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1 By khor1992 2007-05-20 hmmm i do think that this hero is a little bit overpowered 2 By tutu123321 2007-05-20 yerh i agree with khor1992. but nice try ! lol i couldn't do any thing better so yerh. 3 By Bard Man 2007-05-20 Bard Man is here. Now you shall be judged.
4 By VikiFanatic 2007-05-20 I agree wiht Bard Man about the ulti. Do you know how large 1200 diameter units is in the map? you could practically decimate the whole team from the safest distance. That's very unfair as well... O_o
5 By Shimrra_3 2007-05-20 Agree with all of Bard Man's/VikiFanatic's comments. Also, stat gain? 2.2+2.8+2.0=7.0. HELL no. Lower all those by about 0.3/0.4. Then, ICMB is totally screwed up. Even a gigantic mana cost and cooldown wouldn't cover all that, and you've neglected to put in EITHER. What would be really cool is if the ICMB works exactly like the Terran Ghost's ability - down to the laser and 'Nuclear Launch Detected'. But still, NERF! LOTS! 6 By rambol 2007-05-20 Nice hero, combination of nukes and DPS.
7 By Shadowinks 2007-05-20 That ulti is psycho, can destroy towers too easily. 8 By mikorkeza 2007-05-20 Barad Man, the best rater in DS. I love you man!!
9 By Bruno_89 2007-05-20 Hmm quite bad:P A good framework for ICBM whould be Flare that mortar teams fire in WC3. But remove the skill completly or nerf alot. 10 By Shimrra_3 2007-05-21 All of this looks a lot better now. ICBM especially looks good now (hah, because it was the most screwed up!), but it should have about 200/300/400 and 180/150/120 or something - 500 mana at Level 6, I just don't see that happening. Wait for another round of comments and fix again. 11 By jdc214 2007-05-21 thanks for all the comments guys (especially bard man) this is my first hero idea and i love the criticism! 12 By Krobalisk 2007-05-21 oh u got his ult idea from starcraft, where the ghost has to sit and wait for the rocket come down and explode everything, pretty cool...too imba 13 By Bard Man 2007-05-21 Bard Man has returned with more insight. Your trial show begin anew. 14 By Bard Man 2007-05-21 Oh. Forgot one thing 15 By jdc214 2007-05-21 Thanks again for the comments bard man (post when i get your actual approval 16 By hihi123 2007-05-21 Now that the skills have been altered, I think this hero is pretty cool.. although i don't think this hero will fit in well with other heroes. 17 By Shadowinks 2007-05-21 Much better now. HOwever 3 pure damage skills make him uninteresting.......I'll rate now. 6/10 18 By quickbrownfox 2007-05-21 Skill 1: Generic Nuke. As in generic range, damage, mana cost, cooldown. Not even a ministun like lucent beam. the 800 or so range before might have made this better than what it is. You have bad INT anyway, so spamming early game is not very viable.
19 By `UnholY` 2007-05-22 your hero has plain damage skills. make something creative and new 20 By Shimrra_3 2007-05-22 I kinda agree with quickbrownfox and `UnholY`, totally agree with Bard Man - 'Nuclear Launch Detected' would be cool. Hmm I have set my banlist to use that as a taunt... and I've said that bit. Meh. RPG range was alright how it was but I don't care too much, Flamethrower is weak and too much like Breathe Fire, Genetic Enhancements doesn't offer very much, and I kinda agree that ICMB needs some more damage. Pretty much what everyones been saying. I will continue to wait on a rating. 21 By MAJ 2007-05-22 i donīt like this hero at all!! I hate when somebody is trying to do timetravelers with some flamethrowers and stuff!!!! anyway i agree with bard man :S 22 By Pheak 2007-05-22 well this is great!! 23 By jdc214 2007-05-22 I see what you mean quickbrownfox, Unholy, and Shimmra_3. What do you guys think about replacing genetic enhancements with something between a version of tiny's toss (except on self) and phantom lancer's dopplewalk ability? 24 By jdc214 2007-05-22 forgot something in last post: or between a launch and a ww (for chasing or for running, ww is so they dont see where you launch yourself) 25 By x_HavoK_x 2007-05-26 seriously people need to stop making heroes based on video game characters and movie characters....
