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Malark - The Undead Paladin Captain

Created by mance435 on 2007-06-05
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It was 2 years since the war between The Sentinel and The Scourge and Malark, who is the Paladin Captain serving The Sentinel was killed while trying to save a group of innocent merchants. He was resurrected by the Lich King and is now given the same task as his previous life, but now he serves the Scourge. Malark can now wield 2 swords, the power to summon dead warriors, the ability to corrupt minds and the ability to change to a powerful beast capable of sucking the life of enemies.

Corrupted Courage (C)
Malark summons undead Paladins to serve The Scourge. Dead Paladins last for 100 seconds.
Level 1 - Summons 2 Paladins. 20-25 damage.1 armor.No skills.
Level 2 - Summons 4 Paladins. 30-35 damage.2 armor.Has Bash= 10% chance, 50 damage, 1 second stun.
Level 3 - Summons 6 Paladins. 40-45 damage.3 armor.Has Frostmourne= 27% increased attack speed, slows enemies by 10%.
Level 4 - Summons 8 Paladins. 50-55 damage.4 armor.Has all the other skills
The skills do not change, you just get them as its level increases.
Mana Cost: 50/100/150/200
Cooldown: 5/10/15/20

Framework: Exactly like summon minion of Necronomicon.

Notes: This skill is only strong if used at the right time because if not, this will go to waste.I also gave the Paladins passive moves so it would be easy for you to use them.

Dark Mind (D)
Malark corrupts an enemy's mind, causing them to follow your orders.It only works on creeps.Level affects gold obtained. Lasts 100 seconds
Level 1 - 25 gold.
Level 2 - 50 gold.
Level 3 - 75 gold.
Level 4 - 100 gold.
If the controlled creep is killed by the enemy, both sides get the gold.
Mana Cost: 100
Cooldown: 50

Framework: Exactly like the skill of Helm of the Dominator.

Notes: Use with CC to trap an enemy(9 minions + yourself will stop an enemy from escaping)

Dual Wield ()
Malark now wields 2 weapons making him faster, stronger and allows him to do 2 fast strikes.
Level 1 - 10% increased attack speed. 10 damage. 5% chance to do 2 fast attacks.
Level 2 - 20% increased attack speed. 20 damage. 10% chance to do 2 fast attacks.
Level 3 - 25% increased attack speed. 25 damage. 15% chance to do 2 fast attacks.
Level 4 - 35% increased attack speed. 35 damage. 20% chance to do 2 fast attacks.
2 fast attacks means that 2 attacks will be done continuously without stopping(damage will be the same for both).
Mana Cost:
Cooldown:

Notes: This move is really useful with MKB or Buriza if you get 2 fast attacks because it would mean 2 critical strikes.

Rage of the Undead (R)
Malark changes into a powerful beast that can suck his enemy's life.Last 30 seconds.
Level 1 - +25 damage.10% lifesteal.
Level 2 - +50 damage.20% lifesteal.
Level 3 - +75 damage.30% lifesteal.
All your skills except for Dual Wield will be lost
Mana Cost: 150
Cooldown: 30

Framework: Sound will be just like Rage but you will change to an undead Ulfsaar.

Notes: It will be your #1 killer move if you are about to die or you want to kill.

Discussion:

SKILL SYNERGIES:

For offense:

Corrupted Courage + Dark Mind helps in trapping an enemy for a kill

Corrupted Courage + Dark Mind + Rage of the Undead gives you more power while the enemy is trapped(has to be in an exact order)

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For defense:

+ blocks an enemy from chasing you down

Corrupted Courage + Dark Mind + Rage of the Undead Lv.2 CC has bash and RoU has lifesteal(if the converted creep has stun,better)

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RECOMMENDED ITEMS:

Trapper Build: This uses summons and controlled enemies to trap enemies.

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Lifesteal Build: Rage of the Undead with items help in lifesteal

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Double-Strike Build: Uses Dual Wield to make double criticals

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SKILL BUILDS:

Trapper Build:

- 1, 3, 5, 7

Dark Mind - 2, 4, 6, 8

Dual Wield - 10, 12, 13, 14

Rage of the Undead - 9, 11, 16

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Lifesteal Build:

Corrupted Courage - 2, 4, 8, 9

Dark Mind - 10, 12, 13, 14

Dual Wield - 1, 3, 5, 7

Rage of the Undead - 6, 11, 16

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Double-Strike Build: Follow the Lifesteal Build

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BEST ALLIES: Use your creativity on this one

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FOES TO WATCH OUT FOR: Same with this too

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Changelog:

2007-06-15: Weakened all the skills.

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1 By hus05 2007-06-05

very imba!!
first skill 8 paladins with reincarnate at level 4!?!? needs to nerf that.
second skill 20% chance to kill an enemy hero...
third skill is ok
ultimate duration needs to b nerfed other wise its ok

2 By hus05 2007-06-05

sorry bout double post but imagine corrupting roshan for 200 seconds !!

3 By flobthelog 2007-06-05

Corruption is too good. Corrupting heros and then suiciding them at roshan so you can then take the kill. TOo good

4 By 2morrow4ever 2007-06-05

Dark mind is too powerful. I would recommend not allowing players to take over ancients. The taking over hero has some potential. Perhaps a health limit similar to Axe's ult?

