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predator - Intergalactic Hunter

Created by @$+R@\_ on 2007-05-23
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As a universal hunter, these heartless savages have traveled dimensions and galaxies in honor of sport and respect among other creatures. Knowing the war between the sentinel and the scourge, the predators have joined forces with the sentinels, knowing that their sworn enemies, the aliens, have sided with the scourge. They are determined to destroy all that the aliens stand for, taking the scourge down in the process.

Blood Hunting (N/A)
The predator yields a powerful blood-hungry blade, ready to cut anything in it's way, especially aliens. Whenever the predator attacks, the blade in his hands makes him feel much more determined to kill. With every powerful slash, His prey feels the pain he gains more guile and will to destroy his prey.
Level 1 - Every additional strike shall get: -4 bonus damage.(16 dmg cap) -Enemy unit is slowed by 15%.(Atk spd. and Move spd.) -lasts 2 seconds after last strike.
Level 2 - Every additional strike shall get: -6 bonus damage.(24 dmg cap) -Enemy unit is slowed by 20%.(Atk spd. and Move spd.) -lasts 2 seconds after last strike.
Level 3 - Every additional strike shall get: -16 bonus damage. -Enemy unit is slowed by 25%.(Atk spd. and Move spd.) -lasts 3 seconds after last strike.
Level 4 - Every additional strike shall get: -20 bonus damage. -Enemy unit is slowed by 30%.(Atk spd. and Move spd.) -Armor of enemy is now Lowered by 3. -lasts 5 seconds after last strike.
Great skill for killing or whatever. lvl armor reduction stacks with desolator, but not with hero/unit skills.
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A

Framework: The predator's blade gets an empower like glow. Each level has a different color glow. -LVL 1 yellow -LVL 2 orange -LVL 3 red -LVL 4 violet

Notes: A skill that enables the versatile predator to become a Dps hero.

SAT-COM (C)
The predator is equipped with a computer-controlled explosive. The bomb is automatically activated if the predator dies, but the predator may choose to use it at will for the better cause, to slay it's prey and claim the trophy.
Level 1 - SAT-COM explodes on death with a damage of 150 and stun duration of 1.5 sec Within 250. If The predator sets it, he is allowed 1 at a time. Invisible and AoE of 200 with the same effects. Can only be activated through stepping on it.
Level 2 - SAT-COM explodes on death with a damage of 200 and stun duration of 2 sec Within 300. If The predator sets it, he is allowed 1 at a time. Invisible and AoE of 250 with the same effects. Can only be activated through stepping on it.
Level 3 - SAT-COM explodes on death with a damage of 270 and stun duration of 2.4 sec Within 360. If The predator sets it, he is allowed 2 at a time. Invisible and AoE of 310 with the same effects. Can only be activated through stepping on it.
Level 4 - SAT-COM explodes on death with a damage of 320 and stun duration of 2.7 sec Within 400. If The predator sets it, he is allowed 2 at a time. Invisible and AoE of 350 with the same effects. Can now be activated through stepping on it and activating by the predator.
A safe and sure way to ensure no deaths or retribution is set.
Mana Cost: Death = 0/0/0/0; Set = 130/ 150/ 200/ 245
Cooldown: 60 all level (death and set)

Framework: if on death, the predators body explodes like a techie bomb. if set and activated, it looks like a square computer thingy.

Notes: A great gank and safety skill.

EMP - vision (E)
Due to the advanced alien technology that the predator has, he can now see and feel units around him using his EMP viewer.
Level 1 - The predator Senses a hero within 1000 Aoe around him. Invisible units are sensed but Not seen.
Level 2 - The predator Senses a hero within 1100 Aoe around him. Invisible units are sensed but Not seen.
Level 3 - The predator Senses a hero within 1200 Aoe around him. Invisible units are now seen if within the Vision of the predator.
Level 4 - The predator Senses a hero within 1250 Aoe around him. Invisible units are sensed and seen if within the vision of the predator.
An anti gank and pro gank skill that helps you and your allies. Invisible heroes are seen only when within normal vision of the predator, but sensed if within Aoe of skill.
Mana Cost: 110/135/155/45 per sec.
Cooldown: 15/13/10/NA

Framework: A status icon appears on the Predator's and the hero being sensed.

Notes: For ganks and for avoiding unwanted company.

