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Nanaya Shiki - Nanaya Assassin

Created by yukino_silvermaine on 2007-02-21
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Nanaya Shiki, known also as Tohno Shiki, is the only known beholder of the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception. With his knife Nanatsu Yoru, he can cut the lines of "death" of anything and everything living or not. He can destroy even his surroundings. Wounds he inflicted cannot be regenerated and cause immense pain to the target. Being of the Nanaya Clan, he can surpass normal human abilities, somersaulting towards his target with unmatched speed and beheading his target. By stabbing the "point" of death instead of cutting the "lines", he can cut down an opponents life drastically, bringing it closer to its death.

Mystic Eyes of Death Perception (N)
Allows Shiki to see the lines of "death" of a target. The wounds he inflicts cannot be regenerated for some time. Also, when the target is close to it's death, it adds bonus damage to each attack that passes trough armor. ORB EFFECT
Level 1 - Wounds inflicted by Shiki cannot be regenerated through normal means [stat/item HP regen, fountain] for 20 seconds. Converts 10% of target's lost HP to damage when the target is below 40% HP.
Level 2 - Wounds inflicted by Shiki cannot be regenerated through normal means [stat/item HP regen, fountain] for 20 seconds. Converts 12% of target's lost HP to damage when the target is below 40% HP.
Level 3 - Wounds inflicted by Shiki cannot be regenerated through normal means [stat/item HP regen, fountain] for 20 seconds. Converts 14% of target's lost HP to damage when the target is below 40% HP.
Level 4 - Wounds inflicted by Shiki cannot be regenerated through normal means [stat/item HP regen, fountain] for 20 seconds. Converts 16% of target's lost HP to damage when the target is below 40% HP.
Cannot regenerate: STR induced HP regen, Item induced HP regen, Fountain, Healing Ward, Scorched EarthShadow Word, Guardian Angel, Dragon's Blood, Living Armor, Chemical Rage.

Can be healed by: Lifesteal, Mekansm heal, Purification, Shadow Wave, Aphotic shield + Borrowed Time, Hand of God, Blood Bath, Nature's Attendants, Soul Steal, Life Drain, Exorcism, Death Pulse.
Mana Cost: n/a
Cooldown: n/a

Framework: Status icon on the target.

Notes: Let's say the target has 1000 Max HP. Current HP is 350 [35%]. It adds 104 damage.

Kyokushi - Nanaya (Y)
Shiki raises his knife then throws it towards the opponent. At the same time, he somersaults towards the target, same speed as the knife. When the knife hits or is deflected, Shiki grabs the head of the target then twists it. Stuns and deals damage.
Level 1 - The knife deals 95 damage and stuns for 0.5 seconds. Additionally, Shiki does 95 damage and stuns 0.5 seconds. [190 damage, 1 second stun total]
Level 2 - The knife deals 120 damage and stuns for 0.75 seconds. Additionally, Shiki does 120 damage and stuns 0.75 seconds. [240 damage, 1.5 seconds stun total]
Level 3 - The knife deals 145 damage and stuns for 1 second. Additionally, Shiki does 145 damage and stuns 1 second. [290 damage, 2 seconds stun total]
Level 4 - The knife deals 170 damage and stuns for 1.25 seconds. Additionally, Shiki does 170 damage and stuns 1.25 seconds. [340 damage, 2.5 seconds stun total]
The knife is considered a physical attack that deals spell damage. It can miss, depending on the situation. After Shiki deals damage, he stays beside the opponent. It's like Blink Strike + Stun. Cast Range = 650
Mana Cost: 115/130/145/160
Cooldown: 16/15/14/13 seconds

Framework: A silver projectile shoots forth from Shiki then Toss animation on Shiki towards the target. However, the altitude must be a bit lower.

Notes: It's not IMBA, as the knife can miss.

Chokushi no Magan (C)
Shiki uses his eyes and Nanatsu Yoru to destroy the environment around him. He stabs the ground, destroying it and dealing damage to those who stand on it. Also slows and deals additional damage to whose who walk or stay on the destroyed area.
Level 1 - Deals 125 initial damage. Does additional 10 damage per second and slows for 10%. 0.75 second cast time.
Level 2 - Deals 175 initial damage. Does additional 15 damage per second and slows for 20%. 0.75 second cast time.
Level 3 - Deals 225 initial damage. Does additional 20 damage per second and slows for 30%. 0.75 second cast time.
Level 4 - Deals 275 initial damage. Does additional 25 damage per second and slows for 40%. 0.75 second cast time.
Affects only enemy units. Slows only move speed. Lasts 5 seconds. 250 AoE.
Mana Cost: 100/120/140/160
Cooldown: 17 seconds at all levels

Framework: Aftershock effect on ground. Slow. Status icon on affected units.