The ultimate skill you posted confuses me. You give it an insane amount of damage and then a life drain. I think that the life drain spell might be unnecessary. And if its kept, i think that its like combining the ults of Pugna and Lycan.

5 By Shimrra_3 2007-06-05

IMBA IMBA IMBA NO FURTHER COMMENT! I USUALLY AM MORE SENSIBLE THAN THIS BUT YOU DESERVE IT RIGHT NOW! HOW THE HELL IS THIS BALANCED??? FIX FIX FIX FIX! FIX FIX FIX FIX FIX FIX FIX... OR I GIVE A 1/10 FOR SEVERE BALANCE PROBLEMS!
Sorry I have to scream at someone, makes the most sense to scream at the IMBA^1000 Hero Ideas!

6 By DotaLancerBoy 2007-06-05

way way way to imba. Having a 20% to corrupt an enemy hero for 200 seconds is so imba. At late game you jsut cast as much as possible on their carry hero and then have him attack there buildings. Plus 8 paladins. Average of 75 dmg each. Thats 600 dmg per paladin attack. Then lets say at lvl 7 you have a 75 dmg attack. So 675. And another 75 from a converted enemy hero. 750 dmg per attack. Now that will be able to rax the enemies at level 7. Maybe even push to the win. Then with OMG lifesteal ulti that lasts 60 with a 30 second cool down. Its way to much.

7 By Jimm-Hill 2007-06-05

How much hp do the plaladin

8 By tutu123321 2007-06-05

This guy is IMBA......

9 By boboboz 2007-06-05

unrealistic.
stats go up 7.3 a lev? way too much
too much base armour/atk speed
ur first 3 skills are as good as. ultimates and ur ultimate is just ridiculous.

first skill maybe should have 2 paladins for all levels and no abilities.

second skill should not work on heros and roshan.

thrid skill is like combining weaver's geminate with searing arrows and half strafe at no cooldown, infinite duration, and no mana cost.

ultimate change during to around 10 seconds.

if this gets put in dota without a nerf im sure me as well as many others will stop playing dota because it will be who ever is lucky or picks fastest wins.

10 By tundaga2 2007-06-05

Agreed with the rest of the comments. WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY too good for a Dota hero. No weakness! The undead paladins could be cast every 5 seconds for 50 mana on the first level!? You'll overrun the lane before the real game even starts. Keep on casting those Paladins while you're at the fountain and you'll be fine coz they have 180 lasting time. At level 4, 8 paladins with 50-100 damage with reincarnation... scary.
Moreover, look at the corrupt skill! You can keep on visiting Roshan and try to corrupt him to destroy a whole lane. 20% kill hero... much too imba
Third skill gives u +40 damage when u r level 7, not including the other glittering benefits. Level 7 and you'll have a crystalis equivalent for no cost...
Last skill, turn yourself into an absolute beast of a machine...forever. The lasting effect is higher than its cooldown. First level gives you two mithril hammers worth of damage and a mask of death worth of lifesteal.

Good ideas but its much much too imbalanced to play on Dota. A whole lane will be dominated in level 7. Godlike kill instantly due to insane damage from all the skills. Serious nerfing needed

11 By tundaga2 2007-06-05

Another little addition, paladin skill level 2. 4 paladins with 20% stun of 3 seconds!!! Once they've given you one stun, you're doomed for life

12 By DrFuler 2007-06-05

13 By Bard Man 2007-06-05

JESUS MARY MOTHER OF GOD ON A ZOMBIFIED POGO SIICK!!!!

WTF IS THIS?!?!!?

CORRUPTED COURAGE: IMBA!

DARK MIND: IMBA!

DUAL WIELD: SLIGHTLY IMBA!

RAGE OF THE UNDEAD: VERY VERY VERY VERY IMBA!!!

UNTIL YOU FIGURE OUT WHAT IS IMBA AND WHAT ISN'T YOU ARE ON MY SPIT LIST!!!

14 By NoobSauce 2007-06-05

uh can u say NERF LIKE A BITCH!

15 By got milk? 2007-06-05

Very IMBA and weird... not in a bad way tho.

16 By Tokemus 2007-06-05

My God this hero needs some nerfing! O_O

17 By Raxxar 2007-06-05

HOLY SH!T !!!!!! 8 PALADINS WITH REINCARNATE?!?!?!? WTF?
man it looks like your paladin has 3 ultis ... and theyre all imba!

18 By duesex 2007-06-05

should be 0

19 By nthomas5143 2007-06-05

IMBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, i mean seriously guys, who let this get posted?

20 By Doom Dragon 2007-06-05

Put this in random categorie then maybe you can have a chance to use this powerful dude!

21 By Bruno_89 2007-06-05

1 word. LOL! Worst hero ever.

22 By KevinDesano5 2007-06-05

nice hero concept but the skills are way too imbalance xD edit it again and think a balance skill so it will be a cool hero

23 By Zinc6c12 2007-06-06

LOL paladins can't dual wield

24 By Greedygood 2007-06-06

This guide has some of the coolest icons I've ever seen on a hero idea.

But, I have to give it a 2/10 because of the 4-letter word that everyone else has already mentioned.

I must give you credit, it's ALMOST as imba as Dirge...LOL

25 By Shimrra_3 2007-06-06

*SCREAMS UNTIL HIS HEAD EXPLODES*: IIIMMMMBAAAAA!!!!! 0/10 rounds to 1/10

26 By kAEm 2007-06-06

WTF!!! HOW HIGH WERE YOU WHEN YOU MADE THIS HERO?! Seriously this actually had to be checked by someone right?