Plasma Caster Blast (T)
The Plasma Caster (also known as the "tri-cannon", "Plasma cannon" and sometimes "shoulder cannon"), is a shoulder-mounted cannon. A three-dot laser sight, which appears as a triangle in the Predator's HUD, is used to show the Predator where the shot will go. The Plasma Caster will automatically lock on a target if corresponding vision is activated.
Level 1 - He Takes aim for 2 seconds, Blast homes in on unit and damages all enemy units in a line by 180. If Distance traveled by laser is shorter than 1000 the targeted unit is stunned by 1.5 sec.
Level 2 - He Takes aim for 2.4 seconds, Blast homes in on unit and damages all enemy units in a line by 240. If Distance traveled by laser is shorter than 1000 the targeted unit is stunned by 2 sec.
Level 3 - He Takes aim for 3 seconds, Blast homes in on unit and damages all enemy units in a line by 360. If Distance traveled by laser is shorter than 1000 the targeted unit is stunned by 2.4 sec.
Level 4 - N/A

Like shockwave. its great for last hitting the running enemy or just for farming.
Mana Cost: 175/230/315
Cooldown: 75/60/45

Framework: The predator goes into a prone position, and the plasma caster comes out of his shoulder. He is unable to move for the casting time alloted and he fires a red laser directly in a straight line. regardless of position of target, the laser will home in.

Notes: Can be used like Dwarven's assasinate, or a set up a gank for team mates to go for a kill if hero is within 1000 aoe, you give them a free stun, and a damage to neighboring enemies.

Discussion:

The predator Is a go getter. He is blessed with great strength and a respectable agility to ready for Blood Hunting . And a safety plan, SAT-COM if ever you die or you want to set up . And to sense stuff Disappear . It can also be used for escaping or chasing. Finally, you may use Plasma Caster Blast for killing and set up for allies. All in all, his skills all work together to live up to his name, THE PREDATOR.

As for items, many combos are there. But certain mentionables are:

-Sange and yasha is good. It can stack with blood hunting. maim + slow again!

-Stygian Desolator. Another combo item that stacks with blood hunting. -9 armor!

Mjollnir -the agi boost will heighten the ferocity of Blood Hunting , plus the consecutive chain lightnings is great for farming.

HOPE YOU HAVE FUN WITH THIS GUY!

THANKS TO:

DS!

drew...for making this amazing site!

http://hiveworkshop.com ...for the icons!

I swear! i will write new stuff for this guy. just wait. for the mean time, rate his skills first. i nerfed and changed a lot.

Changelog:

2007-10-29: i Changed his skills...thats pretty much it.

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1 By triples612 2007-05-23

i think u need to work on blood hunting and his ult lil bit...
first of all, blood hunting is combination of different heroes' skills which makes it kinda imba..
and his ult is a combination of assassination and tinker's laser thing..
and the whole "becoming invisible to gem of true sight"... even though it last only 5 secs in lvl 1, as u gain more lvl it can last 15 secs and as long as u want if u have mana, defeats purpose of getting gem of truesight.. that shouldn't happen..

2 By Bruno_89 2007-05-23

Hmm.. Very very imba. And becoming invisible to gem of true sight is crap. Don't even think it could be done.

3 By Luka_9 2007-05-23

y. impossible. taht gem thing...maybe for 5,6,7,8 secs max? needs work

4 By Undercover13 2007-05-23

Extremelly powerful!! Too imba for his own good!

5 By nthomas5143 2007-05-23

I almost never give bad reviews but this one is a little much. Every ability on this character needs nerfing. Make bloodhunting only the damage effect, make his shurikans have no bounce, dissapear make it not immune to the Gem, and make the cooldown higher, cuz w/ it at 10 its more mana efficient to stay at level 3, then to go to 4. And the ult, ur gonna need to completely redesign it cuz all it is now is a combination of ults. Try mabye a close range heavy damage attack. like range 200 1sec cast. There is an idea w/ this hero but your skills are IMBA and must be reworked. Give it a makeover and it may work out for you.

6 By Firesky 2007-05-23

hmmmm i read his story and now im thinking whe did DOTA go Twilight zone ...... o and its WAR craft not starcraft so aliens w/ the scourge umm try to keep it believable and is he a ninja or a hunter 1s 2 skills are pretty ninjalike and his third skill immune to Gem defeats he purpose of the gem and it shudnt be a skill tht shud be an ulti at the least and his ulti o so u combined laser with assasinate .... ok umm hes imbalanced his story is bad no offense and hes a hunter not an assasin so give him some damage skills for close range not invis and a long range plasma cannon w/ shruikens

7 By jdc214 2007-05-23

dude thats just wow...uber nerf all of his abilities or change them and maybe he could be an ok hero

8 By `UnholY` 2007-05-23

1st skill is imba.. too many effects for one skill.