Jyuunana Bunkatsu (B)
Shiki focuses on a target and tries to stab its point of death. The area around the target becomes cursed. The target is silenced and slowed. Shiki then approaches the target. If the target goes out of the cursed area, the skill will fail. If not, Shiki cuts a percentage of the target's life.
Level 1 - Deals 30% of the target's maximum HP as damage. Minimum possible remaining HP of target: 450. Slows by 55%.
Level 2 - Deals 45% of the target's maximum HP as damage. Minimum possible remaining HP of target: 350. Slows by 65%.
Level 3 - Deals 60% of the target's maximum HP as damage. Minimum possible remaining HP of target: 250. Slows by 75%.
Cast time: 1 second. Shiki's move speed: 375. Cast range: 600. AoE: 200.
Mana Cost: 175/225/275
Cooldown: 180/140/80

Framework: Black area around the target. Time Walk effect on Shiki as he moves. Black Desolate effect if successful.

Notes: Only heroes can be targeted. The skill duration will be finished if: a] Shiki is successful, 2] The target goes out of range. Shiki will approach the target with a speed of 375, unaffected by skills and/or items

Discussion:

Skill Synergy

Kyokushi Nanaya + Jyuunana Bunkatsu

Cast Jyunana Bunkatsu then finish off with Kyokushi Nanaya. Or stun the target first then cast Jyuunana Bunkatsu.

Chokushi no Magan + Jyuunana Bunkatsu

Cast Jyuunana Bunkatsu then slow the target to finish it off. Or vice versa.

Item Synergy

Mystic Eyes of Death Perception + Damage-Boosting Items [Radiance, Divine Rapier, etc.]

More damage that cannot be regenerated.

Mystic Eyes of Death Perception + Attack Speed Boosting Items [Butterfly, Hyperstone, etc.]

More damage dealt per second.

Mystic Eyes of Death Perception + Critical Strikes [Buriza-do Kyanon, Crystalis]

Similar to the first.

Jyuunana Bunkatsu + Slowing Items [Sange and Yasha, Eye of Skadi, Guinsoo's Scythe of Vyse, etc.]

Slow first before you cast, so the enemy cannot escape.

Suggested Final item Build

Best Allies

Disablers [Rhasta, Lion, Naga Siren, etc.] = Prevents the enemy from moving when you cast Jyuunana Bunkatsu
Damage Boosters [Magnus, Shandelzare Silkwood, etc.] = More damage for Mystic Eyes of Death perception.
Nukers [Lina Inverse, Lion, Zeus, etc.] = Jyuunana Bunkatsu + Ulti = Kill.
Rotund'jere = Jyuunana Bunkatsu + Reper's Scythe = PROFIT!!!

Worst Enemies

Nukers [Lina Inverse, Lion, Zeus, etc.] = You are thin early game.
Atropos = You are a DPS hero. Enfeeble makes Mystic Eyes of Death perception moot.
Disablers, Stunners = Two of your skills has cast time. You wouldn't want to waste mana, do you?

Credits

Thanks to

Winmugen = For the screenies used for the icons. Yeah. Nanaya Shiki rocks.
Kinoko Nasu = For writing Shingetsutan Tsukihime
"Gary"a.k.a Eliezer Crosswind = For giving me a copy of Winmugen.

Ho hum. Skills are based off Melty Blood and Shingetsutan Tsukihime. [Tohno Shiki and Nanaya Shiki]

[Border of death]

Changelog:

2007-02-22: Decreased Shiki's STR gain per level and base STR ||Nerfed Mystic Eyes of Death Perception || Increased cooldown of Kyokushi - Nanaya || Made the casting time of Chokushi no Magan constant [0.75 seconds], also increased cooldown || Decreased slow of Jyuunana Bunkatsu

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1 By Flame_Cro 2007-02-21

Maybe a little to strong for DoTA.This hero is not balanced.First spell last 2 long,and second,third & ulti are to powerfull.Good idea man but u will have to balance him

2 By yukino_silvermaine 2007-02-21

Exactly how is it too strong? How can I balance him if you don't say what should be changed? O_O The first skill, well, maybe it lasts too long. I would have to wait for more comments though. Kyokushi Nanaya isn't *that* powerful, considering that the knife can miss. Terrain and time affects the skill. Chokushi no Magan is even a bit underpowered. Check Thunder Clap. Jyuunana Bunkatsu has a cap, so it's not overpowered.