First skill - 8 Paladins with 20% Bash for THREE SECONDS + Slow 15% + 30% Atkspd + REINCARNATE

Second skill - Anyone wanna fight a Black Dragon at lvl 1? Flying chaos damage?

Third skill - broken

Ult - plus 1 5 0 damage... and you keep dual blade/claw/whatever - 40% chance to hit for extra 250+ damage plus whatever @#^&(*!&%$@# BLARGH!@ WHAT ARE YOU ON?!@!

27 By hermeticas 2007-06-06

YOU ARE A NOOB!!!

28 By Rai 2007-06-06

His first skill can already be an ultimate, his ultimate is abnormal. 200 SECONDS OF CONTROL OF THE ENEMY?! WTF??? WHAT WILL THE ENEMY DO IN THAT 200 SECONDS? WATCH PORNO OR SOMETHING?! No offense, really, but why did this hero idea get approved?

29 By phalankz 2007-06-06

summonig skill is 400-800 damage if you focus them on 1 target aS well as they have reincarnation (SO IMBA)
2nd skill NO SPELLS WILL EVER WORK ON ROSHAN OR ANCIENTS and posession of a hero is rediculous especially if you have 200 second possesion and 50 second cooldown. potentially within the first 20 minutes of the game you could have all your enemie heros possessed and run them into your fountain.
3rd skill is not tooo IMBA just for of a 1.5-2 skills in 1
Ulti) is like 12 skills in one you might as well make him immune to spells and reincarnation and critical strike 10X in there especially since the tranformation looks like at lvl 3 that it lasts 30 seconds with a 30 second cooldown. 300 second cooldown... i still think it would be imba. Just make your ulti KILLS ALL ENEMIES WITHIN 500 AOE and fully restore your health ever say 180 seconds.
I dont get how some of these heros get approved.

Cool Skill and hero idea BUT NERF IT ALL
I am not even going to vote because if EEVERYTHING gets nerfed I could rate this hero higher.

30 By TOPAK™ 2007-06-06

Dang. I M BA.

This guy sure got lucky that his hero got approves. (Dang, why didn't mine get approved XD)

COOL NAME COOL SKILL NAMES,

BUT IT'S ONE WAY TICKET TO NERF LAND.

31 By kill_me_now 2007-06-06

his ulti is too much .
lose the life drain
change (+damage) to (+attack speed)

then it will be balance ..

dark mind ..
lose the ancient and roshan

32 By kill_me_now 2007-06-06

corroupt courage ...
its too powerfull .. you summon 8 paladin with 50-100 damage .. crazy !!

+ its cooldown is too short for such a powerful creep ..

33 By DeSiRE 2007-06-06

WTF AT THIS HERO...LOL

skill 1 - basically you have 8 skel kings with treds + eos + 2x Bashers, not to mention a 3 sec stun?!?! wtf? this skill is enough to win the game single handed at level 4.

skill 2 - ancients and roshan is immune to magic..so theoretically, i learn this skill, run to roshan, roll my dice and see if i can get the 1/10 chance to dom roshan...wot hero at level 1 can possibly take on roshan? cooldown 50 seconds? and dominate heros for 200 seconds? wtf r the enemy heroes gonna do for 200 seconds whilst ur controling them :S not to mention taking their items just plain wtf skill

skill 3 - only not imba skill IF u didnt have the rest of the skills

skill 4 - so this heros ulti consists of, pugna's ulti, svens ulti, satanic + 5% extra life steal.

4/10 for effort
0/10 for hero

if this hero was ever created for dota, no game will be playable if somone gets their hands on it..VERY IMBA NERF IT how does heroes like this even get approved ffs.

34 By AceofThornZ 2007-06-06

zzz the idiot who created this hero idea should consider not creating another hero idea

35 By Bard Man 2007-06-06

The idiot who created this hero should consider checking into a rehab clinic.

36 By KevinDesano5 2007-06-06

pls stop insulting this boy i feel so sad for him... he just a normal person and every person make mistake and i hope he learned his lesson for his biggest mistake ^_^ better luck next time mance435 thanks for sharing your thoughts with us even people here is insulting you like hell..

37 By Envoker 2007-06-07

THIS HERO IS TRULY IMBA IN ANYWAYS
ITS UGLY TO PUT THINGS LIKE CONTROLLING UR ENEMY HEROES AND ULTIMATE ENEMY LIKE ROSHAN AND SUMMONING 8 VERY STRONG SOLDIERS WITH REINCARNATION AND AN ATTACK OF 50-100 AND THE DURATION IS TOO LONG WITH A COOLDOWN OF 20 SECONDS WEW EVEN JUST PUTING THE CORRUPTED SOLDIERS LVL 2 IT WILL BE VERY DEDLY WITH A BASH OF 20% CHANCE AND A BONUS OF 50 DAMGE WITH A 3 SECONDS STUN THEIR ALREADY LIKE HEROES WITHOUT STATS AND THE ULTIMATE WEW TOOOO IMBA BONUS OF 150 DAMAGE WITH A LIFE STEAL OF 30% IN SIXTY SECONDS AWWWW EVEN SVEN HAS A GOD STRENGTH THAT LASTS IN 25 SECONDS

38 By Envoker 2007-06-07

sry for double post and look at the cooldown of the ulti 30 seconds and a mana cost of 150 in all levels awww and look at the stats it gets when i levels +3 to str 1.8 to agi 2.5 to int
a total of 7.3 stats and the dual wield is i think too strong imagine yurnero with a critical of 2.0 with a chance of 40% i think, without a bonus ASPD.