2nd skill should have lower damage each jump, so it wouldn't be that imba.

3rd skill is alright, perma invis but for the price of your mana.

4th skill is alright too.

9 By Shadowinks 2007-05-23

SO IMBA........ I can't believe what the first skill does. makes ulfsaar's third skill look like useless attack.

10 By 940108 2007-05-23

hmm....wat map have this hero?anyone mind to tell me pls?

11 By 940108 2007-05-23

hmm....wat map have this hero?anyone mind to tell me pls?

12 By mikorkeza 2007-05-24

Ulti is alright coz it drains big mana per second. Plus it's a str-type hero so he can't be invis for a long time....

Ima give ya confident smiley

13 By Shimrra_3 2007-05-24

First skill is uberly imba. The fury swipes bit AND attack speed? And it lasts nearly twice as long too? Shuriken Blades I like, Disappear is horrible, Plasma is basically Assassinate with a trippy extra. Needs a huge amount of fixes/remake. Predator idea is cool, but these abilities don't work. Maybe make a skill synergy.

14 By Bard Man 2007-05-24

Bard Man is here to rate you hero and--
SWEET ZOMBIE JESUS ON A POGO STICK! Bard Man must work fast!

Blood Hunting: This is a combo of Rexxar's Beast Rage and Ulfsaar's Fury Swipes. You really need to fix this. Maybe change it to just damage or attack speed. Mabe keep the lifesteal at level 4... Maybe...

Shuriken Blades: This isn't too bad. Since the damage is low, this seems fine. Could be good for farming since they jump.

Disappear: Ok, this is total bullsh*t. IMMUNITY TO THE GEM OF TRUESIGHT?! You must be high, because NOTHING that makes a hero invisible should be immune to the gem. (Mortred doesn't count. She only looks invisible.) Now I won't jump on ya for the level four power. I'd actually like poofing out of a fight at will, but please, RAISE the mana cost per second. Don't lower it. To make up for the lacking of gem immunity, I suggest you increase the move speed bonus, or maybe some bonus damage when he reveals himself.

Plasma Caster Blast: Wtf? Ok, there are a few things to talk about here. One, this is a combo of Boush's Laser and Kardel's Assassinate. Learn to be original. Two, why would you bother blinding them? This is more useful at long range then in attack range. Three, Why does it jump from 2 seconds, to 1.5 ,then back to 2 seconds for the casting time?

Overall: Ok, to begin with, this is out of place in warcraft. Yes, the predators do seem like an ok idea for a hero, but save it for when Star Craft 2 comes out. I'd bet my left nut that a DotA clone will be made for it... Anyway, nerf this guy. ASAP!

15 By xiaomage2 2007-05-24

kinda unoriginal
and overpowered

16 By ncc1701 2007-05-24

Gooddddddddddaaaaaaaaa but noooooooo

17 By Dotambayan 2007-05-24

Man, this hero IS an IMBA build... dang... it totally needs work on skills..

18 By rasmark 2007-05-24

imbA

19 By DarkSlayer_14 2007-05-25

IMBA dude...I mean wat were U thinkinG?? sory if I offend U but Immune 2 gem?? wtf! and that ulti sory but this guy's not going to dota no way!

20 By vendor123 2007-05-25

imba

21 By TheNotorious 2007-05-27

Blood hunting by itself can finish a lot of heros.........way to IMBA

22 By duesex 2007-05-27

score=1

23 By TrollPunk 2007-05-29

rofl i like it!

24 By qwerty143 2007-06-01

no way dude! too powerful!

25 By tat92 2007-06-01

i like it...

26 By jeremiahjunio 2007-06-03

imBa and too poWerfuL!

27 By Shimrra_3 2007-06-03

No fixes yet! Don't make me give you a 2/10, I don't like doing that... FIX IT!!! Guys hes not coming back, hes gone on vacation or something.