26 By jdc214 2007-05-26 x_HavoK_x please keep these posts onto this hero and, i did not take this hero from a movie or video game so don't assume. 27 By jdc214 2007-05-26 x_HavoK_x one more thing. This section is for HERO IDEAS that people think would be cool. That means people could put in ideas that were from movies or video games that the think would be cool. 28 By Kodama28 2007-05-26 When did DoTA become Gears of War? 29 By jdc214 2007-05-26 Everyone...comment on what you think about the hero's abilities/what you think about them and NOT ABOUT BEING OUT OF PLACE IN DOTA 30 By jdc214 2007-05-26 Sorry I lied in my 3rd to last post. 2 of the sentences in my story were similar to a video game. 31 By Bard Man 2007-05-26 Bard Man returns again. He sees you've done quite a bit of editing.
32 By 940108 2007-05-27 where can i find this hero? 33 By x_HavoK_x 2007-05-31 dude this is practically like marcus fenix from gears of war.....the chain saw......the icbm.....its all there just switched the name and stuff 34 By elrich 2007-05-31 Ulti To Strong.... 35 By jdc214 2007-06-01 x_HavoK_x this hero has 2 semi-similar things about him and Marcus Fenix from Gears of War...1. Chainsaw was a weapon in Gears of War...2. his first name is Marcus 36 By Bard Man 2007-06-01 This shall be my last message for this great hero. I won't bother listing every skill, since not much has changed.
37 By Ae]Sprite 2007-06-02 His nukes are sorta all rigged. Also, how is he a "Spartan" theres nothing to do with Sparta or Spartans in his summary. 38 By Shimrra_3 2007-06-03 This looks much better than ... ages ago. The Chain Saw and Jetpack abilities are very cool in my opinion. My sole objection is the ICBM now has a five minute cooldown at lvl3, I mean what... anyway, I say 8/10 39 By kidwon 2007-06-04 Well the ult of this hero is pretty much like the one of Zeus, so striking anyone on the map isn't something bad and the hitpoint damage can be fixed so it can become reasonable 40 By jdc214 2007-06-05 Well Kidwan, two things;1. Zeus's ult hits all enemy on the map for 500ish (with scepter). 2. Marcus's ult could only hit 1 person(or none) and can be dodged, remember to to read the notes/framework on it. 41 By tundaga2 2007-06-05 A bit too modern for Warcraft??? 42 By x_HavoK_x 2007-06-05 and the icbm at the end of the game to eliminate the locust is the same
43 By hihi123 2007-06-05 X_HavoK_X - I have played gears of war and what they use at the end is the LIGHTMASS BOMB a ICBM is something in REAL LIFE 44 By bloody_red27 2007-06-06 I like the numbers and the story of the hero. The only thing I don't like is the names, consider changing it to match the whole "Lord of the rings" feel of War Craft. RPG, Jet pack and Intercontinental ballistic missile doesn't really fit. How bout you change it so that it'll sound more mystical or ancient. Just a suggestion. Good job by the way. 45 By jdc214 2007-06-06 Does anyone (excluding X_HavoK_X) think they have any good ideas for new names for his abilities (like blood said for more of a warcraft 3 mythical feel). I'm having a creativity block right now and cant think of anything new. 46 By wourmis 2007-06-11 cool hero especially ulti man......can target dudes even when they r not aware of it like a nuclear assault 47 By x_HavoK_x 2007-06-11 Dude face it he is way to similar to Marcus Fenix. Icbm and lightmass bomb still are way to similar and i agree with Kodama28 "When did DoTA become Gears of War?" Plus the picture is SCREAMING MARCUS FENIX. I would rather see more hero ideas that are much more original than making one what looks completely like a videogame/movie guy 48 By jdc214 2007-06-11 OK guys but X_HavoK_X is really pissing me off...LIGHTMASS BOMB WAS DETONATED ON TOP OF A TRAIN AND DID NOT MOVE AT ALL. AND WTF WHO CARES IF HIS ICON LOOKS SIMILAR TO MARCUS FENIX STFU DUDE AN NEVER POST ON THIS AGAIN. and X_HavoK_X I SUGGEST LOOKING AT A HERO BEFORE SAYING ITS A VIDEO GAME CHARACTER. 49 By jdc214 2007-06-11 AND X_HavoK_X WTF WHO IS KODAMA28?!? 50 By rixpie 2007-06-12 Can you say Gears of War with me ehheh!!