39 By saint92 2007-06-07

lol.the 3 second stun seem stupid..lol.haha

40 By Black Angel 2007-06-07

1st skill VERY VERY IMBA..20%chance to bash for 3 seconds by 1(not all) paladins sounds pretty scary..dont u think?also reincarnation is a glorious skill and only the Skeleton king has it as an ulti,not as a summon skill..
2nd skill another IMBA.U can control ROSHAN????and if im not mistaken for 20 seconds at lvl 4?
what can i say..i wont talk about the other skills.I have to agree with Shimrra_3.
Alsoooo,something that made me LMAO.NO boots of travel/power treads on the build?uhhh...

41 By Daiguren Hyourinmaru 2007-06-07

this hero is total imba omg.....
all he skills is jus like ulti holy cow..
controlling heros n ROSHAN???
8 paladins with reincarnate???
tis is nuts
no comments.....=

42 By White_Tiger 2007-06-07

Far too IMBA for my liking. the first skill defeats any ulti I can name. And controlling Roshan, that is a strange idea. The ulti is pure
psychotic.

43 By silent_yet_deadly 2007-06-07

IMBA

NERF THIS

44 By RedfirewizArd 2007-06-07

Woah he needs to be NERFED, what more is there to say?

45 By youdienow123 2007-06-07

LMFAO DONT JOKE AROUND.
8 PALADINS! 100 DAMAGE, 180 SEC DURATION, AND RECARNATION WHOA!!!
DARK MIND= INSTANT DEATH. YOU XCAN MAKE THE ENEMY HERO SUICIDE OR USE ROSHAN AS AN ULTIMATE LANE PUSHER.

46 By Black Angel 2007-06-08

Sorry about this BUT who has let this be approved?

47 By mikorkeza 2007-06-08

Holy Mother dancing Milkshake!!

IMBA!!

1st skill - Corrupted Imba
2nd skill - Dark Imba
3rd skill - Dual Imba
4th skill - Rage of the Imba

-.00000000000001.00000001.01.01/10 for this hero!!

48 By seductas 2007-06-08

Dude, this is f*cking imba

49 By seductas 2007-06-08

Lol @ KevinDesano5

50 By terrorsinz 2007-06-08

TOO IMBA!!!!!
Imagine an enemy is BEYOND GODLIKE!!!!
U juz dark mind him and he dies!!!!
WTF!!!! This hero is definitely not selected with that skill!!!!!

51 By flamedevilpj 2007-06-08

imbaness 3rd skill ok but 1st 2nd and ulti, the ulti to imba +150 dmg for 60sec

52 By NeedForKill 2007-06-08

totally imbalance, i won't even take it into consideration. Work harder boy

53 By lowes_sewol 2007-06-08

tang ina wa epek

54 By Bard Man 2007-06-08

HOW DOES THIA GUY STILL HAVE A SCORE OF 2?!

55 By elrich 2007-06-08

Imba.... Not Good... 10% ON ROSHAN.... just get roshan at early game and u can beat all hero...

56 By bloodlust6969 2007-06-08

F*ck! the ability to control roshan and an instant kill and the ability to control heroes????

IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBAIMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBAIMBA IMBA IMBAIMBA

57 By Shimrra_3 2007-06-09

Seriously, admins are supposed to review heroes before submitting them. One of mine took forever and the most imba thing was a sort of Frenzy x2, I mean, look at this... and yeah, no Boots on his builds either.

58 By blahtoot 2007-06-09

Wow cool hero idea!

59 By TheFifthSeason 2007-06-09

This guy would never fly
Way too powerful
Especially the first skill
Those paledins would have to have 100 hp for that to be fair at all
Good idea, but tone it down a bit

60 By Shimrra_3 2007-06-09

S-s-s-someone gave him more than... 1/10...

61 By Black Angel 2007-06-09

I think it was blahtoot.

62 By devilfeathers 2007-06-09

I'm really sorry but this is WAY too imba.

63 By reanne2000 2007-06-09

too overpowered....

nice skills but imba....
nerf them...

64 By boboboz 2007-06-09

lol i just realized all ur item builds are retarded
looks like u just randomly picked out lev 4 items because there are multiple orb effects and nothing to boost movement speed
by far the worst hero idea ever

65 By naracloud 2007-06-09

if this hero was ever made.... as soon as someone gets him all players would leave

66 By Very_Bad_Touch 2007-06-09

hehehehe nice one. actually this one made me laugh a bit. dude c'mon. think before making an hero. it's a bit... no... really powerful... no wait... too strong... not even close... anyway you know what i mean.

67 By mikorkeza 2007-06-10

Maybe you could only get this hero in -6.45 I think.....

68 By Bard Man 2007-06-10

Whoever approved this hero, please step forward. I want to know what pot smoking monkey allowed this guy to be posted. >=-(

69 By Creative_PH 2007-06-10

OMG TAKE OVER ROSHAN!?!?!? lol this is most imba hero IDEA EVER i mean 8 paladins 50-100 damage can easily break a tower.... oh yeah take over a character and make him fight his own towwers,, IMBA 1/10

70 By Shimrra_3 2007-06-11

Admins have some explaining to do, clearly.