3 By TrueBlueMetalhead 2007-02-21

Cool original hero but I find that the skills are imba. I like third and ulti. The second skill's first attack can miss but it has big potential damage and stun with Buriza. The first skill also has the potential to do a lot of damage. Can you make him at least frailer to balance?

4 By yukino_silvermaine 2007-02-21

It's not original. I based off all the skills from Melty Blood and Shingetsutan Tsukihime. Hmm.. 2 votes that the first skill is overpowered. I don't get what you mean by "The second skill's first attack can miss but it has big potential damage and stun with Buriza." Yes, it has a big potential damage. However, it costs more mana and has a longer cooldown than other stun spells, like Impale, which is superior than this.

5 By TrueBlueMetalhead 2007-02-21

Sorry but who's Melty Blood and Shingetsutan Tsukihime?

6 By `UnholY` 2007-02-21

this hero can take out ANY late game tanks (brad warden, pudge etc...). and if the 1st skill ,mystic eyes of death perception, is an orb effect, why get SnY? and yes your 1st skill should be nerfed. maybe the duration should be 10/20/25/30?? what if he uses his ulti on a 3k hp centaur? 1800 damage w/out spell reduction + 80% slow, a little nerf to the damage and slow maybe.

7 By Shimrra_3 2007-02-21

Wheeeeee scary. First skill is definitely too long a duration; second skill I reckon is fine, people say Meat Hook and Elunes Arrow are rigged but they're hard to use - this is probably spammable with a 12 second cooldown; third skills fine, possibly too high damage by a bit; ult seems heavily imba, 60% on say, Brad or Pudge, but... its 60% of target's hp as damage - that will be reduced by armor or not? Also how long does it slow for? ANNND, is it max hp or CURRENT hp? Stats maybe too high, reduced STR and/or INT maybe. Nasty little skill synergies here, the UBER AoE pwner plus an AoE slow plus a possibly-rigged heavy stunner. I'll wait for more opinions and/or a remake before I rate this, but at least 8 or 9 at this point. Rely on you to show us how crappy OUR ideas are

8 By yukino_silvermaine 2007-02-21

@ TrueBlueMetalhead =Melty Blood and Shingetsutan Tsukihime are games. Melty Blood is a fighting game and Shingetsutan Tsukihime is a visual novel. *wink* || @ Unholy = SnY for MS and stats. 3rd vote for nerf of first skill. || @ Shimrra = Naw. Don't rely on me || @ All = Please remember that the last skill can FAIL.The last skill lasts until SHiki succeeds or fails. SHiki travels to the cursed area. If the target is there, the skill succeeds. If not, it fails. The opponent just has to get out of the cursed area. || 2 more votes for the nerf of the first skill and I'll nerf it.

9 By `UnholY` 2007-02-21

maybe add a vanguard or linkens sphere for extra survivability to compensate for the low HP... added with the extra evasion of butterfly you'll be hard to kill

10 By `UnholY` 2007-02-21

oh and :

"The knife is considered a physical attack that deals spell damage. It can miss, depending on the situation."

physical attack that deals spell damage? is the damage reduced by armor or spell reduction?

it can miss depending on the situation? like when you used the skill on an enemy with butterfly or maybe backtrack or blurr? or when you are blinded it will miss?

and what's dagon for when you have low mana and you already have killer spells?

11 By yukino_silvermaine 2007-02-21

@ Unholy = Think Arcane Orb. It deals spell damage but is a hero attack. Basically means that it can miss, but deals spell damage. Evasion, miss, backtrack, dispersion can affect the knife. Dagon = Jyuunana Bunkatsu + Energy Burst = GG

12 By Black Angel 2007-02-21

Mystic Eyes of Death Perception :Has too much lasting time cause if a player is at a haelth of 100, he will be able to do nothing for 80 seconds even when in fountain.
Kyokushi - Nanaya :Looks a little IMBA.too much stun in combination of damage also mana cost too low to balance it.Think about a storm bolt.Although this can miss there is a very little chance of missing even with heroes that have evasion.Miss chance doesnt balance the effects still.
Chokushi no Magan : total damage is too high and slows greatly affecting more than 1 units sometimes.Needs some work IMO.Ulti seems too powerful too...Think about Bradwarden that is a meele unit so there is no chance to fail the skill. and if he has 2000 HP will take 1200 damage?Too strong.80% slow is more Than Vipers ulti.
Overall:it needs a little work i think.

