconds..

KingV:OBVIOUS TROLL IS OBVIOUS!!

And soon after that,everyone posted the same thing!!

Troll warlord:WTF?!NOT ANOTHER TROLL!!I WISH ALL OF THEM A PAINFUL DEATH!

Silencer:you’re a troll yourself!
Troll:oh great..now we have racist too?
Silencer:who are you calling racist?!
Troll:YOU!!YOU’RE THE RACIST!!F**KING NOOB GAY!!
Silencer:YOU’RE A RACIST YOURSELF!!
Troll:WHAT!SAYING GAY IS RACIST?GAY IS NOT A RACE!!ITS A..uhh..what do you call them?

Crackzaa:lifestyle?

Troll:YEAH!ITS A LIFESTYLE!!
Silencer:WHATEVER!THAT DOESN’T MEAN…

Yukino:shut up please..or face the wrath of the Mods!!
Caspian:oops..no need to warn them..i’ve “accidentally” banned both of them..

After realizing that they were banned,both Troll and Silencer went back to the game via the alt+tab combo..

Troll:look what you’ve done!!
Silencer:WHAT?!its your fault!!
Troll:my fault?you’re the one who was being a racist!*pushes Silencer*
Silencer:well its not my fault that you’re a troll!!*pushes Troll back*

And both of them started fighting..
They were so busy fighting that they didn’t realize that some small green guy wo was talking backward was spying on them..

And when they were 2/3 dead..he jumps and killed both of them..
And then a couple of thunder strucks the body of the two..

Zeus:OMG!!KSEDBYYODAAGAIN!!
Yoda:OH YEAH!!!MWAHAHAHA!!

\->F3lix<-/:OMG!!NOOBSILENCER!!EVENNOOBERTROLL!!!.......

After raging for a few minutes.. \->F3lix<-/ finally came to his senses..

\->F3lix<-/:THAT’S IT!!I’ll bribe anthdx so I can get into ths retarded fanfic..

And \->F3lix<-/ bribed me and gets himself into an unimaginably retarded fanfic..

\->F3lix<-/:YES!I’m in!

There.. \->F3lix<-/(D K) finds himself laning with a pro Kser called sloonzz(dwarven sniper)..

\->F3lix<-/:alright..follow my lead..
sloonzz:tch!!no way man!!sloonzz takes no orders from anyone except from sloonzz himself!!

\->F3lix<-/:whatever..just start pushing already!
Sloonzz:YESSIR!!RIGHT AWAY SIR!!

*Sloonzz:wanna see a trick?
*\->F3lix<-/:NO!!

(*sloonzz’s and \->F3lix<-/’s name will be named as the hero they are using)

Dwarven:wanna see a trick?
DK:NO!!
Dwarven:ok.here I go!!

Dwarven jumps to a tree and uses his ulti to shoot at the necromancer..

Dwarven:nice huh?bet you can’t do that!

Dare18 suddenly appears..

Dare18:I can do better that that!!

So Dare took out a rock and tossed it in the air..he shoots the rock and suddenly it morphs into Tiny..

Tiny:who dares disturb my sleep?!

Dare18:he did!*points at sloonzz*

Dwarven:WTF!?

Tiny:*tosses Dwarven*..

Dwarven:*in the air*PUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSSSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!

DK:nice one!!
Dare:hehe..*lets out a blue mist and disappears*

Dwarven:OMG!!I’M GONNA DIE!!
And then another Tiny spawns near the landing point of Dwarven..

Tiny:uh’oh!!*takes his tennis racket and hits Dwarven*

Dwarven:WTF!!NOT AGAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNN!!!

And Dwarven lands on Roshan..

And a messange appears..

SOME MAPHACKING NOOB CALLED SLOONZZ HAS ACQUIRED THE AEGIS!

Dwarven:oh yeah!!now this is what I’m talking about!!

And so Dwarven went back to DK who was being harassed by Techies and Leoric!

DK:there you are!!where have you been!?come here and carry me!!
Dwarven:KKKK!!!

And soon..they both managed to win the lane..

Tech:BB!!gank them from behind!!
Leoric:right!
Tech:no!BEHIND!
Leoric:right, sir!
Tech:OMG!I SAID BEHIND!
Leoric:yes sir!right away sir!
TECH:OMWTF!?I SAID WE’LL GANK THEM FROM BEHINDDDD!!!
Leoric:uhh..right?
Tech:*HEADDESK*!!!!lets just go!!

And so Tech plants two mines,a remoes and a stunner..
And on top of that, he drops a GG branch..

DK saw tech..

DK:sir!you dropped your bran…OH SHIT!

*KAAAABOOOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!!!*

DK:OMG!100hp left!i’m so lucky!*clicks on his bottle*
DK:pheew!!good thing Zeus lended me his bottle!

Zeus:*drinks*..BLUEK!NOT AGAIN!!

Dwarven:lol..newb!!
After saying that..
A hammer drops an Dwarven’s head and stunned him..

Dwarven:OMG!!IT’S RAINING HAMMERS!!QUICK!DUCK!
Duck:QUAACK!
DK:GET BACK HERE!!!HELP ME KILL THIS TECH!AND GET THAT DUCK OUT OF HERE!!

Dwarven:oh right!shoot to kill!!!

and another hammer drops on DK’s head..which stunned him..ofc..

DK:there’s no way I’m gonna survive this..oh look..an illus rune!

DK:*takes the rune*..
DK:DWARVEN!!CHANGE OF PLANS!!
Dwarven:WHAT PLAN!?

DK:MINDGAME!!USE YOUR SECRET WEAPON NOW!!
Dwarven:heh..it’s about time..

Dwarven:*took out a donkey mask and wears a tutu*lalalala..i have four biscuit,and I ate one..
Dwarven:now I only have three biscuits..lalalalala..*runs to the top sentinel tower*

Tech:WTF WAS THAT?!
Leoric:I dunno..but its sexy!
Tech:*slaps Leoric’s head*KILL IT!NOW!
Leoric:yes sir!

Tech was so annoyed by the stupidity of Dwarven that he decided to chase him to death..

Tech:I’LL KILL YOU MYSELF!!
Tech and Leoric only realized that they were pulled to the second tower when it was too late..

Tech:OMG!!BB NOW!!

Dwarven:too late..MWAHAHA!

*BANG*

One shot and Techies is dead!

DK:my turn..mwahaha!!*turns into a green dragon*
DK:TAKE THIS!*stuns Leoric*…
DK:*BREATH FIRE*..
Leoric:WTF?!SOLO COMBO!LOLOL!!YOU’RE OUT OF MANA!!

DK:oh really?*clicks and two dragon appears*meet my other two friends..
Leoric:OMG!I’MDEAD!!RUN!

Due to DK’s awesome microing skill..his dragon illus managed to block Leoric’s path..

And after a few seconds of orb-walking,Leoric was dead!

DK:OH YEAH!!!THATS WHAT I’M TALKING ABOUT!!

Shortly after that..DK brags about his awesome microing skills to everyone!!
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I HAVE NO MICROING SKILLS *starts to cry* *stops crying* *waterfall out of nowhere* *that stopped too*

I was laughing so hard that my sister in the room on the other side of the flat got pissed off . This is being more fun by the second...
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 11:20 am

Nice fanfic but this chapter was abit weak
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:08 pm



LOLZ!Nice!
Anxiously awaiting next chapter!
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 3:13 am



lalalalala..
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 8:45 am

Nice fanfic!
Noob sloonzz hahahah.
Thx for adding me to it.
Hilarious!
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