71 By bloodlust6969 2007-06-11

This hero is very very weak!

Corrupted courage is very weak. I suggest make 3 charges of reicarnation and a stormbolt and a vampiric aura with you undead paladin buddies. And also their hp must be 1000 so you can push very early.

Darkmind is very very weak also this should be buffed. I suggest increased the chance to control roshan and heroes to 99 percent and it will last for 30 minutes. Oh! and...and make the controlled heroes have lvl 3 godstrength.

Dual wield is very weak also. I suggest buff it and instead of 2 fast attacks make it 10 fast attacks.

Rage of the undead is also very weak. Buff it!

Make it +250 damage with 80 percent lifesteal and the ability to use lvl 3 doom.

sorry Sarcasm....

72 By okjygfesa 2007-06-11

cool

73 By rixpie 2007-06-12

I Remember Drow's ult back in the day!
M
B ut you can corrupt roshan??
A aand 8 summons with reincar and 50-100 dmg?!

I couldn't think of a clever sentence for M but you get the idea?

74 By kpzpinkz 2007-06-12

This character would be too powerful and over kill every other class available in dota

75 By readonly 2007-06-12

Dude can u even play dota??? WHY THE HELL IS THERE MORE THAN 1 ORB EFFECT IN YOUR BUILD, ONE WILL OVERRIDE THE OTHER, THEY DONT STACK!.

76 By dOtA-AlLsTAr 2007-06-12

TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IMBA!!! 0/10

77 By rhenier 2007-06-13

unbelievable... too over powered nid to be nerf

78 By mance435 2007-06-15

I am so sorry I have not been able to check my account in dotastrategy. A lot of you said that it is to imba so I will try to weaken it a bit.AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY!

79 By no0bifier 2007-06-21

gj on nerfing it a bit but still ulti too imba, increase mana cost OR cooldown or reduce how long it lasts

80 By burnerz 2007-06-21

if this hero is official i will use it forever,very IMBA man

81 By Pico 2007-06-21

Still, the damn hero is STILL IMBA. First of all, if the ulti' is going to be 30 CD, put 45 dmg, and 30 lifesteal... So it would be Half of Brood's ulti. (Meaning at last level)
Secondly, Undeadpaladins are STILL imba. lessen numbers and skills. maybe 5% to bash is fine. and bash did 20 dmg. at level 2, you can get a triple kill with 4 paladins, and duel wield.
Palas should be maybe
lvl - 1 : gives 1
lvl - 2: gives two
lvl - 3: gives three
and so on

82 By boredguy 2007-06-22

dude... SUPER IMBA!!! and wat's up with it's title... The Undead Paladin Captain? You can do better...

83 By KevinDesano5 2007-06-22

its still imba mance ^_^ well i suggest that you create another hero idea and not an imba one... because this hero idea page is a mess now... people keep saying it imba imba this hero has no hope... make another one and make sure it suits to the crowd xD also try and study about heroes strategies and come to a conclusion how balance is it ^_^

84 By lorismae12 2007-06-23

too much for a hero.. think of a weaker one..

85 By unta_arab 2007-06-23

IMBA.. Hero like this can kill roshan n being holy shit at lv.7 cause of the CC.

86 By nanunmaro 2007-06-23

uhh last move lasts 30 seconds and its cool down is 30 seconds.... just take around mana pot and your a killing machine... serious nerf needed indeed

87 By nanunmaro 2007-06-23

also sry for double post but... maybe 8 paladins were too much... idk about 1, 2, 3, 4 paladins at each level but 8 at level 4... tahts just gonna get you through a lane in a minute

88 By Going2hell 2007-06-23

1st Skill: 4 paladins no or 1 weak skill.
2nd Skill: Increase cooldown you weakened it enough.
3rd Skill:Drop the fast attacks and the speed or the damage or a little of both
4th skill:Your pretty much allowed to be in this abillity forever increase cooldown.

At least it's not as imba as before.

89 By Igis 2007-06-24

where does it say that the paladins can reincarnate and where does it say that the 3rd skill has a 20% chance to kill a hero? However, i agree this is imbalanced like a pile of blue whale shit and a little fishie on the same scale, this hero being ofcourse the pile of blue wale shit and dota being the little fishie.

90 By giragesh 2007-06-24

THIS IS SOOOOO NOOB WTF UR UNDEAD PALADINS ARE INSAINLY OP MAN....HELPS IN TRAPPING.... LOL

91 By drmirf 2007-06-25

paladins lasts 100 seconds?? too much man...too imba...nerf it plz
but it´s not a bad idea..just looks like zombie a lit bit...I need a original idea plz!!!!

92 By mussara 2007-06-26

i like the hero idea but the skill is a little to powerful like the duel wield.... you can kill easily with that skill

93 By f1rstwizard 2007-06-26

d0od r u kidding? summoned paladins have frostmourne? FROSTMOURNE?!?!?!?

94 By f1rstwizard 2007-06-26

i guess abaddon will have to use his fists since you took his sword lol

95 By LeoMighter 2007-06-26

the summons i think can decrese a lil

96 By lo0lo 2007-06-27

the cc don't have the hp??
the cc at lvl 4 is unbeatable
1/10 sorry

97 By Hultiz 2007-06-27

8 paladins with bash and frostmourne, that's permabash right with summons alone.Allow me to say the words everyone else are saying: IMBA IMBA IMBA (repeatx10). This looks more like the ultimate hero than a serious idea.