13 By yukino_silvermaine 2007-02-22

One more vote for 1st skill nerf.

@ Black Angel = Kyokushi Nanaya is fine. See Anub'arak's Impale. AoE stun, 300 damage, 2.25 second stun, 10 second cooldown at all levels, only for 155 mana. 'Tis balanced. Also, terrain and time can affect the miss chance.

Chokushi no Magan = You won't take any additional damage anyway if you go out of the affected area. Also, is only slows MS, not like Thunder Clap that slows also ASPD. And the area of effect is SMALL. 250 AoE.

Chokushi no Magan = Why? Even Lina can dish out 1200 damage to Bradwarden too. And the 80% slow is only in the affected area. Go out and you'll be safe. It's only 200 AoE.

Also, when looking at the skills, look also at the stats. IMBA? Look at the manacost. Then look at his INT gain. Enough? I don't think so. The first skill I am willing to change. But the others.. Maybe. If you have a good reason.

14 By Sammeh 2007-02-22

Hmmm good idea the 1st is a bit too powerful though. For example if your enemy has 1000 max hp and is on 400hp (therefore your orb effect will be activited) then you will be hitting an extra 120 damage. That is way too much, good idea though.

15 By yukino_silvermaine 2007-02-22

5 votes. I shall commence nerfing the first skill. And maybe add minor adjustments.

16 By yukino_silvermaine 2007-03-01

Changes made.

17 By aku_rian 2007-03-03

ah.. too strong for DotA, I think..

18 By raz 2007-03-06

Way too strong, you have 2 skills that can stun, and the poor bastard can't regen his hp, this is a dream hero, way overpowered. NERF it

19 By raz 2007-03-06

sry one stun, and 2 that can slow, but still the poor bastard cant regen his wounds

20 By yukino_silvermaine 2007-03-07

Two stun skills? Where?
O_O

21 By plause bunny 2007-03-07

wow, good work. I like it, but i does seem to be imba. the first skill i mean

22 By The Lawyer™ 2007-03-07

Please translate your attacks into english... I cant understand...

23 By The Lawyer™ 2007-03-07

IMBA ULTI!

24 By Firesky 2007-03-10

1st skill no regen .(period)
2nd ok it can miss but if u get good at aiming ie. pudge hook elunes arrow yea thn its imbalanced miss chance does not save it from being imbalanced
3rd it damages stuns and slows ur knife skill can now hit and hes slowed a lil 2 strong

Ulti 60% max hp o so it activates the 1st skill hmmm atleast it has a minimum 60% wayy 2 much
and it slows 75% its sunder on steroids without switching hp

in conclusion: balance it u may not think so but i see plenty of ways it is and another thing i hate Japenese/anime heros i find them boring and unoriginal u should make a hero u come up with not from a tv show or comic, and + i cant read or understand what the skill names say as long as the skills are goodi pass it blade kaiser was great i gave 9/10 i dont like japenese names they have nothing to do with Dota or wacraft as a whole and when u post a reply like kyoshi nanaya i dont know which skill it is they all sound similar

25 By brave-sir-robin 2007-03-14

dude this isnt angel arena, i mean 60 percent and of maximum hp! now thats imba! compare this to Axe's ulti and i think you will catch my point.

26 By Capwn33 2007-03-16

This hero is hard as hell to understand, quit jerking off to anime porn and make a wc3 hero, not a fuckin adult swim @ 2:00 AM hero..

27 By zigeo 2007-03-19

err... to dam powerful, true, he'd be an ownage hero, but no single player could kill him, balance him some more.
you get Black King Bar, and your impossible to kill, AND you stun... man, what a harsh hero...

28 By 7_Seas 2007-04-16

Too many stun + Huge Damage spells combined would be too powerful...

Also, a minor nag, but it somewhat ruins the DotA theme to have an anime character as a player, and probably wouldn't be incorporated.

