The birth of Luna Moonfang: Daughter of the moon

The birth of Luna Moonfang: Daughter of the moon

Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 7:34 am

Hope you like my story about the birth of Luna. Please comment.

One starry night, it was cold and the moon is showing brightly and beautiful. The sky is filled with fireflies dancing and fluttering. It was very silent.


But the silence was broken by a cry. Nightelves, gather around to see the birth of a baby girl. It was the daughter of the head huntress Aria windwhisper and a druid Lashur Moonfang.

Everyone was happy that there is a new member of the sentinel. When suddently.

"BANG!"

A horde of bats attacked the people and ghouls and necrolytes appear everywhere. Then a Dark figure entered.
It has long sharp horns, long claws. and a burning desire to destroy all things mortal in his eyes. It was a dreadlord.

"Ahhh...How nice witnessing the miracle of birth. Bah! You night elves sickens me!" said the dreadlord with a chilling voice. [quote] If it was not for you cursed elves we have turned this world asunder centuries ago!
now.........ATTACK!


"my power will crush you dammned demons!" shouted Lashur.

The dreadlord summoned another carrion swarm and sent it to Lashur. But Lashur quickly dodged and summoned a sprout around the dreadlord and call the power of nature, The Treants. The dreadlord attacked Lashur and use it void to slow Lashur down. Thankfully the treants and huntresses backed him up and Lashur used his Mekanism necklace.

When the Dreadlord noticed that they are outnumbered and losing the decided to flee.

"We will meet again nighteleves and when we do we will destroy the tree of life right infront of your eyes" said the dreadlord.

The ghouls and necrolytes tried to run but the archers catched up with them and killed them. While the dreadlord turned into a horde of bats and left.

Though they defeated the undead the worst has happened. One of the ghouls managed to lay a claw on the babygirl and the poison spread to its system.

"There is no hope that she will live" echoed the elves. and there was silence.


ROAR!!!

Suddenly a roar broke the silence.

"Pri..priestess Mirana Nightshade..." Said Aria with a surprised voice.

"There is still hope that the baby can still live. Give me the baby. Lashur, Aria follow me."

It was almost midnight when they arrived to the spring of Elune and the baby is nearly breathing . Mirana put the baby under the moon.

Mirana prayed and said."Goddess elune please give this baby another life".

A blinding light surronded the baby and suddenly the baby cried meaning the baby is alive and well. And a strange bluish white aura surrounded the baby.

"So, what are you going to name her? She is special because she was blessed by goddess Elune."Asked Mirana.

"We will name her.......LUNA

Hope you like it. sorry if there were any wrong grammar.
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 7:44 am

Sounds cool and all. Battle scene!!! haha. Be nice to have a little chronical of all the heroes and a little passage from each of them. Like how the weaver ended up on the earth (from the nether dimmension or something).
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 8:08 am

ok thanks. i hope i can write better stories. thanks for the comment
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:25 am

Yeah,It's cool.I'll be glad to read another one!

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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:29 am

good enough, not bad at all!
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:58 am

hehehe... ayus yun ha? sana may kasunod pa.
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 2:34 pm

"maybe next tungkol naman kay mortred tsaka vengeful spirit ung susulat ko" the short story above is about how Luna moonfang got her name.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 12:19 pm

great story
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:30 pm

cool story.. i hope you can write more stories
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 8:18 pm

lame
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:03 am



LOL!!!if you are so great,why didn't we see you posting "not so lame" stories?

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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:15 am

COOL! hahaha nice story

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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:05 am

cool story
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:57 pm

I like it, no sorry, love it. You know what, i love DS mostly because:
1)i lost my warcraft cd and deleted warcraft by mistake so no dota till i get a new w3 cd and till then DS is my only resort.
2)Because of stories like these which brighten my day(ahem...its actually night here now).
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