But I like the idea to steal control of an enemy hero =)

98 By Zyphir 2007-06-29

I'd love to play this hero...would hate to see him coming my way though.

99 By Zyphir 2007-06-29

It'd be something like...10:21

Yellow (Huskar): Wtf.
Yellow (Huskar): I need a gank.
Yellow (Huskar): Fuck-
Yellow (Huskar): omfg
Yellow (Huskar): Shit, I had to use my ult to clear zombies.

10:41

Yellow (Huskar): !@#$. Zombies are back.

12:52

Yellow (Huskar): Now he has a centaur chieftain.

14:21

Yellow (Huskar): I need a gank. Real bad.

15:23

Yellow (Huskar): All right, let's get him.

Teal (Naga): k, I'll net.

15:31

Teal (Naga): omfg he's raping me

Yellow (Huskar): !@$%! He heals faster than I can kill him!

Blue (Lina): Shit! I got surrounded by paladins and that !@#$%^( centaur chieftain!

[TRIPLE KILL]

17:21

Purple (Sand King): Where the fuck is everyone else?

Orange (Leoric): Yeah, seriously.

21:31

Yellow (Huskar): Fuck this.

Yellow has left the game.

Orange (Leoric): omfg, what a noob.

Teal (Naga): Why don't you try killing him.

Orange (Leoric): fine, I will. noobs.

23:00

Orange (Leoric): fuck this, I'm out of here.

Orange has left the game.
Blue has left the game.
Teal has left the game.
Purple has left the game.

100 By Zyphir 2007-06-29

101 By duro†ar™ 2007-06-29

@zyphir,nice one you should try make a dota comic or somethin'

102 By Kain_luis 2007-06-29

ok dude seriously... are u high, or just incredibly stupid?

every skill is ULTI!!!! how imba is that? 80 percent chance to bash with all the palas? inc asp, CONTROL ROSHAN!?!? become an ownage lifstealer that matcher "LIFESTEALER"??? dude who approved this man, u must have like 3 hours of dota played...

no offence :P

103 By Undercover13 2007-06-29

I would really really want you to tell me which heroes will he have to watch out for IMBA IMBA IMBA IMBA

104 By Brka 2007-06-29

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IMBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA 1/10 TO IMBA MAN JUST TO IMBA

105 By Raxxar 2007-06-29

Well, now that it's been "nerfed" I think that it could become a playable hero....
BUT, you need to kill the summon paladins skill....
It's just WAAAAAAYYYY IMBA, now and before the nerf....
Have you calculated how much damage per second you'll do with 8 paladins dealing 50 damage each?
That's 400 damage PER SECOND or so...
Plus, the more they attack, the faster they get, they can bash a lot (10*8=80% chance of bashing)....
Really man, take that skill out....
The ulti now sounds reasonable, but still, +75 damage is a lot....
Try with +50 or +40...
Dual wield: take one of the bonuses out, the bonus ASPD, or the critical (2 attacks is more than many heroes critical hits)... The bonus damage has to get out of there too....
Well, Dark Mind has become quite a good skill, and it would help him push, but unless the 8 paladins thing is out, it will be very IMBA....
Try to improve it man, and you'll get my rate afterwards....

106 By Zyphir 2007-06-30

He has a 20 bloody second cooldown on the paladin summon thing. That's seriously ridiculous.

107 By Shimrra_3 2007-07-01

@ zyphir = LOL, very nice! I totally agree with duro†ar™, make comics or something.

@ mance435 = this hero isn't recoverable. 100+ people screaming IMBA until the heavens crack open plus several or all skills needing to be not only nerfed but remade completely... try again, seriously. The ultimate is permanent as well, still.

108 By Tomas0113 2007-07-03

109 By Tomas0113 2007-07-03

@ Zyphir:
Mind if I had a copyright of your comic lines?

That will be a hell of a PRISONBREAK, MAS MALALA PA KAY BYAKUYA! PUTANG INA NAMAN!

- PuNYeTA

110 By Tomas0113 2007-07-03

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111 By jhetriskelion 2007-07-03

` THIS HERO IS COOL,,

` BUT THIS IS NOT FAIR ENOUGH

` *SIGH*

112 By Brka 2007-07-05

AND 1 MORE THING.YOU SHOULD MADE 1 MORE SKILL ''HAS A CHASE TO BASH 200%'' OR DOES DAMAGE 2000 DMG MULTYPLY BY 100 OMG THIS HERO IS TO IMBA TO BE TRUE.

113 By duro†ar™ 2007-07-06

hey maybe we should make a new section:"imba dota comics" with this guy as the main chara.Let zyphir make the dialogue,i'm sure it will be a big hit

114 By Tomas0113 2007-07-09

@ duro†ar™:

Well, I agree with what you say, but we need to make comics not only about MALARK, but on all IMBA HIs here on DotAstrategy™! and one sure thing:

And i'll also put it up on every novel I create because I'm also a student novelist...

But first, did you make an agreement with Zyphir?