29 By Zyphir 2007-06-30

As much as I like Tsukihime and Melty Blood, this guy is too beastly. He's basically got an insta-kill against anyone with less than 60% hp? (Or slightly more, considering he can attack and then stun for the finisher)

Kyokushi > Bunkatsu > Any of the other two skills + whack whack whack whack

30 By chickenheap 2007-07-07

bad icons... too strong of spells. (2 nukes) both very powerful too much perma-stun. ulti waty to imba can kill any tank almost instantly just ulti and with only 250 hp can nuke him with 1 of the 2 spells or both and kills instantly + he can't escape because of all the slow and perma-stun you threw in and oh did I mention bad icons??? 1/10.

31 By chonpa 2007-07-12

this is for enfo's team survival hero:D

32 By Aced Out 2007-07-24

i really think u r japanese.

33 By evoblade 2007-08-27

i give 1 to you but i must give you 0...

34 By chris_8742 2007-10-26

i might pick this if im gay

35 By AXCELACCEL 2007-11-27

nice hero

36 By Cloudzstrife 2007-12-08

He's ulti is a a bit too strong and i don't really get it by what you mean when you say damage in 60 percent of the target's total hp. Is that like if your target have 1000 hp you hit for 600 damage? Just need some balancing.

37 By nanaya_yuu 2007-12-10

@those asking for translation of the moves

Nanatsu Yoru = Literally "Seven Nights" (It's the name of his knife)

Chokushi no Magan = Mystic eyes of death perception

Kyokushi - Nanaya = Extreme Death - Nanaya

Jyuunana Bunkatsu = literally "seventeen parts slice" (he used this when he sliced Arcueid [the heroine in tsukihime] in seventeen peices)

@yukicchin (can i call you that or should i use yukino?)

wow! I can't believe someone else also had the idea of putting Shiki in DoTA! I'm pretty good in fighting using Shiki myself, in fact, he's my main character in Melty Blood (all versions).The stats are also pretty much the same, the only difference is movespeed (mine is slower by 10) However, my DoTA Shiki's version's skill build is a different.

Shiki Tohno

chokushi no magan [Mystic eyes of Death Perception] (ORB EFFECT) - "shiki removes his glasses to be able to see the lines that enables him to cut anything as long as it exists but he gets headaches whenever he sees the lines"

effects: damage dealt DOES NOT regenerate for a few seconds and costs life each time it is activated (life cost is reduced per level)

small note - can be activated/deactivated

chokushi no magan - kesshi no issen [mystic eyes of death perception - {can't translate because of the kanji, sorry}] "shiki aims then dashes towards the target in a blink of a second to cut the "lines" that controls the flow of mana of the target, disabling it's ability to cast spells"

effects: silence + mystic eyes of death perception + bonus damage (mana cost is reduced per level)

nanaya clan training (passive) - "shiki was trained to be an assassin since he was a small kid, enhancing his strength and speed"

effects: increase in attribute + increase in movement and attack speed

[Ulti] nanaya mode - "Shiki's eyes turn blue and gives in to his bloodline persona thus becoming Nanaya Shiki"

effects: switches to nanaya mode for a period of time

Shiki Tohno-Nanaya Mode

*mystic eyes of death perception -nanaya mode

effects : same as his usual self's mystic eyes of death perception, but gains small bonus damage and costs even less health points

*kyokushi:nanaya

(basically the same as yukino's except with lesser damage but doesn't slow/stun)

*nanaya clan training - nanaya mode

effects: bonuses are doubled

Additional Skill (nanaya mode only ultimate) Points of Death - "Shiki concentrates, enabling his mystic eyes of death perception to see the "points of death" of everything"

effects: gains critical damage and fixed uber-low chance of instant kill

*note
-My version's skills are based off the original game itself. (except for the one burrowed from Melty Blood ReAct)
-I didn't give exactly how much damage his skills will deal, how much hp does some of his skill will cost, how much mana his ultimate costs or how much bonus he will get for his passive skill, I leave that to you guys because I'm not good in balancing a character myself.
-My version kills like a true nanaya assassin, by physical means.
-When Shiki's glasses are off (mystic eyes are activated), uses kyokushi nanaya, uses kesshi no issen or gets an instant kill, there is a blood splashing effect upon each attack
-I'm just suggesting this so feel free the use it if you want
-character description is up to you yukino_silvermaine if you want to give it one, I haven't given a single taught about giving him one.
-Please don't forget to mention my name if this character ever becomes an official character

now to get back to reading/playing kagetsu tohya

38 By nanaya_yuu 2007-12-10

@7_seas
Lina Inverse IS an anime character

39 By nanaya_yuu 2007-12-10

I'm sorry for triple posting but i forgot to edit a skill (chokushi no magan)= everytime it is activated, it uses no mana /no health but damages Shiki's health per second.