51 By Raxxar 2007-06-12 I'd like to add a little something...
52 By jdc214 2007-06-12 Come on guys! Keep posting on what you think could make it better (excluding X_HavoK_X) and I will update it after another round of comments! (including Raxxar's suggested update). 53 By x_HavoK_x 2007-06-13 look in the comments for kodama28 ull find him and i still agree with him
54 By Raxxar 2007-06-15 Yay! Thanks for taking my suggestion!!!!
55 By signum30 2007-06-16 skills is unbalanced, wow the lvl 3 skill that slows enemy 40% is too mush way powerful 56 By pearboy11 2007-06-16 this isn't the human rifleman... it's the human explosive! 57 By jdc214 2007-06-16 Thanks for finally commenting guys. 58 By boredguy 2007-06-22 WAT IN THE WORLD! this is insane... the skills are too much but the idea is interesting 59 By ryanwk 2007-06-22 i m looking forward for this hero hope they will create it 60 By Tomas0113 2007-06-26 LOVE THE BARDMAN! I Love him Rating some heroes and his good suggestions! Actually, I was been spectating the whole year I looked at it and lol, Bard Man, You're the BEST! 61 By Team Havok 2007-06-27 Ok
62 By Team Havok 2007-08-05 And the light mass bomb did move through the immulsion to get to the center of the locust hive FYI 63 By abovesky 2007-08-23 and he is an agi hero???? 64 By xPwnis 2007-08-27 The story is crappy, not lie it matters, but don't stop reading here, I have nice things to say.
65 By evoblade 2007-08-27 man there is a rifleman dwarven snp why do this hero is good but idea not nice 66 By evoblade 2007-08-27 and range is bad range must too long 500 - 600 ok?
67 By evoblade 2007-08-27 you not look them story not important you look to change your hero 68 By chukdy 2007-10-27 Hey cool story! but stop putting the story in every level because it's too confusing. Hey, his ulti the big one is like zeus's ultimate, it's pretty cool because it also deals damage in aoe. WOW! 69 By Primne07 2007-10-27 70 By AXCELACCEL 2007-11-21 nice hero 71 By Cloudzstrife 2007-12-06 yeah a bit too strong. espeically his ulti cause it would be too strong of a last hit. 72 By The Liberator 2007-12-14 I'm new to half of this, but how about (as everyone is basically saying) swap "The Big One" with a flare rocket.
73 By gotime129 2007-12-24 lol the builds you showed are almost impossible to get late game, but good hero 74 By BadgerKW 2008-01-11 Actually the ulti is not as imba as every1 thinks cause it has a 300 second cd at lvl 3 and if u miss it..well u gotta wait a LONG time to use it again. 75 By tiberiumlord 2008-01-30 u have such long explanations! 76 By shadowee189 2008-02-20 whoa, very powerful and imbalanced, but i also liked the hero idea 77 By ParaZito 2008-03-17 can you please add more range for this hero(Range=600) T.Y. 78 By xryllpth 2008-04-27 where is your ally TINKER??!!! 79 By kyo_fire94 2008-07-01 will its all up to us... but for me?! well kinda interestin chars... keep it up... nice2x |
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These guys will be very helpful since you do not have any slowing spells or chance on hits (not counting items). 



















All of these heroes have slowing abilities or slow people on their attacks which would help you chase and kill heroes since you have no slowing/disables yourself.








to get more hits and slow them more.
skills are way too devasting but i like the hero idea