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117 By EniXBlaze 2007-07-10

This is definitely the GOD OF THE IMBALANCE ! 8 Paladins can do Bash and Frostmourne ! I voted 10 for you !
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119 By KidA 2007-07-18

120 By Cranium_Basher 2007-07-19

FAAAR TO IMBA! Of course I would like to play with him with these skills

121 By duro†ar™ 2007-07-24

what a disaster . . .

122 By PudgeWifDagon 2007-08-02

er... 8 paladins with bash... Permanent stun at level 7... Hello? You out of your mind? Not only the stun frostblade too... so it's stun and slow. 50~55 damage from 8 paladins... lets see... 50 X 8 = 400 so if each paladin hits you twice thats freaking something like 800 ~ 900 damage not including the original hero. Thats around level 7, like I mentioned before those guys got frost and stun so chances are they WILL hit more than once.

Duel... Err... Nice idea but you see...35% attack speed... free hyperstone at level 7? Not to mention the 84 max damage at level 7 since that retarded guy get +3 str each level...

No further analysis needed... I'll quit dota if this hero is ever made.

123 By GiGa_WooTAgE 2007-08-08

This is the most imba hero ive seen!
Firsty 8 Paladins with reincarnate maybe 4 max
Seondly the cd is only 20 secs
maybe 30 secs is better
And your ulti last 30 secs and the cd is 30
so that means that is all the time ulti
WAY TO IMBA!!
1/10 @you

124 By SirWolfBane 2007-08-14

Wow, uber enough, corruption warrior things could take anything down....

125 By R0SENR0T 2007-08-18

126 By dorianking 2007-08-18

jesus christ ppl this guy is probably a noob and i understand that this hero is imba but wtf lol u probably criticized this poor guy so much he probably quit dota and is planning on hunting all of you down

127 By SlwaBluPhnx 2007-08-24

Actually, this guy is pretty good! Paladin is imba just. I mean, 100 seconds is a little over the edge. Make it 15 seconds with 30 sec cooldown. Then either reduce damage to like 30-42, reduce bash to %5 (cuz there is a lot of them) or make it two knights. If that is done, this hero would be the one I would like to play with. So cool.

BTW, don't come on the guy so much. I mean, everyone was a noob in their life once. (I still am so understand my need of sympathy)

128 By Straith 2007-09-04

MAN THIS HERO IS GOOD

129 By Ghost 2007-09-12

Changelog:

* 2007-06-15: Weakened all the skills.

weaken them further?
1/2/3/4 paladins with either slow or bash
bash need to be owned down to 5%
CM doesnt make sense but that may just be me

tone back the +dmg on ult and pump the cooldown a heap.

130 By theodoric 2007-09-18

grabe e2 lakas

131 By arvin91 2007-09-21

Useless Hero.

132 By Isolated 2007-09-24

Too extreme

133 By leneuhj 2007-10-07

Very Good! Create ur own game!

134 By dragonboy 2007-10-09

his ulti and duel wield are the only moves needed in steed of the other 2 if they where critical strike or something he would be a good hero

135 By captaincrunk 2007-10-17

imba hero, 1st skill is too strong, much like dirge's zombies but much more powerful. make them a max of 3-4 zombies and i think youre okay. i dont understand your second skill though. your 3rd skill and ulti seem okay, just tweak them a little bit lower and i think you have a solid hero.

136 By evoblade 2007-10-26

some imba but i like it

137 By chris_8742 2007-10-26

IIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMMMBBBBBBBBBBBBAAAAAAAA

138 By chukdy 2007-10-27

This undead paladin is wow! I like the fact that he's an undead paladin, and the skills, especially Corrupted courage. But, BUT! he is too imba! Give him double bashers and an assault cuirass, imagine what chaos he could do with his undead paladins! Multiple permabashers!

139 By Primne07 2007-10-27

140 By vendetta003 2007-11-10

his first skill is imba

141 By trinitydota 2007-11-15

Seriously, this is total imba. The first skill is already very gay. SUMMON 4 IS ALREADY VERY IMBA!!! BASH, SLOW, 50-55 DAMAGE! Nerfing and stating the duration will probably be needed. The second skill has no explanation whether it can be casted on roshan or ancients. nerfing is needed too. Third skill is nice. 4th skill bonus damage should be reduced. Overall, need to be nerfed and balanced. 3/10

142 By AXCELACCEL 2007-11-21

ow IMBALANCENESS

143 By 1and12 2007-11-30

NICE!!!!!! can you make more

144 By KrayZspYne 2007-12-04

... wow, im gonna say that i accept the duel wield, i wouldv said ult until i looked at the cd lawlz! also wat ppl say about this hero idea is so true.... 8 king leorics basically with eye of skadi i'd say and hand of midas lawlz oh ya and the cranium basher lawlz, if someone had to use this hero, it would require absolutly no skill even for a first time not knowing wat to do wat heros do and anything else about the game person, and that person could pwn even basshunter (the greatest unbeatable dotA player on earth) with 4 other uber pros including myself lawlz, i love wat zypher said its funny haha in my opinion it would go like this in a game (get Ready) yellow has chosen dwarven sniper, blue has randomed spirit breaker, orange has randomed nerubian assassin,purple has randomed the bone fletcher, green has chosen the axe, and then other team looks at heroes right? (pause) grey has chosen Undead Paladin captain---(big pause) blue: .......... blue spirit breaker has left the game Yellow dwarven sniper has left the game orange nerubian assassin has left the game green the axe has left the game purple...... nubs purple bone clinkz has left the game grey ...? o well i won by default i guess 5v1 hahhaa i'm so pro at this game, i think i'll play again, i hate arem tho (wat does arem mean?) Grey undead paladin captain has left game.... save replay, next day he shows his buddie lawlz, wow i'm bored now
ima go to sleep zZz for all u guys that love my little speech i havnt made a hero yet and dont plan to, only cuz dotA is good where it is and should be left alone, o and my point? this hero was made by a big time loser of dotA that probly has a score of someting like..... 1-27583 lawlz

145 By ntxov 2007-12-12

corruption too good
needs to reduce creeps
or give it like 400 mana cost

146 By duro†ar™ 2007-12-13

400 mana cost

don't u think that's too . . . . .

little?