40 By james4usfc 2007-12-14

that is so korni

41 By nanaya_yuu 2007-12-15

haha...i just got carried away with the idea

42 By xanynorian 2008-02-23

ulti silenced AND slowed?
that seems kinda imba, but with some balancing i think u can improve this one

43 By DKKD 2008-05-24

he has an orb effect, doesn't he. so why S&Y

44 By folechno 2008-08-24

elaborate more on his background story, more background, less info about abilities

base stats and stat gains are balanced

mystic eyes is too imba imo, stopping most heals, he will wreck almost all heroes in early game, just pair him up with a decent harasser and easy first blood and easy farming, maybe if you shortened the time to 7 sec, although that seems long but would be much more balanced

the bonus damage is balanced, very good against tanks

for Kyokushi how can the knife be deflected?

45 By folechno 2008-08-24

the dmg/mana ratio is a little high, maybe increase the mana cost or decrease the damage

and the stun, 2.5 is a little long considering the dmg done, maybe scale it up to 2 sec with both the knife and him

and you say it's not IMBA since the knife can miss, how does it miss? is it a random %? does it miss uphill? downhill? in the fog of war? need more info cause otherwise it seems like the knife will always hit and then it is IMBA

for Chokushi no Magan, just add the casting time to the

46 By folechno 2008-08-24

description since it is the same at all levels

again, the dmg/mana ratio is high, I'd suggest taking out the dps, leave the slow and the base damage, or decrease the base damage so it will end up being 300ish, or increase mana cost (but I'd go with decreasing the dmg)

Jyuunana Bunkatsu is imba imo, yes the enemy can move out of the aoe but that won't happen very much, his ulti will be a follow up to his stun skill and will leave the enemy will almost no hp, and no way to regen it

47 By folechno 2008-08-24

you could equate it to Huskar's ulti be he also takes damage and it's also based on current hp, not total hp

leaving a certain amount of hp is good, but those numbers aren't too much so the enemy is more or less dead

how long do the slow and silence last? is it just inside aoe or based on time?

you should have him approach at faster than 375, since that's his speed with treads, maybe 425 or 450

for skill synergies are good, his big combo I think would be Kyokushi Nanaya up to the hero, even

48 By folechno 2008-08-24

if only he stuns, the he will still have enough time to ulti while they are stunned, and then the slow will allow him to set up Chokushi no Magan which will by itself deal enough damage to kill them, and as long as he hits them once they won't be able to regen hp, so almost guaranteed kill

will the eyes work with the immolation from radiance?

item synergies are good, but I think it would be smarter to rely on an ally to disable rather than to use your own slow to cast his ulti

49 By folechno 2008-08-24

he seems more like a combo killer rather than a dps hero, kinda like NA

so for items, I would say BoT over Treads (not that he will need to chase)

since he isn't an int hero, he will need mana for his combo, so a bottle or an arcane ring would be a good early game item, allowing him to gank and kill

then maybe a Bfly and maybe Linkens to make sure the combo isn't interrupted

crits wouldn't be too good imo since he will be doing lots of damage due to the eyes, so aspd would be better

50 By folechno 2008-08-24

and maybe a survival item like a Vanguard or a HoT

I don't think Dagon is necessary for the combo, and getting it for the int isn't too good, the bottle or ring would be better

a bloodstone might be good since he will be getting lots of kills

and since he has an orb, getting another orb would be dumb, and neither SnY or Skadi have good stats for the cost imo

for allies, disablers and nukers, he will get dmg from eyes so he won't need dmg boosters, and the necrolyte combo is beast

51 By folechno 2008-08-24

he isn't really dps until late game so enfeeble won't do much, and the bonus damage will get around the enfeeble (I think if it's like impetus dmg, maybe not if it's like GS and affects his base dmg)

this hero seems way IMBA, the only redeeming quality is that he doesn't have much mana, but that can be easily solved

well explained, somewhat creative from a Dota standpoint (I think you used an anime character as a base), needs some major balancing imo
5/10