28 By Zinc6c12 2007-06-03

something more like blur would be more reasonable for the dissapear. get enough mana regen and you're unkillable indefinetely, unreasonable. First skill is way too powerful and ult...why would lvl 2 have shorter cast time than 1 and 3?

29 By Doom Dragon 2007-06-03

I wish there is alien too! He can be like Naix! They can be partners but I like this dude! Is he available or he's still creating!?

30 By BoReD 2007-06-07

his ulti is too IMBA already
u see...
his ulti has more dmg than ds 1.
his range is also more 2.
maybe the 1st skill killed the poor guy already even before u can cast the ulti
gg if he is in

31 By killengerV 2007-06-12

rexxar/gondor/tinker/sniper
lvl one invis goes 5,10,15 then umlimited? lol
way to much farming with sheriekens
was a good idea tho

32 By em0_kid00 2007-06-17

THATS NOT POWERFUL NO ONE CAN COMPARE TO THE POWER OF THE DARK SIDE!!!!!

33 By laelion 2007-06-18

Shuriken needs to have a range.

34 By zimzum 2007-06-21

i think the "hero" idea is cool..
maybe u can work for the "aliens" in the scourge side ? http://www.dotastrategy.com/images/smileys/cool.gif
Cool
agree w/ most of the comments on skill 1 & skill 2,
maybe for the third skill u can work for "autocast", invisible as long as mana consumed

35 By Surujiu 2007-06-28

This Hero is pretty to me.Indeed there is somthing to work out cause he is 2 imba.So i think first skill shall give only the dmg or only AS.For the second skill a lill bit less dmg or fewer swords.The trird skill is somthing new and very interesting,i think it's ok but the cooldown 4 the first 3 levels must be a lil bigger and the mana cost 4 the fourth level must be also higher.Ulti....I don't now..it's not proper 4 this hero to me.Although the story and the idea is too cool man.Keep up with this

36 By Team Havok 2007-07-04

WAY TOO IMBA

37 By An6el0 2007-07-06

i don't get it his ulti at lvl 1 has a 2 sec. aiming time. in lvl 2 it takes 1.5 sec. and in 3 2 sec. again? One more thing the 3rd skill which makes you invisible is really way-off too powerfull... wat if he equips radiance and mana regenaration items? he could become invisible 'till the end of the game waaaaa.... and he would only appear just to use his ulti or some skills then hide again... what a bummer...

38 By b3yong 2007-07-08

NOOB new hero ideas..dam freaking unbalance laaa dude!!!balance this hero..but i love the the style of this hero..just unbalance onli xD

39 By Aced Out 2007-07-28

how do u get the autocast icons. i cant find it anywhere. plz answer

40 By xanynorian 2007-08-22

Nice. Too nice

41 By xanynorian 2007-08-22

Nice. Too nice

42 By abovesky 2007-08-23

i like to say but ur first skills is like ursas skill but urs has a cap on it but i still like it

43 By dragonboy 2007-10-09

kool hero love the skills hope he gets made

44 By chukdy 2007-10-27

Hey I think he is too imba, especially disappear... How can you kill him? It's almost impossible if he is immune to truesight! Even if he is stunned/near death situations he can just "bend the light" and run for it and tp. But i guess he is fun to play.

45 By unholydonuts2 2007-11-07

Nice hero idea,avp lol..but a bit too powerful.Emp vision takes too much mana.

46 By AXCELACCEL 2007-11-21

nice hero

47 By MyQues 2007-11-27

this is my most favourite character!!!!!!
the predator..
i like the abilities,but not the EMP - vision,i think its better to swap it with the predator's spear or shuriken!!!!!more damage pls!!!

48 By MyQues 2007-11-27

can please do this hero??
which map??

49 By Cloudzstrife 2007-12-06

Yeah blood hunting needs a bit of chance. Its kind of like you put on stygian and many other things.

50 By The Liberator 2007-12-14

He looks pretty damn awsome, only if we could have these guys in DotA, oh well...

maybe one day.

51 By barricab 2008-01-29

nc build,but melee and lo mana
pool

52 By barricab 2008-01-29

nc build,but melee and lo mana
pool

53 By faceless_void639 2008-02-02

very imba

54 By shadowee189 2008-02-20

quite strong and imbalance, but the hero story idea is good

55 By XxShad0wxX 2008-02-29

this is one sweet hero dude

56 By sushii 2008-04-21

The first skill is like a free Skadi. This guy is so imba it's not even funny. Nerf it like mad