147 By adzyra19 2007-12-17

This is my first time to send a comment...

but dude u created a monster for the game not a hero...

all of us here is ryt about one thing...

THIS MOTHERF*CKER IS WAY TOO IMBA TO EVEN GET APPROVED HERE!!!!

u got the stuff...

but u have to be a less creative to nerf this MOTHERF*CKER!

WOOO.... I've seen all the hero ideas here but...

I'VE NEVER ENCOUNTERED A HERO AS INSANE AS THIS ONE!!!

HAHAHAHA!!!

148 By lanceler15 2007-12-23

you first skill is like your last skill too powerful

149 By KrayZspYne 2008-01-09

more like : malark the God of DotA haha second posts are always fun

150 By tiberiumlord 2008-01-10

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151 By lolzcannon1 2008-01-15

8 dead paladins attacking one hero at the same time = 80% chance of bash. This hero is WAY too imba. The cooldown has to be like 60 or something, because 20 is WAY too short. Or way too spammable. The ult is a copy of brood mothers and dual wield is a rigged frostmourne.

152 By eleison007 2008-01-16

U GUYS STOP INSULT THIS HERO OK!!! IF U THINK THIS IS IMBA THEN HELP THE CREATOR FIX IT, AND WHY DON'T U GUYS TRY TO MAKE ONE IF U THINK U ARE SO GREAT?? ALL U CAN SAY IS "IMBA IMBA IMBA" ANYWAY THIS IS A COOL HERO ^^ JUST NEED FIX HERE AND THERE

153 By suckermiller 2008-02-03

Statgain and start armor are too hard. reduce the armor to 2 or max 3. The gain should be between 6 and 6.5 in summary.

1. skill - Corrupted courage
too imba. in fact: too much damage, too much bash and too small cooldown.
2. skill - dark mind
yes, average, not too imba in my opinion. but its almost the same like holy knights persuation
3. skill - dual whield
o.O 35% extra atkspd pwns like hell. lower it, and it it would be fine =)
4. skill - Rage of the undead
just a copy of broodmothers ulti. think about a new please. just buy items for a nice mana regen and you could spam this, and spammed ulti like this one always mean: IMBA. no further comment

all in all in is a nice idea but pls, PLS, PLEASE FIX IT !!

i just want to help

154 By fireinfernal67 2008-02-21

COOL THIS IS MY FAVORITE HERO IDEA!!!

155 By sfjohnny 2008-02-21

way to imba!!! fix it!

156 By Lilevil 2008-02-23

TOO RIGGID >>>>.

157 By WakeUpTimeToDie 2008-02-23

IMBA u DUMB

158 By holyshit98 2008-02-25

whats imba means?
this is hero is way too strong...
but not really ima go use raigor...

159 By Savipra_alexandrio 2008-03-01

You know... I really approve to this hero to be unleash, I let the half of my school to look at this hero and they really approve to this hero. This is anticipated by many however the skills are way to imba you should lessen it.

Many said to lessen the 1st skill for it's way to imba perhaps you could turn it into like skill of Dirge the Undying. The other is change the Dark Mind it sucks though for a decent hero.
Ultimate is great and the Dual Wield.

160 By Savipra_alexandrio 2008-03-01

Well Malark here is really anticipated.

I hope this would be approved to be played. I prefer this rather than Kael the Invoker.

There's no problem with the Ultimate and the Dual Wield. I hope this would be appove ASAP can't wait to see this hero in game

It's fresh to see a dual wielding knight in game right? it's kinda different to give DotA the fresh and never-get-fed-up attitude to it.

161 By Savipra_alexandrio 2008-03-01

I also suggest that Malark is Str and Agi build.

It would give the gamers the easy yet hard control to a knight.

Don't turn him into a build of The Pit Lord. It sucks! STR and INT!! many didn't agree to that! Many prefer to have STR and AGI... I'm just saying the words and suggestions of the greater people who is greatly attached to DotA

162 By ZeusULTiNOW 2008-03-05

im sorry but this is too much like lyranthrope
summons units with various abilitys(lyanthrope wolfs)
and your ulti is taken from the broodmaster(insaitable hungeR) same effect
darkmind is really similar to enchtransses spell just slightly tweeked.
and.. duel wield is like Nerubians Weavers germiniate attack except its chance not cooldown

163 By zeroshinta 2008-04-16

well i could say its strong but can it compare to kazaam well not probebly yet 1st lvl and all ready strong what the heck
1st should be 6th and 6th should be 1st like tinker

164 By Tomas0113 2008-04-26

No need to say he is IMBA.....

why not put Malark on MAXIMUM EXPOSURE on the WORLD'S IMBA HEROES!